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I liked it, nice descriptions of setting. Would be nice, if you continued the story.
 
Thank you, I think I might, as I seem to have done a terrible thing and not included as much tickling as I would have liked. I may just edit this one, but I haven't decided yet.
 
Fascinating,.....

--- Very compelling imagery and language,......... It's nice to see something this different. How long a piece is it projected to be? Oh, and don't worry about the tickling content,...... in a good tickling story, the story is always more important than the tickling,.... craftsmanship and concept are what make a good story,.. plus giving your readers a little credit. Descriptions of tickling,... unless VERY unique,... get old in a hurry. But the plot, theme and story background which generate the tickling action are what a good reader most enjoys. You're off to a great start.
 
Thank you! I find that too about the tickling description, theres only so much you can do without repeating yourself. I've tried to avoid the word tickle in there at all as well just to make it more interesting. I don't like long streams of hahahahahaha either, so I don't put that in either. I'm not sure how long it's going to be, I kind of like my things to be about that length, so I may just write another story, maybe with Esmerelda, maybe with different characters, but I doubt it will immediately follow on...
 
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