Strelnikov
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by Strelnikov
Copyright 2008 by the author
Dramatis Personae (in order of appearance)
Melissa Gabreski
Melissa is attractive with great curves, dark hazel eyes, and long brown hair with blonde streaks. She’s 20 years old and has lived on Tickle Street her whole life. She's super ticklish, and thinks it’s weird to be so ticklish like she is. But it has its compensations...
Nicole Wade
A little beauty, 20 years old, with crystal blue eyes and bright blonde hair, a very trim and shapely body and extremely ticklish feet. Very serious, a first-born overachiever. She and Melissa grew up together on Tickle street – they’ve been friends since kindergarten.
...plus the Usual Suspects – read on!
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“There!” Josh Kincaid said, finishing the hogtie. “Get right with God, Melissa, ‘cause I’m gonna tickle you to death!” His accent was pure South Mississippi.
Melissa rolled onto her side, looking up at Josh kneeling beside her on the grass. “Hey, don’t get carried away,” she said, a little apprehensively. She was very attractive: medium height, with dark hazel eyes, long lashes, and dark brown hair with blonde streaks, dressed in shorts and a sleeveless top that showed off her great curves and shapely legs to good advantage.
Josh was a year or so older, with light brown hair, green-flecked hazel eyes and a sailor’s tan on his face and arms. They had started dating after she hired on at his family’s business, the old riverboat Proud Mary. He had asked her to marry him last night, and she had accepted, though they hadn’t set a date.
“Moderation is for monks!” Josh scoffed, and rolled Melissa back onto her tummy. “C’mere, you!” He knee-walked to Melissa’s trapped feet and put a knee on either side of Melissa’s to prevent a roll-over. “Now. let’s see... ” He traced a circle on a heel with a single nail.
“Hehehe!” Melissa giggled. “Quit! That tickles!”
“What’ll you give me if I do?” Josh asked, lightly scratching around the ball of the foot.
“Haheha! I’ll– hehe! –think of– ahaha! –something– hahaha!” It was a game they played – he enjoyed tickling her, and she didn’t mind at all. In fact, sometimes it turned them both on, and then...
“Something, huh?” he said playfully. He gently flicked his nail tips in the arch. “Does this tickle?”
“Hehehe! Yes!”
“As much as this?” he asked, stroking the crease in the center of the sole.
“Haha! You– hehe! –know– hahaha! –it does– hehe!”
“Of course I do,” Josh said. “And this is best of all, right?” he added cheerfully, spider-walking his nails in the back of both arches and onto the heels.
“NOT THAT! HAHAHA! HAHA-HAHEHA-HAHAHAHAHA!” Melissa laughed, squirming and trying desperately to pull her feet away.
“Tickling you is a lot of fun,” Josh said – he spread the little toe apart from its neighbor and tickled in between, forcing a loud burst of helpless laughter. “Great laugh – like music!” He held back Melissa’s toes and tickled side to side under all ten toes – Melissa laughed her head off, tears of laughter running down her cheeks. Josh made a Peace sign and circled the nails in the arches, just behind the sole creases, and Melissa’s laughter went off the scale. Oh ghod how it tickled!
Josh shifted his tickle target, tickling the heels two-handed. Melissa laughed like a maniac as Josh spider-walked his nails up both arches, making little contact but tickling unbearably. Melissa laughed and laughed as Josh tickled both soles, toes twitching and curling. Then drawing fast, looping figure-eight’s around the balls of both feet, and Melissa laughed at the top of her lungs.
“Break time!” Josh announced, and Melissa felt him shift as the tickling stopped. “Break’s over!” he said immediately – she just had time for a deep breath before tickling nail tips flicked her soles again in a guitar-chording motion. Melissa arched her back and howled with forced mirth, helpless to resist the well techniqued tickling. The spider-walk was next, along both sole creases and down the arches – four nail strokes in succession, three times a second. Melissa was in the zone now, red faced and sweaty, unable to move or even form a coherent thought – all she could do was lay there and laugh.
The tickling fingernails shifted – Melissa laughed helplessly while they tickled her heels, around the edges, back to the center, then back onto the arches again. And now the soles got their share of attention, holding the toes back and tickling side to side on the stretched out soles. The tickling sensation had completely overcome her – she was losing it, red faced, eyes closed, tears streaming down her cheeks. She couldn’t take much more...
Both arches got it again, zig-zag lines that tickled horribly. Then the heels, two nails tracing circles, squares and other tickling shapes. Finally, maximum tickle torture – tickling two-handed in both back arches and onto the heels behind. Melissa laughed her head off at the top of her lungs, her wild ticklish laughter filling the air. It was more than she could bear – she laughed herself breathless.
“Not too shabby,” Josh said.
“Lots of fun too,” Nicole Wade said. “Though I’m not sure Melissa agrees.” More nail flicks, and Melissa let out another burst of helpless laughter. “Or do you?”
Melissa blinked away tears and squirmed around, gasping for air. Nicole was kneeling at Melissa’s trapped feet, fingernails poised over the upturned soles – she was Melissa’s age, a little blonde beauty with a trim and shapely figure, fair skin, bright blue eyes and delicate china-doll features. Josh sat cross-legged beside Nicole, grinning.
“No... fair... ” Melissa said breathlessly. “That... tickled... so much... ”
Nicole started untying Melissa. “It was supposed to,” she said. “C’mon, we’re burning daylight,” she said as she finished her task. She was dressed like Melissa, barefoot – the uniform-of-the-day for their outing.
Melissa rolled onto her back and shuffled her feet to get the tickle off. “You are so gonna get it!” she threatened good-naturedly.
Nicole gave her a hand up. “Counting on it,” she said, and picked up a canvas tote. “I’ve got enough gear for both of us – see ya, Josh!”
“Have fun!” Josh said. “Love you!”
“Love you too,” Melissa said, and gave him a kiss that was a promise of more to come.
