JJB
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I haven't posted in awhile in here, but I'm back now. Anyway... nobody cares. ;o)
I've been wanting to post in over a week about how much I've enjoyed your stories SoleTK. This is what I Love about tickling stories... the TICKLE-TORTURE. Your details and sadistic mind make the stories very enjoyable to me, and I'm looking forward to seeing what stories you come up with next.
However, I do have suggestions for you. In a few of your stories, you sort of gave away the scene and made it become less realistic... perhaps too detailed? When a various character is going to be tickle-TORTURED, and they realize it, it sort of made it a little bit fake when the line was something along the line of "Oh please don't tickle me below my toes with a feather... please DO NOT nibble and lick right underneath the balls of me feet! That's HORRIBLE!" There were just a couple of lines like that where it appeared a little too obvious, at least to me.
Anyway, SoleTK... it's just my suggestion here.
I Loved those stories and look forward to more. You have an "A" from me, and have a great mind There are TICKLING stories... there are TICKLE-TORTURE stories... and there are those select few written with a sadistic side where we ALMOST feel sorry for the characters being Tickle-tortured!
Key word..... ALMOST!
Yours are the latter, so keep up the GREAT work, and I'm sorry it took me so long to comment. It's life... and chaos. Enjoy it!
IInX,
N.A. Rebel Romeo
I've been wanting to post in over a week about how much I've enjoyed your stories SoleTK. This is what I Love about tickling stories... the TICKLE-TORTURE. Your details and sadistic mind make the stories very enjoyable to me, and I'm looking forward to seeing what stories you come up with next.
However, I do have suggestions for you. In a few of your stories, you sort of gave away the scene and made it become less realistic... perhaps too detailed? When a various character is going to be tickle-TORTURED, and they realize it, it sort of made it a little bit fake when the line was something along the line of "Oh please don't tickle me below my toes with a feather... please DO NOT nibble and lick right underneath the balls of me feet! That's HORRIBLE!" There were just a couple of lines like that where it appeared a little too obvious, at least to me.
Anyway, SoleTK... it's just my suggestion here.
I Loved those stories and look forward to more. You have an "A" from me, and have a great mind There are TICKLING stories... there are TICKLE-TORTURE stories... and there are those select few written with a sadistic side where we ALMOST feel sorry for the characters being Tickle-tortured!
Key word..... ALMOST!
Yours are the latter, so keep up the GREAT work, and I'm sorry it took me so long to comment. It's life... and chaos. Enjoy it!
IInX,
N.A. Rebel Romeo