sorry guys gonna re do this one
S syl666 Registered User Joined Feb 14, 2006 Messages 4 Points 0 May 28, 2008 #1 sorry guys gonna re do this one Last edited: May 29, 2008
NavelTickler75 4th Level Yellow Feather Joined Dec 29, 2006 Messages 3,768 Points 0 May 28, 2008 #2 interesting but you might want to watch the grammer mistakes. Also, run-on paragraphs are hard to read, but good start.
interesting but you might want to watch the grammer mistakes. Also, run-on paragraphs are hard to read, but good start.