They went out through the back yard, jumped the fence and headed into the woods. They had been best friends since kindergarten, and the friendship had continued all through high school. But Melissa had stayed home and gone to Tieson City College; Nicole wanted to be a doctor, so she had gone off to Commonwealth University’s Pre-Med program. They tried to keep their friendship alive with outings like this on school vacations and holidays. Unfortunately, though, this summer their work schedules hadn’t coincided, so they hadn’t spent much time together.
The wooded area north of Tickle Street wasn’t 100 acres, of course – it was actually about a mile square. But the neighborhood kids had called it the Hundred Acre Wood years ago, and the name had stuck. The area was hilly, rocky, heavily overgrown with second growth forest. Owl Creek entered it from the south before turning northeast between steep banks. An old railroad grade, long disused, crossed diagonally from southeast to northwest.
A trail started a few yards in and ran east-and-west behind the subdivision – it was smooth, hard-packed, easy on bare feet. They followed it to Owl Creek and took the left fork, running along the creek bank, chatting as they walked.
“Coming through!” Kelly McGuire called behind them. Melissa turned, and saw that Kelly was with Angie Fontana, Melissa’s friend and co-worker on the Proud Mary. Kelly had a glorious mane of fiery red hair, Celtic-fair skin and blue eyes so dark they seemed almost indigo; Angie was tanned, with dark hair and dark eyes. Both were former teen models – tall, drop-dead gorgeous, with silky long hair, great shapes and long lovely legs. They were dressed like the others, barefoot.
Melissa and Nicole were in no hurry, so they stopped and stepped aside. “A little eager, are we?” Nicole asked.
“As Morgan would say, there’s feet that need tickling,” Angie said, making tickling motions.
Kelly poked Angie in the tummy – the brunette squeaked and jumped. “Yours especially,” she said.
“Save it,” Angie said. “Congratulations, Melissa,” she added as they passed by. “Jim told me last night.” She was dating Josh’s younger brother.
Nicole raised an eyebrow, and Melissa felt a rush of guilt. “Josh and I are engaged,” she said.
Nicole’s expression changed. “Have you set the date?” she asked.
“Not yet,” Melissa said. There had been a time when Melissa would have called Nicole right away with the good news. Ever since they were little girls, they had planned to be maid of honor at each other’s wedding, but Melissa knew that it wouldn’t happen that way now. “I’m sorry, Nicole,” she said. “I was waiting for the right time to tell you.”
“And this is it,” Nicole said, smiling. She hugged Melissa. “I’m happy for you.”
“Hey, move along!” Stephanie Miklajcyk said. She was with Ashley Curtis, Melissa saw. Stephanie had light brown hair and green eyes, Ashley was blonde and blue-eyed – they were tall and tanned, with the same beauty-queen look as Kelly and Angie.
“Cleared for action, I see,” Melissa said, looking at their bare feet.
Stephanie grinned and wiggled her toes. “Just like you, and everybody else,” she said. “You coming or not?”
“We’ll get there,” Nicole said.
“Well, we’re trying to catch up with Angie and Kelly,” Ashley said.
“And tickle the crap out of ‘em,” Stephanie added cheerfully. “Either of you seen Morgan, or Brittany and Joanna? I owe all three a good tickling!”
“I saw them heading into the woods when I left to go to Melissa’s house,” Nicole said. “I imagine they’re at the meadow already.”
“Then what are we waiting for?” Stephanie demanded, and started walking again. “Let’s go get ‘em!” she called over her shoulder.
Ashley shook her head. “She’s turned into a tickle maniac,” she said.
“Like me,” Nicole said. She winked at Melissa. “I got a head start, and warmed up on my friend here.”
“The twins couldn’t’ve done any better,” Melissa said. “My abs still hurt!”
“COME ON!” Stephanie shouted.
“Our public awaits,” Ashley said, grinning.
“OK, see ya!” Melissa said, and they were gone.
They continued on to where the trail branched again and took the right fork, continuing along the bank. Half a mile further on, they came to the abandoned railroad grade and followed it to the old iron bridge across the creek.
Ticklish laughter greeted them – two young women, laughing their heads off. They paused to check it out.
Morgan Ernst was sitting cross-legged on the bridge deck – she was a slender girl, about medium height, with curly brown hair and soft brown eyes. Ashley’s feet were resting in her lap – Morgan tickled with skill and enthusiasm, making Ashley laugh like mad.
Just past Morgan, Brittany Righetti and her cousin Joanna Shaw stood over another laughing girl. Brittany was Mediterranean-looking, with long dark hair, brown eyes, a life guard tan, and curves in all the right places. Joanna wore her dark hair in a page bob – she took after the Irish side of her ancestry, with fair skin, blue eyes and freckles. Their victim was on her back, feet up and gravity working against her – the girls each had hold of an ankle, tickling fiendishly with their free hand.
Morgan spotted them first. “Hey, want some of this?” she called out. Ashley’s feet were off-the-scale ticklish – she was flat on her back, laughing at the top of her lungs, completely overcome by the tickling sensation. Morgan wasn’t even holding on.
“Later, maybe,” Melissa called back. They moved in closer. “Is that Stephanie over there?” she asked, nodding toward the cousins.
“Right the first time,” Morgan said. “Listen to her laugh – she’s almost as much fun to tickle as Ashley.” She never missed a stroke – Ashley laughed and laughed, red-faced, tears streaming from her closed eyes.
Brittany had Stephanie’s left foot, circling a single nail around and on the ball of the foot. Joanna had the right foot – she spider-walked her nail tips from sole to heel, over and over, covering the ticklish flesh with unbearable tickling. Stephanie laughed her head off, red-faced and sweaty, her hair in tangles around her head.
“Brittany and Joanna deserve a good tickling,” Nicole whispered to Melissa. “Want to help Stephanie out?”
“Nah, she can take it,” Melissa said. “And besides, she was gonna do the same to them.” To Brittany and Joanna: “Faster! Get her good!”
“You got it!” Brittany said – she held back Stephanie’s toes and switched to a spider-walk on the stretched out sole. Joanna shifted her tickle target to the ticklish heel, nail tips flying, and Stephanie’s laughter went off the scale.
