I have also reconsidered this story as well. As I said for the last one...I feel like its far too contrived, and that there are authors who just do what I do better. The more I think about the stories I wrote the more silly I find them...so I've decided to move on. There's just something wrong with what I wrote and while I got some good feed back and am appreciative I just don't feel confident in the quality of the work.
Sorry for the trouble.
Sorry for the trouble.
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