HoustonTickler
03-14-2008, 03:03 PM
Here's an erotic tickling situation/story that I have been thinking about for quite some time now. I think it would make a great short film (if done right.. not with this cheesy porn film quality). The best thing about this story is that it works either for a m/f or m/m situation. I call it..
"The Demoralized Salesman."
Jim is having a bad day. Jim is a struggling salesman in a very competitive sales environment that markets and sales air purifiers. During a high level meeting, Jim is being called on the rug in front of his peers and upper management about his lack of sales. Everyone in the conference room is looking at him and Jim can feel this. When asked to explain to management why they should keep him employed there, Jim can muster up no answer.
His day gets worse. On his way home and walking to his car, Jim in deep thought did not see the traffic light turn red and almost gets hits by a passing motorist. He then hears someone yell, "Look what you are doing you idiot!" as a bird passes above him and plants a solid, white stain on his black suit. Everything that could go wrong is happening to poor Jim today. Jim enters his dark apartment with his tie half on and half off. He is totally demoralized by the day's events.
As he swings open his apartment door, he is mumbling the entire way. "God, can it get any worse?" He let's out a big sigh and places his head against the doorway in defeat.
Suddenly, his eyes light up. He straightens up a bit. As he feels his lifeless body energize, an auro of excitement twinkles in his eyes. Jim lets out a deep chuckle. Because, you see, Jim is not alone in his apartment. Someone else is watching Jim through the entry of Jim's bedroom. This someone else has a frightened look on their face. This someone else is breathing heavily now. This someone else just so happens to be tied spread-eagle in a most elaborate bondage technique that utilizes rope, spreader bars and some suspension tactics. This someone else is also wearing a bright red ball gag.
This someone else is about to have a worse day than Jim!
Jim mumbles, "Oh, but it's about to get much.. much better."
Jim walks slowly into the bedroom. The tied up woman/man is struggling and starts yanking at her/his ropes to try and get free. Jim says slowly, "You aren't ticklish.. are you?" As the door closes the eyes of the bound up girl/guy become wide. The door shuts and you can hear the lock from inside activate. (At this point you don't get to see anything but the wrong side of the door, but you do hear the screams of ticklish terror).
"The Demoralized Salesman."
Jim is having a bad day. Jim is a struggling salesman in a very competitive sales environment that markets and sales air purifiers. During a high level meeting, Jim is being called on the rug in front of his peers and upper management about his lack of sales. Everyone in the conference room is looking at him and Jim can feel this. When asked to explain to management why they should keep him employed there, Jim can muster up no answer.
His day gets worse. On his way home and walking to his car, Jim in deep thought did not see the traffic light turn red and almost gets hits by a passing motorist. He then hears someone yell, "Look what you are doing you idiot!" as a bird passes above him and plants a solid, white stain on his black suit. Everything that could go wrong is happening to poor Jim today. Jim enters his dark apartment with his tie half on and half off. He is totally demoralized by the day's events.
As he swings open his apartment door, he is mumbling the entire way. "God, can it get any worse?" He let's out a big sigh and places his head against the doorway in defeat.
Suddenly, his eyes light up. He straightens up a bit. As he feels his lifeless body energize, an auro of excitement twinkles in his eyes. Jim lets out a deep chuckle. Because, you see, Jim is not alone in his apartment. Someone else is watching Jim through the entry of Jim's bedroom. This someone else has a frightened look on their face. This someone else is breathing heavily now. This someone else just so happens to be tied spread-eagle in a most elaborate bondage technique that utilizes rope, spreader bars and some suspension tactics. This someone else is also wearing a bright red ball gag.
This someone else is about to have a worse day than Jim!
Jim mumbles, "Oh, but it's about to get much.. much better."
Jim walks slowly into the bedroom. The tied up woman/man is struggling and starts yanking at her/his ropes to try and get free. Jim says slowly, "You aren't ticklish.. are you?" As the door closes the eyes of the bound up girl/guy become wide. The door shuts and you can hear the lock from inside activate. (At this point you don't get to see anything but the wrong side of the door, but you do hear the screams of ticklish terror).