“Why’d you start here?” Meghan Meyer called from the end of the bridge. “I thought we were gonna gather at the meadow downstream.” She was with Lindsey Thomas, Melissa saw – Meghan was strawberry-blonde with blue eyes and freckles, Lindsey was blonde and blue-eyed with a deep summer tan. They were tiny girls, just 4 ft 11 inches in their bare feet – they weighed maybe 90 lbs soaking wet.
Morgan grabbed Ashley’s big toes and guitar-chorded the arches – the helpless laughter went up a notch. “We’re waiting for Anne and Tiffany,” she called back.
Meghan and Lindsey came closer. “So you’re using the time productively, right?” Lindsey said – it wasn’t a question.
“Of course,” Morgan said. “Right, Ashley?” But Ashley was laughing much too hard to answer, lost in ticklish delirium.
“Ow!” Lindsey said. She balanced on one foot and inspected the sole of the other. “Maybe going barefoot like this wasn’t such a good idea.”
Meghan grinned. “Dirty, too. Like mine,” she added, lifting a foot and flashing the sole. “Want me to get the dirt off?”
Lindsey laughed. “Tickle my feet clean, like Morgan’s doing to Ashley?”
“Hers weren’t all that dirty,” Morgan said, drawing fast, looping figure-eight’s around the balls of both feet – Ashley laughed even harder. “I just love to tickle her – she has such a pretty laugh.”
Morgan eased off, and Ashley dropped back to normal-rated laughter. “Do you want some of this?” she asked. She nodded toward Stephanie, laughing with wild abandon as the tickling fingernails roamed her soft upturned soles. “Or maybe Brittany and Joanna will let you have a turn with Stephanie... ”
“We’ll pass for now,” Meghan said. “C’mon, Lindsey, let’s find Candice and Sara.”
“We’ll come too,” Nicole said. The ticklish laughter followed them as they crossed the bridge to the other side.
The bank had an easy slope here – the girls went down to the water’s edge and headed downstream to the big flat rock that hung out over the stream. Just past the rock was a pool, scoured out by spring snow melt channeled between the bridge abutments. A rope hung from a tree branch – this place had been a swimming hole for generations. Laughter drifted down from the bridge, fainter here but still clear enough.
“Y’all go on,” Melissa said to Lindsey and Meghan. “Nicole and I will be along directly.”
“Listen to her – moonlight and magnolias!” Meghan said, and waded into the shallow water around the edge of the pool, headed downstream.
Lindsey followed. “She’ll start following NASCAR racing next,” she said, and they both laughed as they waded away.
Nicole gave Melissa a very odd look. “You’re starting to sound like Anne,” she said.
“It’s a family business,” Melissa said. “Working with the Kincaids, and dating Josh... I guess I’m starting to pick up the accent.” She sat on the rock, feet in the water. “Sit with me, Nicole.”
Nicole sat beside Melissa. “We’ve had some good times here,” she remarked.
“Yah,” Melissa agreed. “I’m glad we have this chance to spend time together.”
“Thank Candice for that,” Nicole said. “Planning this gathering took some effort.”
“How many d’you think there’ll be?” Melissa asked.
“Mmm...” Nicole said, thinking. “All of us on Tickle Street, and our friends... I guess 15, maybe 20.”
“Wonder if the twins’ll show up?”
“Candice invited ‘em,” Nicole said. “If everybody else shows, they’d make it 22.” She grinned. “Lots of ticklish feet, and I plan to tickle ‘em all! Well, not mine, of course – you’ll have to do that.”
“I think I can manage,” Melissa said mischievously.
“No doubt,” Nicole said. “So tell me about you and Josh. What made you decide?”
“Thought I was pregnant,” Melissa answered. “It was a false alarm, but we decided we kinda liked the idea... just not right away,” she added quickly. “I guess I’ll change my major to Business, ‘cause I’m marrying into a family operation.”
“Any ideas where and when?”
“On Proud Mary, of course,” Melissa answered. “This fall, after business slows down and we can take a honeymoon. It’s short notice, I know,” she added with another flash of guilt. “But we want to keep it small, and it’s not like we’ll have any trouble getting the venue.” A pause. “You’ll come, won’t you?” They had once been like sisters – that she had to ask was proof of how far they had grown apart.
“Couldn’t keep me away,” Nicole said, a little sadly.
“Hey, what kind of devilment are y’all plotting?” Anne Kincaid asked from behind them. Anne was Josh’s younger sister – she was 18, a cutie with a Southern accent, a great body, long light brown hair, long lashes and dazzling hazel eyes.
“Deciding who we’re gonna tickle,” Nicole answered quickly, looking around. “And you’re high on the list.”
Melissa looked too – she saw that Tiffany Kilpatrick was with Anne and the five girls from the bridge. Tiffany was a pretty girl, medium height, with a Rubenesque figure, fair skin, shoulder-length light brown hair and bright blue eyes.
“How about me?” Ashley asked. She wasn’t the least bit upset – getting tickled silly was just a normal, every-day hazard for the young women hereabouts.
Nicole laughed. “Be glad to – I’d like some variety today.”
“No lack of that,” Tiffany said.
“So many ticklish feet– ” Brittany started.
“ –so little time!” Joanna completed the thought, and landed a double rib-poke on Brittany. Brittany squealed and jumped back.
“Not now,” Tiffany advised. “Get in a tickle fight here, you’ll land on this rock and bust your ass.”
“Good thinking,” Morgan said. She stepped off the rock into the stream. “C’mon, there’s feet that need tickling!”
“Yours especially,” Brittany said, following after. The other five newcomers trooped after them, threatening each other good-naturedly, voices fading away as they waded downstream.
Bummer, thought Melissa. A few minutes before, it had seemed like old times again, sitting side-by-side and sharing confidences. But the moment had passed. “You seeing anybody?” she asked to fill the silence, embarassed that she didn’t know.
