wishfoot88
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this is my 4th story.
evil dave gave me the idea
hope you like it
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE leave a comment
if enough people like it then i shall continue.
thanks
Against all instincts
Jade was a low level worker in a big company. She was about 5”9, long brown hair, blue eyes, size 9 feet and slim. She considered herself a very pure person.
But, she had a weakness for gambling.
She was such a terrible gambler that no casino in town would accept her.
All except one. The town had a strong Mafia influence.
They called themselves “the non-lethal torturers”. Anyone who crossed them faced the ultimate torture. Tickling.
The Mafia knew the entire town's tickle spots and so had them all in its grasp.
And they were the people who liked to gamble with jade.
She gambled with them almost nightly. She couldn't stop herself.
All it took was one night to change her life.
She arrived at the hidden base of the non-lethal torturers. She pushed the doors open and took in the familiar sight.
The room was full of people being tickled.
There were people being tickled in stocks, socks, racks, coffins. Every type of restraint was here. She walked through all the tortured people. She never looked at them for fear that she might take pity, help them and fall victim to the torture. But this time she took a good long look. There was a man having his feet licked by goats, a woman having her knees squeezed, a man having is arm pits tickled with feathers, another man having his ribs poked and the worse one of all. There was a man stripped naked and tied spread-eagle to a bed. There were 21 people tickling him at once.
2 to each foot
2 to each knee
2 to each arm pit
4 to his belly
4 to his ribs
2 to each thigh
2 to each nipple
2 to his neck
and 1 person heading for his crotch. Jade looked away as she heard the man scream. She pushed through another set of doors and found herself in a dark room with a poker table in the middle with 5 men sitting around it. She went and sat in the last seat.
The one on her right, Capelli, leaned over and said, “better not loose. Your out of money as it is, loose any more of our money and it will be a week in the torture hall.
“fuck you Capelli! I wont loose again.” she said bravely.
Before Capelli could answer the dealer stood up.
“the games black jack. Remember the rules and lets play.” he said
he dealt the cards.
Jade was in luck. She had a king and a queen. She was almost guaranteed to win.
But that little voice in her head egged her on. She was concentrating so hard on whether or not to stick when it was suddenly her go.
“jade?” said the dealer
she panicked “hit me!” she said, she realised her mistake at once and tried not to let it show.
She got the 9 of diamonds, she was bust.
When it came to revealing the cards all the mob bosses laughed at her misfortune.
“you know what that means don't you jade?” said Capelli evily.
“NO!!! I can get the money!!” she said in a panic.
“you better, or else it'll be 2 weeks!” laughed Capelli.
“dont worry I'll get it” she said.
“so why are you still here?” asked Capelli.
Jade got up and walked to the door.
“you got 48 hours, if you try to run away then we will find you and it'll be a year in the hall!” said Capelli threateningly.
Jade had no idea how she was going to get over $10,000 in 48 hours.
She walked down the hall and out the door. She drove home and started looking in the classified section of the newspaper. She was flat broke. She had no way of getting that money. And she knew that she couldn't stand 2 weeks in the torture hall.
Then an ad caught her eye.
Need some extra cash?
Think you have high endurance?
Then come down to the state fair to test yourself.
How long can you stand to be tickled.
1 minutes foot tickling equals $1000!
it couldn't he simpler.
No restraints just your determination!
Jade thought for a while. She had no other way of getting the money, and besides 10 minutes of tickling is not as bad as 2 weeks. It was settled.
The next day she drove down to the state fair and found the endurance test.
“excuse me?” she said to the boss of the test.
“ah! A new victim! Want to try yourself at the endurance?” he asked.
“er yes, what actually happens?”
“well, you go through there and take your shoes and socks off. You sit in the recliner with your feet up and our master tickler comes in. he tickles your bare feet, and if you keep your feet completely still for long enough then you get the money! Its that simple” he said
“OK..........I'll do it” she said.
She walked through the door and down the hall. She entered a little room with a recliner in it and a masked man. She sat on the chair and took off her shoes and socks.
The man looked at her but didn't speak. He merely pulled on a lever and the chair reclined.
With her feet in the air she felt very vulnerable. The man pulled a stool to the foot of the chair.
She felt his gaze on her soles.
Then it started.
One finger down each sole.
It took all her effort not to pull her feet away. It was already too much.
She looked to the left where there was a big clock timing the tickling.
It had only been 10 seconds since the start and she was already on the edge.
Then he switched his technique.
He was spider tickling all over her soles. She started giggling. She couldn't stop. The man started exploring the feet in front of him. He went round the heels, up the arches, in between the toes and down the soles. Jade was now laughing uncontrollably. It was already too much. She looked at the clock. 1Min 25 sec. Not bad, she thought, only 8 and a half more to go.
