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Fury.

CrystalLight

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Hunger hits again.
Barreling through my body like a freight train.
You stand before me.
Pressing, clutching, trapping.
My breathing hitches, your eyes flash shades of red.
Don't let me go. I will fall without your support.
Guide me.

Hunger hits deep.
Breath hot in my ear, I can't move my arms.
Pulling me down.
I'm falling.
Lording over me, I'm fighting.
Growl at me, bare your teeth.
Shed your skin, release the beast.

Hunger is strength.
Let me go.
Pull me in.
Hands roaming, laughter building.
A melodic symphony of sensation and sound.
Flailing limbs, hold on tight.
Control your form, your breaking free.

Hunger is weakness.
Whimpering, quivering, pleading.
Knock down my walls, I'm falling.
Restraint with care, your feeding.
Feast on me, I'm not going easy.
Sneered grin, your pulling me in.

Hunger realized.
Shock me, I'm begging.
Effortless touch.
I'll tell you anything.
Shifting, changing, transforming.
Thick air, my scent is yours.

Hunger controls.
Reactions, fluid movements.
Thrashing, let me dance for you.
Rocking hips, ragged breath.
Torment me.
Cadence, tone, command.
I hear you.

Hunger is passion.
Soaking my core, arching forward.
Strip away my layers, expose me.
Your eyes are zeroing in, finding your targets.
Open, vulnerable.
I am yours.

Hunger feeds.
Kissing, caressing, tormenting.
Gasping, giggling, writhing.
Entering, gliding, steering.
Lock me to you, complete the hunt.
Limbs entwining, my bonds fall away.
Murmuring words, envelope my soul.

Hunger releases.
Howling, nails digging.
Nuzzling, nibbling, heaving breath.
Collapse backwards, take me with you.
Curling form, protection encompassing.
Words unspoken, there is no need.
Realization, acknowledge you.

Hunger is animal.
Dominant, strength.
Power, control.
Primal, raw.

Hunger is you.

Prey on me.
 
There are no words.

You know exactly where that hit me and moved me. Thank you.
 
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Two parts of one Whole?

There are no words.

You know exactly where that hit me and moved me. Thank you.

I am glad that I read this one directly after reading Dave's the Hunger! One question, who inspried whom?

Crystal, I am changing my duo of favorite writers to a trio!

I am CrystalLight, Dave2112, and the Marquis De Sade's biggest fan! :bowing:

MD
 
I'm now starvin' darlin', come here! :Kiss2: Scrumptious writing!

Thanks, honey. :redheart:

I am glad that I read this one directly after reading Dave's the Hunger! One question, who inspried whom?

Crystal, I am changing my duo of favorite writers to a trio!

I am CrystalLight, Dave2112, and the Marquis De Sade's biggest fan! :bowing:

MD

Thanks, man! I'm honored. :)

As per the stories..It was kind of an unspoken Collaboration. :triangle:

There are no words.

You know exactly where that hit me and moved me. Thank you.

It can't rain all the time. :redheart:

...that was...




:firedevil



Thanks.. heh. :D
 
Usually I don't like prose poetry, but this exceeds the emotional power of even your best prose narratives. Minimalist and yet extremely powerful, this is definitely your best thus far.
 
Usually I don't like prose poetry, but this exceeds the emotional power of even your best prose narratives. Minimalist and yet extremely powerful, this is definitely your best thus far.

That means a lot comin' from you, man.

Thank You.
 
"Mother is the name for God on the lips and hearts of all children." Just had to get my own Crow quote in there. Awesome movie. One of my all-time favorites. As for you, Crystal, that was damn good. Very moving. It's the first time I've read anything that you've written. I look forward to more. :)
 
You have some real talent there Crystal.
Thanks for sharing it with us on the forums.

Oh, and ........................ keep it coming!!! :upsidedow :dog:
 
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