“I don’t have time for a boyfriend,” Nicole said. “Well, there’s one guy, another Pre-Med. We hook up sometimes, but mostly we study together. Romantic, huh?”
“It’s something, at least,” Melissa said, and immediately regretted it. “D’you see it turning into anything long-term?” she asked quickly.
“Maybe someday we’ll go into practice together,” Nicole said. She gathered her legs under her. “Ready to make me laugh?”
Melissa stood up and grinned. “Of course! Let’s go!”
They waded after the others. The stream bottom here was mixed sand and pebbles, easy on the feet. After another 50 yards or so, the bed widened out and the stream got shallower. Up ahead, two young women were laughing like mad – somebody was tickling them silly.
Melissa paused. “They’ve started already,” she said. “Listen!”
“Big surprise!” Nicole said. “Sounds like Meghan and Lindsey – let’s check it out.”
A few yards downstream, the stream bank leveled out in grassy area where the sun shone through the trees. Nicole waded ashore – Melissa joined her. The grass was soft under her bare feet.
Meghan and Lindsey were on their tummies a few yards away. Candice was sitting on Lindsey facing aft, with Lindsey’s legs trapped in the figure-four leg lock – her tickling fingernails danced on Lindsey’s ticklish soles. Sara had Meghan trapped the same way, guitar-chording the girl’s arches. Meghan and Lindsey laughed their heads off, eyes closed, tears of laughter running down their cheeks.
“Meghan and Lindsey, sure enough,” Melissa said. “Looks like they found Candice and Sara.”
“Candice and Sara found them,” Nicole corrected. “Ambushed ‘em from behind that big willow, probably.” She called out to Candice: “Hey sis, can I have some of that?”
“Find your own!” Candice called back. She was a little shorter than Nicole, and her hair was ash blonde, but there could be no doubt they were sisters – they shared the same bright blue eyes and delicate features. She tickled faster, and Lindsey’s laughter went off the charts.
“Shouldn’t be too hard,” Sara added. She was tanned, green-eyed, with long dark hair and a Dolly Parton build – a small girl with a trim waist and amazing upper body development. She switched to nail flicks on the balls of Meghan’s feet, forcing a flood of helpless laughter.
“Better go easy,” Melissa advised. “You’re gonna use ‘em up too fast that way.”
“Plenty more where they came from,” Candice said, tickling at warp speed. Lindsey lost it and laughed herself breathless. “Oops! Too soon!” Candice said.
“You’re too eager,” Sara said, drawing tickling circles on Meghan’s heels – Meghan laughed harder, lost in ticklish delirium. “Next time, pace yourself.”
“Yah, I suppose so,” Candice said. She made a show of inspecting Lindsey’s feet. “I didn’t quite tickle ‘em clean – guess I’ll have to try again. Ready, girlfriend?” and started in on Lindsey again.
“Ple– hehehe! –ease!” Lindsey begged. “AHAHA! HAHAHEHA! HAHA-HAHA-HAHAHAHA!”
“They’ll be at this for a while,” Nicole said. “C’mon, let’s see who else is getting a fingernail foot massage.”
A little further in, a lone oak tree cast a pool of deep shadow. More laughter came from the other side of the tree. “Somebody’s getting tickled back there,” Melissa said.
Nicole listened too. “Is that Anne laughing?”
“Sure is,” Melissa said – these days, Anne’s ticklish laughter was more familiar to her than Nicole’s. “Somebody’s getting her good.”
The girls circled around. Anne was hogtied on the grass – Brittany was kneeling at her trapped feet. She was tickling Anne’s feet two-handed, counter-marching her nail tips from toes to heels, getting great reactions and wave after wave of helpless laughter. She looked up and spotted them. “Hello again!” she said happily. “Are we having fun yet?”
“Looks like it,” Melissa said, raising her voice over Anne’s laughter.
“Nice to have a hobby everyone can enjoy,” Brittany said, grinning. She flicked her nails on Anne’s soles – Anne’s toes twitched as she laughed like mad. “Going barefoot like this was a good idea – saves time.”
“It does indeed,” Nicole said. “Is that all you’ve got?”
“Not hardly,” Brittany said. “Watch!” Still tickling with one hand, she pulled a hairbrush out of a back pocket – the round kind with bristles arranged radially around the handle and plastic knobs on the bristle tips. She rolled the handle between her palms – each little bristle-knob flicked Anne’s heels, tickling like crazy and driving Anne wild.
“You were right, back on the bridge,” Melissa whispered to Nicole. “Brittany could do with a few laughs.”
“My thoughts exactly,” Nicole whispered back. “One, two, three– ”
“GOTCHA!” the girls chorused – they grabbed Brittany, wrestled her down on her tummy and sat on her.
“Th... thanks,” Anne said, breathing hard. “Woo! That tickled a lot!”
“Well, ya got me,” Brittany said cheerfully. “Now what?”
“Three guesses,” Melissa said. “Gonna make trouble for us?”
“Nah, I’d just start off tired,” Brittany answered. “Hogtie?”
“Yup,” Melissa said, and tied Brittany’s hands behind her back. Nicole tied her ankles together, and Melissa completed the hogtie. She kneeled at Brittany’s feet and flexed her fingers over the upturned soles. “Get ready to laugh, ‘cause I’m gonna open a bag of freak on you!”
“Hey, aren’t y’all gonna untie me?” Anne asked.
Nicole kneeled and trapped Anne’s legs between her knees. “Eventually,” she said.
“Shit!” Anne said, disgusted. “OK, get it over– HAHAHA! HAHA-HAHA-HAHAHA!” as Nicole’s well manicured nails flicked her ticklish soles.
“Tickle her heels, Nicole,” Brittany said helpfully. “It drives her cra– HAHAHA! HAHEHA! HAHAHAHAHA!” as Melissa got to work, tickling with verve and gusto.
