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Love Does Not Play Nice (Dave2112 and CrystalLight; Part Two)

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Bloody hell. Fine work!

Dave - I don't know what stopped you writing for a while but I am glad you are back doing it. In Crystal you have found a fine writing partner. Crystal - you are something! I am not quite sure what, but you are definitely something.

I hope you are two are going to write some more stuff together. I'd definitely read it. Once I get over this one of course. ;)
 
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Holy hell...

I have been a silent worshipper of CrystalLight since I first saw her picture as the potential best ticklee ever born and Dave's writing is a veneration of the English language... put the two together and...

Holy hell.

This is probably the single best piece of tickling fiction that I have ever read.
 
I am not even going to try to wait for my heart to slow this time. This is undoubtly one of the greatest pieces that I have ever read anywhere, and I have read a lot of books and stories in my fifty-one years of life. This story of two souls coming together... What can I say? Any words that I might write would be totally inadequate!

Dave and Crystal, please do not let this be the only work you give us. That would be a crime against the universe! Just as Damien and Jade found that they completed each other. Damn, that sounds like a movie line! it seems that you two have brought magic out from each other! Someday you should write the story of the writing of this story! I, for one, would love to read it to see the inner workings of this collaboration!

Also, I see why the title is Love Does Not Play Nice. If love did play nice, couples like Damien and Jade would not have to wait so long or go though somuch to find each other!

Next.....
 
I've sent a pm to you both, so you already know how I feel about the story, but I'll comment here for those debating whether to take the time to read the whole thing. If you haven't read it, do so. Don't skim through it because it's long. Wait until you have time to read it all slowly.

I've read thousands of stories over the years and this is the single best piece of erotic fiction ever penned. It was simply the story every other story here will be judged against from now on. Period. Congrats to you both.
 
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I've sent a pm to you both, so you already know how I feel about the story, but I'll comment here for those debating whether to take the time to read the whole thing. If you haven't read it, do so. Don't skim through it because it's long. Wait until you have time to read it all slowly.

I've read thousands of stories over the years and this is the single best piece of erotic fiction ever penned. It was simply the story every other story here will be judged against from now on. Period. Congrats to you both.
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i concur
 
OMG.. this was the best story I have ever read... so sensual and errotic. I love it that is was written in the two parties as if you were reading the private thoughts of the two individuals.

HUGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSs to the both of you..


HUGSSSSSS/Lisa
 


Creepy.

And now onto the story: For me, personally, I don't know which was hotter - all the tickling or the mental everything that went on in either character's heads that you, very thankfully, allowed us to listen in on. This was private. This was fun. Passionate. Real. Can't say enough about this piece.

This was fantastic guys. Really, really great. Needs to be put together to form one long beautiful piece. Anyone who can't sit and read the whole thing, that's your loss. This is an amazing piece of work.

Thanks for giving this to us.

Dave, you must already know you're an incredible writer.
Crystal, this was something new from you and I hope we see more of it.

Thanks again.
 
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