Then the man stopped. He picked up 2 feathers and lightly stroked both feet with them. Now she had such a horrible urge to move her feet. It was now a physical effort, not a conscious thought, to keep her feet still.
The feathers were reacting with her nerve endings in such a terrible way.
He continued this technique for a while then stopped. Jade was so relieved. She looked at the clock.
5 mins 49 secs. It was a miracle that she had gone that long. Then another masked man entered the room. They both took one foot each and stroked them with both hands. Jade squealed with laughter.
They kept this up with expert rhythm. Then they switched to spider tickling. She looked at the clock to try to block the tickling out. 7Min. 3 more. She was trying so hard not to move her feet. It was maddening. It went against everything her body knew. Her brain was screeming for her to stop this torture. But she couldn't. She needed that money or else this torture would happen again, but it would be worse and longer. They stopped again. She looked down at them and saw something that horrified her. They began to lick and suck her feet. This was worse than the over thing by far. They were finding all her tickle spots. Then they started blowing raspberries on her soles. The rapidly vibrating lips ran all over her feet. She looked at the clock. 9 mins 54 secs. Not long now. But it was too much. She ripped he feet back and rubbed them. The 2 men stood up and shook her hands.
“you did amazingly well!” one of them said.
“thanks. I needed the money” she said still half giggling.
“yeah not bad! What are you going to do with your $9000?”
those words burned in her soul.
She stared at the clock. 9Mins 59secs.
It was impossible.
The bos walked in and ongradulated her.
She was in a daze. She couldn't got through that again. She took the $9000 without talking. She went to the Mafia base. Hoping for mercy. She could easily get $1000 if she had more time.
She walked to the casino area where they were sitting.
“ah! Jade” said Capelli.
“save it I got your money.” she said as she threw the envelope to him.
“now. I'm no expert. But. Isnt there supposed to be another $1000 here?” he said.
“i can get it I just need mor-”
“NO! Youve had your chance! 4 days in the hall. It should be 2 weeks but you did get $9000” he laughed.
Before jade could argue a gag was fixed around her mouth. She was carried into the hall. Her feet were placed in stocks and her arms were stretch over her head. She was stipped to her underware. Her toes were tied back. Was was totally immobilised. She layed there awaiting her torture.........
please leave a comment
thanks again to evil dave
thanks for reading
evil dave gave me the idea
hope you like it
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE leave a comment
if enough people like it then i shall continue.
thanks
Against all instincts
Jade was a low level worker in a big company. She was about 5”9, long brown hair, blue eyes, size 9 feet and slim. She considered herself a very pure person.
But, she had a weakness for gambling.
She was such a terrible gambler that no casino in town would accept her.
All except one. The town had a strong Mafia influence.
They called themselves “the non-lethal torturers”. Anyone who crossed them faced the ultimate torture. Tickling.
The Mafia knew the entire town's tickle spots and so had them all in its grasp.
And they were the people who liked to gamble with jade.
She gambled with them almost nightly. She couldn't stop herself.
All it took was one night to change her life.
She arrived at the hidden base of the non-lethal torturers. She pushed the doors open and took in the familiar sight.
The room was full of people being tickled.
There were people being tickled in stocks, socks, racks, coffins. Every type of restraint was here. She walked through all the tortured people. She never looked at them for fear that she might take pity, help them and fall victim to the torture. But this time she took a good long look. There was a man having his feet licked by goats, a woman having her knees squeezed, a man having is arm pits tickled with feathers, another man having his ribs poked and the worse one of all. There was a man stripped naked and tied spread-eagle to a bed. There were 21 people tickling him at once.
2 to each foot
2 to each knee
2 to each arm pit
4 to his belly
4 to his ribs
2 to each thigh
2 to each nipple
2 to his neck
and 1 person heading for his crotch. Jade looked away as she heard the man scream. She pushed through another set of doors and found herself in a dark room with a poker table in the middle with 5 men sitting around it. She went and sat in the last seat.
The one on her right, Capelli, leaned over and said, “better not loose. Your out of money as it is, loose any more of our money and it will be a week in the torture hall.
“fuck you Capelli! I wont loose again.” she said bravely.
Before Capelli could answer the dealer stood up.
“the games black jack. Remember the rules and lets play.” he said
he dealt the cards.
Jade was in luck. She had a king and a queen. She was almost guaranteed to win.
But that little voice in her head egged her on. She was concentrating so hard on whether or not to stick when it was suddenly her go.
“jade?” said the dealer
she panicked “hit me!” she said, she realised her mistake at once and tried not to let it show.
She got the 9 of diamonds, she was bust.