Melissa explored, looking for the sweet spots and gauging the results by the volume of laughter. She tickled between Brittany’s toes, two by two, getting a burst of helpless laughter each time. She held the toes back and tickled side to side under all ten toes. The stretched out soles got it next – she covered them with tiny nail flicks, tickling side to side. She hit gold, a spot in the arch just behind the sole crease, and Brittany went wild, laughing at the top of her lungs. Melissa made a Peace sign and circled the nails in the arch spots, and Brittany’s laughter went off the scale.
I don’t want to tickle her out too soon, thought Melissa. She eased off, looked over at Nicole and Anne. Anne laughed helplessly as Nicole’s nails spider-walked down her arches – tears of laughter ran from her closed eyes, her face was turning red from laughing. Melissa copied Nicole, covering Brittany’s arches with fiendish tickling. The heels were next, drawing overlapping circles and other tickling shapes while Brittany laughed and laughed.
“Amateur!” a female voice said behind Melissa. “She missed the best spot!” Melissa and Nicole quit tickling and looked up, giving their victims a much needed break. Vicky and Veronica Righetti, Melissa saw – Brittany’s twin older sisters, in matching tops and shorts. They were a little taller than Brittany, and wore their dark hair shoulder-length, but the family resemblance was strong – barefoot Mediterranean beauties with summer tans and dark eyes and lashes.
“Show ‘em, sis,” one twin said.
The other twin came closer. “Same tickle pattern as you, dummy!” she said, and reached down to give Brittany’s back arches a left-handed tickle, extending the nail strokes onto the heels.
“VICKIEE!” Brittany wailed. “AHAHAHAHA!”
Vicky quit and backed off. “Don’t let us stop you,” she said, sitting cross-legged to watch.
Veronica joined her. “Yah, Brittany really does have it coming – she got me good last night.”
“OH SHIT! HAHAHAHA! HAHA-HAHA-HAHAHA!” Brittany laughed as Melissa spider-walked her nails in her back arches. Anne started laughing again beside her, the happy result of tickling fingernails on ticklish feet.
“Get with the program, you two,” Veronica called, raising her voice over the ticklish laughter. “You’re going easy on them – let’s see how hard they can laugh!”
Melissa switched to two-handed tickling, flicking both back arches with her nail tips and driving Brittany wild. She moved up to the soles again – Brittany’s toes twitched and curled as she laughed like a madwoman. Melissa flicked and scratched the sole creases, drew counter-rotating circles down the arches, forcing a wild stream of ticklish laughter. She held back Brittany’s toes and raked her nails from sole to heel, drawing four parallel zig-zag lines and tickling Brittany to the edge of madness. She repeated the foot rake, alternating between feet, trying to out-tickle Nicole.
“Not bad!” Nicole said. Helpless laughter poured out of Anne as Nicole’s nails flicked her sensitive soles. “Guess I’ll have to try harder.” She gave Anne’s arches another burst of nail flicks – Anne howled with forced mirth. Then a two-handed spider walk on both heels, and Anne’s laughter went off the charts.
“That the best you can do?” Melissa asked. She got on Brittany’s back arches and heels again, tickling at warp speed, and tickled Brittany’s breath away. “Hah! Beat ya!” she said.
“You’re keeping Anne going like that on purpose,” Veronica said. “Go ahead, finish her off.”
“Busted!” Nicole answered cheerfully. “Well, OK,” she said, and speeded up. Anne lost it and ran out of air, too breathless to laugh. “Now I’ll untie you,” Nicole said.
“How’d Nicole and Melissa catch you, Little Sis?” Veronica asked.
Brittany rolled onto her side – Melissa didn’t try to hold on. “They kinda snuck up on me,” she said.
“Then you deserved it,” Vicky said. She freed Brittany’s ankles but left her hands tied. “Move aside, Melissa.”
“OH NOOO!” Brittany yelled.
The twins sat cross-legged, facing each other – each grabbed one of Brittany’s ankles. “Yup,” Veronica said.
“Seems to me– ” Vicky continued.
“ –you need– ”
“ –a lesson– ”
“ –in situational awareness,” the twins finished in chorus.
“PLEEASE!” Brittany begged. “HAHAHA! HAHAHA-HAHA-HAHAHAHA!” as the twins got to work, tickling with skill and enthusiasm. Melissa stood and gave them plenty of room. Nicole had untied Anne – they moved to join her.
“That was mean, letting Nicole tickle me like that!” Anne said. Melissa felt a twinge of guilt – Anne was her friend.
So was Nicole – wasn’t she?
“But I rescued you from Brittany,” Nicole said. “You owed me for that.”
“Sounds like Brittany’s paying for her fun,” Anne observed – she wasn’t really upset. “Listen to her laugh!”
“Serves her right,” Angie said – she had come up behind them. “I owe her some payback for last week. Maybe I’ll– ”
“Better not just yet,” Anne cautioned. “Her sisters are tickling her – they might decide to grab you too.”
“Good advice,” Angie said. “Let’s see what else is going on.”
“Y’all go ahead,” Melissa said. “Nicole and I’ll catch up later.”
“Ditching your friends?” Nicole asked after the others left.
“Not all of them, I hope,” Melissa said.
“No, of course not,” Nicole said contritely. “I shouldn’t have said that.”
“Forget it,” Melissa answered, knowing that they wouldn’t.
Copyright 2008 by the author
Dramatis Personae (in order of appearance)
Melissa Gabreski
Melissa is attractive with great curves, dark hazel eyes, and long brown hair with blonde streaks. She’s 20 years old and has lived on Tickle Street her whole life. She's super ticklish, and thinks it’s weird to be so ticklish like she is. But it has its compensations...
Nicole Wade
A little beauty, 20 years old, with crystal blue eyes and bright blonde hair, a very trim and shapely body and extremely ticklish feet. Very serious, a first-born overachiever. She and Melissa grew up together on Tickle street – they’ve been friends since kindergarten.
...plus the Usual Suspects – read on!
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“There!” Josh Kincaid said, finishing the hogtie. “Get right with God, Melissa, ‘cause I’m gonna tickle you to death!” His accent was pure South Mississippi.
