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T TicklishMike TMF Poster Joined Aug 18, 2002 Messages 127 Points 0 Dec 26, 2007 #1 Edit Last edited: Sep 28, 2008
S suikoden 4th Level Red Feather Joined May 20, 2001 Messages 1,772 Points 38 Dec 26, 2007 #2 Nice effort man.
I icetickler TMF Regular Joined May 23, 2001 Messages 194 Points 0 Dec 26, 2007 #3 You should carry on writing..that was a great first effort!!
T TicklishMike TMF Poster Joined Aug 18, 2002 Messages 127 Points 0 Dec 27, 2007 #4 Thanks guys, means a lot.
R Rachel-f/f Registered User Joined Mar 7, 2003 Messages 3 Points 0 Jan 9, 2008 #5 Great Story. Try a F/F One in that perspective!
T TicklishMike TMF Poster Joined Aug 18, 2002 Messages 127 Points 0 Feb 4, 2008 #6 I'll give it some thought Rachel, Thanks.
T TicklishMike TMF Poster Joined Aug 18, 2002 Messages 127 Points 0 Mar 23, 2008 #7 I am starting a new one tonight i think, maybe a sequel so i will bump it.
D DimpleToes 2nd Level Indigo Feather Joined Mar 23, 2007 Messages 6,407 Points 0 Mar 25, 2008 #8 good one for a first story