Fascinating,.....
--- Very compelling imagery and language,......... It's nice to see something this different. How long a piece is it projected to be? Oh, and don't worry about the tickling content,...... in a good tickling story, the story is always more important than the tickling,.... craftsmanship and concept are what make a good story,.. plus giving your readers a little credit. Descriptions of tickling,... unless VERY unique,... get old in a hurry. But the plot, theme and story background which generate the tickling action are what a good reader most enjoys. You're off to a great start.