Melissa rolled onto her side, looking up at Josh kneeling beside her on the grass. “Hey, don’t get carried away,” she said, a little apprehensively. She was very attractive: medium height, with dark hazel eyes, long lashes, and dark brown hair with blonde streaks, dressed in shorts and a sleeveless top that showed off her great curves and shapely legs to good advantage.
Josh was a year or so older, with light brown hair, green-flecked hazel eyes and a sailor’s tan on his face and arms. They had started dating after she hired on at his family’s business, the old riverboat Proud Mary. He had asked her to marry him last night, and she had accepted, though they hadn’t set a date.
“Moderation is for monks!” Josh scoffed, and rolled Melissa back onto her tummy. “C’mere, you!” He knee-walked to Melissa’s trapped feet and put a knee on either side of Melissa’s to prevent a roll-over. “Now. let’s see... ” He traced a circle on a heel with a single nail.
“Hehehe!” Melissa giggled. “Quit! That tickles!”
“What’ll you give me if I do?” Josh asked, lightly scratching around the ball of the foot.
“Haheha! I’ll– hehe! –think of– ahaha! –something– hahaha!” It was a game they played – he enjoyed tickling her, and she didn’t mind at all. In fact, sometimes it turned them both on, and then...
“Something, huh?” he said playfully. He gently flicked his nail tips in the arch. “Does this tickle?”
“Hehehe! Yes!”
“As much as this?” he asked, stroking the crease in the center of the sole.
“Haha! You– hehe! –know– hahaha! –it does– hehe!”
“Of course I do,” Josh said. “And this is best of all, right?” he added cheerfully, spider-walking his nails in the back of both arches and onto the heels.
“NOT THAT! HAHAHA! HAHA-HAHEHA-HAHAHAHAHA!” Melissa laughed, squirming and trying desperately to pull her feet away.
“Tickling you is a lot of fun,” Josh said – he spread the little toe apart from its neighbor and tickled in between, forcing a loud burst of helpless laughter. “Great laugh – like music!” He held back Melissa’s toes and tickled side to side under all ten toes – Melissa laughed her head off, tears of laughter running down her cheeks. Josh made a Peace sign and circled the nails in the arches, just behind the sole creases, and Melissa’s laughter went off the scale. Oh ghod how it tickled!
Josh shifted his tickle target, tickling the heels two-handed. Melissa laughed like a maniac as Josh spider-walked his nails up both arches, making little contact but tickling unbearably. Melissa laughed and laughed as Josh tickled both soles, toes twitching and curling. Then drawing fast, looping figure-eight’s around the balls of both feet, and Melissa laughed at the top of her lungs.
“Break time!” Josh announced, and Melissa felt him shift as the tickling stopped. “Break’s over!” he said immediately – she just had time for a deep breath before tickling nail tips flicked her soles again in a guitar-chording motion. Melissa arched her back and howled with forced mirth, helpless to resist the well techniqued tickling. The spider-walk was next, along both sole creases and down the arches – four nail strokes in succession, three times a second. Melissa was in the zone now, red faced and sweaty, unable to move or even form a coherent thought – all she could do was lay there and laugh.
The tickling fingernails shifted – Melissa laughed helplessly while they tickled her heels, around the edges, back to the center, then back onto the arches again. And now the soles got their share of attention, holding the toes back and tickling side to side on the stretched out soles. The tickling sensation had completely overcome her – she was losing it, red faced, eyes closed, tears streaming down her cheeks. She couldn’t take much more...
Both arches got it again, zig-zag lines that tickled horribly. Then the heels, two nails tracing circles, squares and other tickling shapes. Finally, maximum tickle torture – tickling two-handed in both back arches and onto the heels behind. Melissa laughed her head off at the top of her lungs, her wild ticklish laughter filling the air. It was more than she could bear – she laughed herself breathless.
“Not too shabby,” Josh said.
“Lots of fun too,” Nicole Wade said. “Though I’m not sure Melissa agrees.” More nail flicks, and Melissa let out another burst of helpless laughter. “Or do you?”
Melissa blinked away tears and squirmed around, gasping for air. Nicole was kneeling at Melissa’s trapped feet, fingernails poised over the upturned soles – she was Melissa’s age, a little blonde beauty with a trim and shapely figure, fair skin, bright blue eyes and delicate china-doll features. Josh sat cross-legged beside Nicole, grinning.
“No... fair... ” Melissa said breathlessly. “That... tickled... so much... ”
Nicole started untying Melissa. “It was supposed to,” she said. “C’mon, we’re burning daylight,” she said as she finished her task. She was dressed like Melissa, barefoot – the uniform-of-the-day for their outing.
Melissa rolled onto her back and shuffled her feet to get the tickle off. “You are so gonna get it!” she threatened good-naturedly.
Nicole gave her a hand up. “Counting on it,” she said, and picked up a canvas tote. “I’ve got enough gear for both of us – see ya, Josh!”
“Have fun!” Josh said. “Love you!”
“Love you too,” Melissa said, and gave him a kiss that was a promise of more to come.
They went out through the back yard, jumped the fence and headed into the woods. They had been best friends since kindergarten, and the friendship had continued all through high school. But Melissa had stayed home and gone to Tieson City College; Nicole wanted to be a doctor, so she had gone off to Commonwealth University’s Pre-Med program. They tried to keep their friendship alive with outings like this on school vacations and holidays. Unfortunately, though, this summer their work schedules hadn’t coincided, so they hadn’t spent much time together.
The wooded area north of Tickle Street wasn’t 100 acres, of course – it was actually about a mile square. But the neighborhood kids had called it the Hundred Acre Wood years ago, and the name had stuck. The area was hilly, rocky, heavily overgrown with second growth forest. Owl Creek entered it from the south before turning northeast between steep banks. An old railroad grade, long disused, crossed diagonally from southeast to northwest.
A trail started a few yards in and ran east-and-west behind the subdivision – it was smooth, hard-packed, easy on bare feet. They followed it to Owl Creek and took the left fork, running along the creek bank, chatting as they walked.
