View Full Version : Climax: Polaris vs Jean, page 8.
tyklfynd
07-07-2007, 03:19 AM
...Totally broken, begging for release, Jean finally gets what she has been craving all night. The incessant tickling, gentle stroking of her genitals, teasing of her nipples, and the soft strokes of the feathers on her soles have all teased her up to a point of utterly unbearable sexual tension. The release is indescribable. She screams and begs at the top of her lungs. Polaris stimulates and tickles every sensitive, ticklish, and errogenous zone on her helpless nude body. And Jean lets the delicious waves of orgasmic ecstacy flash through her sweat drenched body. Her toes curl, muscles twitch, back arches, and hips thrust into the twin vibes as they flood her nerve endings with the desparately needed stimulation.
Jean blacks out. And Polaris gently carries her limp body to the soft silk featherbed she has prepared for her. Then she slips into Spiral's room, looks down oh her sleeping face lovingly, and slips the golden bands on her arms and legs. "Wakie wakie gorgeous.... your next!"
-tyklfynd
Whew!! Last page!!! so nice to be done with it. Hope you all liked it. I had tons of fun doing it.
here is a link to page 7.
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?t=107672
milagros317
07-07-2007, 11:22 AM
Great series and fabulous climax!!!!! :yowzer: :yowzer: :yowzer:
What can I say, tyklfynd? You are incredibly talented, and I don't contest any of the superlative comments you're receiving. This series was imaginative, beautifully drawn, and (at least for those open to sexual content) probably universally appealing. Congratulations.
LindyHopper
07-08-2007, 05:41 AM
Oh my God, that is so hot! :firedevil
I think it incorporates just the right amount of exaggeration into what is an absolutely thrilling scenario to imagine. :cool2: Awesome! :bowing:
Redmage
07-08-2007, 03:50 PM
Oh my God, that is so hot! :firedevil
I think it incorporates just the right amount of exaggeration into what is an absolutely thrilling scenario to imagine. :cool2: Awesome! :bowing:Exaggeration?
Well, OK maybe the red hair and the floating. Other than that...
tyklfynd
07-09-2007, 01:38 AM
thanks coda!
and lindyhopper, i love ya!! *big hug*
redmage: hmm, I also wondered what she felt was exaggerated. Do you find the red hair to be too red? I guess the position of her body is a bit over the top; but still anatomically correct I hope ( i have the ref photos; I did bubble the but a bit, and slightly enlarge the breasts from the ref photo. and reposition the legs and arms. )
Redmage
07-09-2007, 03:17 AM
redmage: hmm, I also wondered what she felt was exaggerated. Do you find the red hair to be too red? I guess the position of her body is a bit over the top; but still anatomically correct I hope ( i have the ref photos; I did bubble the but a bit, and slightly enlarge the breasts from the ref photo. and reposition the legs and arms. )Well, I believe your model's hair is black and shorter. At least, that's the lady that I think of when I look at that pic.
Other than that I think you captured her pretty well.
Tenebrae
07-09-2007, 05:29 PM
This was just Perfect !!!
Maybe you will bring us a sequel ?
Please don't stop now :bowing: You shine among the great !
Red : This might sound awfully Frenchy to you but... I love your signature, the first two lines ;)
LindyHopper
07-17-2007, 05:07 AM
and lindyhopper, i love ya!! *big hug* Right back at 'cha! :Kiss2:
redmage: hmm, I also wondered what she felt was exaggerated. Do you find the red hair to be too red? I guess the position of her body is a bit over the top; but still anatomically correct I hope ( i have the ref photos; I did bubble the but a bit, and slightly enlarge the breasts from the ref photo. and reposition the legs and arms. ) It was the posture I was referring to as exaggeration. It doesn't look like a particularly comfortable position for having an orgasm! :D But at the same time, the arching is evocative of that intense pleasure, and so enhanced the impact of the image. So what I was saying was, the departure from literalness made a more powerful piece of art. :)
Makes me think I should dye my hair and start working out... :p
eros747t
07-28-2007, 11:55 AM
Thanks for that lovely piece of a dream.... you are very talented.... Eros
huskys
07-31-2007, 08:42 AM
Fantastic Series!!!
Well done!!! :bouncybou :couch: :bouncybou
SlaveTickler
08-20-2007, 06:21 PM
Great work, I hope too see Storm up soon. I hope you are using Comic Book storm and not movie Storm. Don't get me wrong, I like Hallie Berry, but Storm is suposed to be tall and Amazonian like. Well take care :)
thewindowguy64
05-18-2008, 05:44 AM
So is there a payback ? Just curious, wonderful set btw!!
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