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Chelsea's work tickle (M/F)

TiCKleMaN87

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INTRO: Just a character description:

David: 5'10''. brown hair, muscular build.
Chelsea: 5;7'', blonde hair, skinny (about 120lbs.)


Chelsea Henrikson was a supervisor at her local coffee shop. One morning, she needed coin rollers The box was kept on a high shelf in the staff room so Chelsea had to jump on a chair and reach above he head. AS she was doing this David Leonard, one of the bakers, came into the room. He noticed Chelsea, snuck in behind her reached up and gave her ribs & sides a quick tickle. Chelsea screamed, giggled and jumped, dropping the box, which David was able to catch. Chelsea jumped off the chair with a huge grin on her face, grabbed the box and left. Later, when David got off shift he went into the staff room, he noticed Chelsea was on her break. AS David entered, Chelsea stretched. David took this as a sign and began to tickle Chelsea’s sides. She was very ticklish and burst into laughter.

“AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OH STAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP! HEHEHAHAHAHAHAHA! IT TICKLES! HEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” David continued to squeeze & tickle Chelsea’s sides, making Chelsea squirm around but she didn’t put her arms down.

“NOOOOOOOO! HEHEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! PLEHEHEHEHEHEHESE! HEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! NO MORE! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Then David ran his fingers up into Chelsea’s armpits. Chelsea immediately pulled her arms down to top the tickling there.

“NAHAHAHAT THEHEHEHEHEHRE! HEHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! STAHAHAHAHAHAP! HEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! TICKLES! HEHAHAHAHAHAHA!” David went back down and resumed squeezing Chelsea’s side’s making her jump & giggle.

“HEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! DOHOHOHOHOHOHOHON’T! HEEHAHAHAHAHAHA! STAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP! HEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Then David started to tickle Chelsea’s belly. She just stayed there and took it.

“HEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! PLEHEHEHEHEHEHESE! HEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! NO MORE! HEHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” David continued to dig hiss fingers into Chelsea’s ticklish tummy. He could tell that she was enjoying this.

“NOOOOOOOOO! HEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! STAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP! HEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! NO MORE! HEHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Then David unbuttoned Chelsea’s blouse so he could tickle her bare belly. This made Chelsea laugh harder but she was still enjoying the tickling.

“DOHOOHOHOHOHOHOHON’T! HEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! PLEHEHEHEHESE! HEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” David found that Chelsea was very ticklish right beside her navel so he dug in there as hard as she could, making Chelsea laugh and scream.

“AAAAAHHHHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA! STAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAP! AAAAHHHHHHEHAHAHAHAHA! NO MORE! AAAHHHHHHEHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA” David was having fun torturing Chelsea in this spot so he continued to do it.

“PLEHEHEHEHEHEHEHSE! NOT THAHAHAHAHAT! HEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! NO MORE! HEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Then David stuck his finger into Chelsea’s belly button and began to tickle it. This made Chelsea laugh so hard, no sound was produced.

“AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” David continued to tickle Chelsea’s belly button making her squeal.

“EEEEEK! HEHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! STAHAHAHAHAP! EEEEK! HEHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! GONNA PEHEHEHEEEE! HEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Davis topped tickling Chelsea for a second, so she could catch her breath.

“Want some more?” David asked his cute co-worker. Chelsea nodded and David began to spider tickle her tummy again, making her laugh and squirm again.

“HEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OH IT TICKLES! HEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! PLEHEHEHEHEHEHESE! HEHEAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” David then started to squeeze Chelsea’s sdies once more, making her jump.

“AAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! THAT REALY TICKLES! HEHAHAHAHAHAHA! NO MORE! HEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Then David continued to tickle Chelsea’s sides but started to blow raspberries on her bally button, making Chelsea laugh silently again.

“AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Chelsea loved the feeling of the raspberries and kept laughing happily.

“HEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! VERT TICKLY! HEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! MORE! HEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!” Then, Chelsea’s timer went off, stopping the little tickling session. David stopped tickling Chelsea who did her shirt up again. “We should do this again.” Chelsea mentioned with a smile as she headed out front. David gave her one more quick tickle to get her giggling before she went out front and David went home.

PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK!!!!
 
Great story. I love to see stories devoted to belly tickling. I will be the first person to encourage yhou to write a part two for this tale.
 
bellytickler200 said:
Great story. I love to see stories devoted to belly tickling. I will be the first person to encourage yhou to write a part two for this tale.

Amen Amen, awesome story dude :)
 
The formatting is decent, but there's nothing particularly interesting about this story. There's one paragraph of exposition, and then about a page of generic interchangeable tickling. Also, the caps lock "HAHAHA" (etc) is pretty bland.

You should try more descriptive writing with developed characters and a plot.
 
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