“Coming through!” Kelly McGuire called behind them. Melissa turned, and saw that Kelly was with Angie Fontana, Melissa’s friend and co-worker on the Proud Mary. Kelly had a glorious mane of fiery red hair, Celtic-fair skin and blue eyes so dark they seemed almost indigo; Angie was tanned, with dark hair and dark eyes. Both were former teen models – tall, drop-dead gorgeous, with silky long hair, great shapes and long lovely legs. They were dressed like the others, barefoot.
Melissa and Nicole were in no hurry, so they stopped and stepped aside. “A little eager, are we?” Nicole asked.
“As Morgan would say, there’s feet that need tickling,” Angie said, making tickling motions.
Kelly poked Angie in the tummy – the brunette squeaked and jumped. “Yours especially,” she said.
“Save it,” Angie said. “Congratulations, Melissa,” she added as they passed by. “Jim told me last night.” She was dating Josh’s younger brother.
Nicole raised an eyebrow, and Melissa felt a rush of guilt. “Josh and I are engaged,” she said.
Nicole’s expression changed. “Have you set the date?” she asked.
“Not yet,” Melissa said. There had been a time when Melissa would have called Nicole right away with the good news. Ever since they were little girls, they had planned to be maid of honor at each other’s wedding, but Melissa knew that it wouldn’t happen that way now. “I’m sorry, Nicole,” she said. “I was waiting for the right time to tell you.”
“And this is it,” Nicole said, smiling. She hugged Melissa. “I’m happy for you.”
“Hey, move along!” Stephanie Miklajcyk said. She was with Ashley Curtis, Melissa saw. Stephanie had light brown hair and green eyes, Ashley was blonde and blue-eyed – they were tall and tanned, with the same beauty-queen look as Kelly and Angie.
“Cleared for action, I see,” Melissa said, looking at their bare feet.
Stephanie grinned and wiggled her toes. “Just like you, and everybody else,” she said. “You coming or not?”
“We’ll get there,” Nicole said.
“Well, we’re trying to catch up with Angie and Kelly,” Ashley said.
“And tickle the crap out of ‘em,” Stephanie added cheerfully. “Either of you seen Morgan, or Brittany and Joanna? I owe all three a good tickling!”
“I saw them heading into the woods when I left to go to Melissa’s house,” Nicole said. “I imagine they’re at the meadow already.”
“Then what are we waiting for?” Stephanie demanded, and started walking again. “Let’s go get ‘em!” she called over her shoulder.
Ashley shook her head. “She’s turned into a tickle maniac,” she said.
“Like me,” Nicole said. She winked at Melissa. “I got a head start, and warmed up on my friend here.”
“The twins couldn’t’ve done any better,” Melissa said. “My abs still hurt!”
“COME ON!” Stephanie shouted.
“Our public awaits,” Ashley said, grinning.
“OK, see ya!” Melissa said, and they were gone.
They continued on to where the trail branched again and took the right fork, continuing along the bank. Half a mile further on, they came to the abandoned railroad grade and followed it to the old iron bridge across the creek.
Ticklish laughter greeted them – two young women, laughing their heads off. They paused to check it out.
Morgan Ernst was sitting cross-legged on the bridge deck – she was a slender girl, about medium height, with curly brown hair and soft brown eyes. Ashley’s feet were resting in her lap – Morgan tickled with skill and enthusiasm, making Ashley laugh like mad.
Just past Morgan, Brittany Righetti and her cousin Joanna Shaw stood over another laughing girl. Brittany was Mediterranean-looking, with long dark hair, brown eyes, a life guard tan, and curves in all the right places. Joanna wore her dark hair in a page bob – she took after the Irish side of her ancestry, with fair skin, blue eyes and freckles. Their victim was on her back, feet up and gravity working against her – the girls each had hold of an ankle, tickling fiendishly with their free hand.
Morgan spotted them first. “Hey, want some of this?” she called out. Ashley’s feet were off-the-scale ticklish – she was flat on her back, laughing at the top of her lungs, completely overcome by the tickling sensation. Morgan wasn’t even holding on.
“Later, maybe,” Melissa called back. They moved in closer. “Is that Stephanie over there?” she asked, nodding toward the cousins.
“Right the first time,” Morgan said. “Listen to her laugh – she’s almost as much fun to tickle as Ashley.” She never missed a stroke – Ashley laughed and laughed, red-faced, tears streaming from her closed eyes.
Brittany had Stephanie’s left foot, circling a single nail around and on the ball of the foot. Joanna had the right foot – she spider-walked her nail tips from sole to heel, over and over, covering the ticklish flesh with unbearable tickling. Stephanie laughed her head off, red-faced and sweaty, her hair in tangles around her head.
“Brittany and Joanna deserve a good tickling,” Nicole whispered to Melissa. “Want to help Stephanie out?”
“Nah, she can take it,” Melissa said. “And besides, she was gonna do the same to them.” To Brittany and Joanna: “Faster! Get her good!”
“You got it!” Brittany said – she held back Stephanie’s toes and switched to a spider-walk on the stretched out sole. Joanna shifted her tickle target to the ticklish heel, nail tips flying, and Stephanie’s laughter went off the scale.
“Why’d you start here?” Meghan Meyer called from the end of the bridge. “I thought we were gonna gather at the meadow downstream.” She was with Lindsey Thomas, Melissa saw – Meghan was strawberry-blonde with blue eyes and freckles, Lindsey was blonde and blue-eyed with a deep summer tan. They were tiny girls, just 4 ft 11 inches in their bare feet – they weighed maybe 90 lbs soaking wet.
Morgan grabbed Ashley’s big toes and guitar-chorded the arches – the helpless laughter went up a notch. “We’re waiting for Anne and Tiffany,” she called back.
Meghan and Lindsey came closer. “So you’re using the time productively, right?” Lindsey said – it wasn’t a question.
“Of course,” Morgan said. “Right, Ashley?” But Ashley was laughing much too hard to answer, lost in ticklish delirium.