When it came to revealing the cards all the mob bosses laughed at her misfortune.
“you know what that means don't you jade?” said Capelli evily.
“NO!!! I can get the money!!” she said in a panic.
“you better, or else it'll be 2 weeks!” laughed Capelli.
“dont worry I'll get it” she said.
“so why are you still here?” asked Capelli.
Jade got up and walked to the door.
“you got 48 hours, if you try to run away then we will find you and it'll be a year in the hall!” said Capelli threateningly.
Jade had no idea how she was going to get over $10,000 in 48 hours.
She walked down the hall and out the door. She drove home and started looking in the classified section of the newspaper. She was flat broke. She had no way of getting that money. And she knew that she couldn't stand 2 weeks in the torture hall.
Then an ad caught her eye.
Need some extra cash?
Think you have high endurance?
Then come down to the state fair to test yourself.
How long can you stand to be tickled.
1 minutes foot tickling equals $1000!
it couldn't he simpler.
No restraints just your determination!
Jade thought for a while. She had no other way of getting the money, and besides 10 minutes of tickling is not as bad as 2 weeks. It was settled.
The next day she drove down to the state fair and found the endurance test.
“excuse me?” she said to the boss of the test.
“ah! A new victim! Want to try yourself at the endurance?” he asked.
“er yes, what actually happens?”
“well, you go through there and take your shoes and socks off. You sit in the recliner with your feet up and our master tickler comes in. he tickles your bare feet, and if you keep your feet completely still for long enough then you get the money! Its that simple” he said
“OK..........I'll do it” she said.
She walked through the door and down the hall. She entered a little room with a recliner in it and a masked man. She sat on the chair and took off her shoes and socks.
The man looked at her but didn't speak. He merely pulled on a lever and the chair reclined.
With her feet in the air she felt very vulnerable. The man pulled a stool to the foot of the chair.
She felt his gaze on her soles.
Then it started.
One finger down each sole.
It took all her effort not to pull her feet away. It was already too much.
She looked to the left where there was a big clock timing the tickling.
It had only been 10 seconds since the start and she was already on the edge.
Then he switched his technique.
He was spider tickling all over her soles. She started giggling. She couldn't stop. The man started exploring the feet in front of him. He went round the heels, up the arches, in between the toes and down the soles. Jade was now laughing uncontrollably. It was already too much. She looked at the clock. 1Min 25 sec. Not bad, she thought, only 8 and a half more to go.
Then the man stopped. He picked up 2 feathers and lightly stroked both feet with them. Now she had such a horrible urge to move her feet. It was now a physical effort, not a conscious thought, to keep her feet still.
The feathers were reacting with her nerve endings in such a terrible way.
He continued this technique for a while then stopped. Jade was so relieved. She looked at the clock.
5 mins 49 secs. It was a miracle that she had gone that long. Then another masked man entered the room. They both took one foot each and stroked them with both hands. Jade squealed with laughter.
They kept this up with expert rhythm. Then they switched to spider tickling. She looked at the clock to try to block the tickling out. 7Min. 3 more. She was trying so hard not to move her feet. It was maddening. It went against everything her body knew. Her brain was screeming for her to stop this torture. But she couldn't. She needed that money or else this torture would happen again, but it would be worse and longer. They stopped again. She looked down at them and saw something that horrified her. They began to lick and suck her feet. This was worse than the over thing by far. They were finding all her tickle spots. Then they started blowing raspberries on her soles. The rapidly vibrating lips ran all over her feet. She looked at the clock. 9 mins 54 secs. Not long now. But it was too much. She ripped he feet back and rubbed them. The 2 men stood up and shook her hands.
“you did amazingly well!” one of them said.
“thanks. I needed the money” she said still half giggling.
“yeah not bad! What are you going to do with your $9000?”
those words burned in her soul.
She stared at the clock. 9Mins 59secs.
It was impossible.
The bos walked in and ongradulated her.
She was in a daze. She couldn't got through that again. She took the $9000 without talking. She went to the Mafia base. Hoping for mercy. She could easily get $1000 if she had more time.
She walked to the casino area where they were sitting.
“ah! Jade” said Capelli.
“save it I got your money.” she said as she threw the envelope to him.
“now. I'm no expert. But. Isnt there supposed to be another $1000 here?” he said.
“i can get it I just need mor-”
“NO! Youve had your chance! 4 days in the hall. It should be 2 weeks but you did get $9000” he laughed.
Before jade could argue a gag was fixed around her mouth. She was carried into the hall. Her feet were placed in stocks and her arms were stretch over her head. She was stipped to her underware. Her toes were tied back. Was was totally immobilised. She layed there awaiting her torture.........
please leave a comment
thanks again to evil dave
thanks for reading
