F/F story sequel. F/F

I have also reconsidered this story as well. As I said for the last one...I feel like its far too contrived, and that there are authors who just do what I do better. The more I think about the stories I wrote the more silly I find them...so I've decided to move on. There's just something wrong with what I wrote and while I got some good feed back and am appreciative I just don't feel confident in the quality of the work.

Sorry for the trouble.

smakaro said:

"This sounds like a trap," Aea said.
"It probably is," Cee said.
Aea sighed.
"Do you agree?" Cee asked.
"I do..." Aea said weakly.

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My fav part!

Everything happened a bit fast in this one but both parts are a fun read. I like 'em.

Marquis De Sade said:

My fav part!

Everything happened a bit fast in this one but both parts are a fun read. I like 'em.

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Thanks!

On my deviantart account I actually spread it out over 4 parts, but wanted to keep things simple here.

I like to build suspense too. But I also didn't want to keep from the revenge part for too long.

smakaro said:

Thanks!

On my deviantart account I actually spread it out over 4 parts, but wanted to keep things simple here.

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Simple? Nah. Spread it out for as long as you want here. Some of the best stories here are nice, long and detailed ones: some of jj82277's, suikoden's...

Then again, there are some awesome short ones as well.