“Ow!” Lindsey said. She balanced on one foot and inspected the sole of the other. “Maybe going barefoot like this wasn’t such a good idea.”
Meghan grinned. “Dirty, too. Like mine,” she added, lifting a foot and flashing the sole. “Want me to get the dirt off?”
Lindsey laughed. “Tickle my feet clean, like Morgan’s doing to Ashley?”
“Hers weren’t all that dirty,” Morgan said, drawing fast, looping figure-eight’s around the balls of both feet – Ashley laughed even harder. “I just love to tickle her – she has such a pretty laugh.”
Morgan eased off, and Ashley dropped back to normal-rated laughter. “Do you want some of this?” she asked. She nodded toward Stephanie, laughing with wild abandon as the tickling fingernails roamed her soft upturned soles. “Or maybe Brittany and Joanna will let you have a turn with Stephanie... ”
“We’ll pass for now,” Meghan said. “C’mon, Lindsey, let’s find Candice and Sara.”
“We’ll come too,” Nicole said. The ticklish laughter followed them as they crossed the bridge to the other side.
The bank had an easy slope here – the girls went down to the water’s edge and headed downstream to the big flat rock that hung out over the stream. Just past the rock was a pool, scoured out by spring snow melt channeled between the bridge abutments. A rope hung from a tree branch – this place had been a swimming hole for generations. Laughter drifted down from the bridge, fainter here but still clear enough.
“Y’all go on,” Melissa said to Lindsey and Meghan. “Nicole and I will be along directly.”
“Listen to her – moonlight and magnolias!” Meghan said, and waded into the shallow water around the edge of the pool, headed downstream.
Lindsey followed. “She’ll start following NASCAR racing next,” she said, and they both laughed as they waded away.
Nicole gave Melissa a very odd look. “You’re starting to sound like Anne,” she said.
“It’s a family business,” Melissa said. “Working with the Kincaids, and dating Josh... I guess I’m starting to pick up the accent.” She sat on the rock, feet in the water. “Sit with me, Nicole.”
Nicole sat beside Melissa. “We’ve had some good times here,” she remarked.
“Yah,” Melissa agreed. “I’m glad we have this chance to spend time together.”
“Thank Candice for that,” Nicole said. “Planning this gathering took some effort.”
“How many d’you think there’ll be?” Melissa asked.
“Mmm...” Nicole said, thinking. “All of us on Tickle Street, and our friends... I guess 15, maybe 20.”
“Wonder if the twins’ll show up?”
“Candice invited ‘em,” Nicole said. “If everybody else shows, they’d make it 22.” She grinned. “Lots of ticklish feet, and I plan to tickle ‘em all! Well, not mine, of course – you’ll have to do that.”
“I think I can manage,” Melissa said mischievously.
“No doubt,” Nicole said. “So tell me about you and Josh. What made you decide?”
“Thought I was pregnant,” Melissa answered. “It was a false alarm, but we decided we kinda liked the idea... just not right away,” she added quickly. “I guess I’ll change my major to Business, ‘cause I’m marrying into a family operation.”
“Any ideas where and when?”
“On Proud Mary, of course,” Melissa answered. “This fall, after business slows down and we can take a honeymoon. It’s short notice, I know,” she added with another flash of guilt. “But we want to keep it small, and it’s not like we’ll have any trouble getting the venue.” A pause. “You’ll come, won’t you?” They had once been like sisters – that she had to ask was proof of how far they had grown apart.
“Couldn’t keep me away,” Nicole said, a little sadly.
“Hey, what kind of devilment are y’all plotting?” Anne Kincaid asked from behind them. Anne was Josh’s younger sister – she was 18, a cutie with a Southern accent, a great body, long light brown hair, long lashes and dazzling hazel eyes.
“Deciding who we’re gonna tickle,” Nicole answered quickly, looking around. “And you’re high on the list.”
Melissa looked too – she saw that Tiffany Kilpatrick was with Anne and the five girls from the bridge. Tiffany was a pretty girl, medium height, with a Rubenesque figure, fair skin, shoulder-length light brown hair and bright blue eyes.
“How about me?” Ashley asked. She wasn’t the least bit upset – getting tickled silly was just a normal, every-day hazard for the young women hereabouts.
Nicole laughed. “Be glad to – I’d like some variety today.”
“No lack of that,” Tiffany said.
“So many ticklish feet– ” Brittany started.
“ –so little time!” Joanna completed the thought, and landed a double rib-poke on Brittany. Brittany squealed and jumped back.
“Not now,” Tiffany advised. “Get in a tickle fight here, you’ll land on this rock and bust your ass.”
“Good thinking,” Morgan said. She stepped off the rock into the stream. “C’mon, there’s feet that need tickling!”
“Yours especially,” Brittany said, following after. The other five newcomers trooped after them, threatening each other good-naturedly, voices fading away as they waded downstream.
Bummer, thought Melissa. A few minutes before, it had seemed like old times again, sitting side-by-side and sharing confidences. But the moment had passed. “You seeing anybody?” she asked to fill the silence, embarassed that she didn’t know.
“I don’t have time for a boyfriend,” Nicole said. “Well, there’s one guy, another Pre-Med. We hook up sometimes, but mostly we study together. Romantic, huh?”
“It’s something, at least,” Melissa said, and immediately regretted it. “D’you see it turning into anything long-term?” she asked quickly.
“Maybe someday we’ll go into practice together,” Nicole said. She gathered her legs under her. “Ready to make me laugh?”
Melissa stood up and grinned. “Of course! Let’s go!”
They waded after the others. The stream bottom here was mixed sand and pebbles, easy on the feet. After another 50 yards or so, the bed widened out and the stream got shallower. Up ahead, two young women were laughing like mad – somebody was tickling them silly.
Melissa paused. “They’ve started already,” she said. “Listen!”
“Big surprise!” Nicole said. “Sounds like Meghan and Lindsey – let’s check it out.”
A few yards downstream, the stream bank leveled out in grassy area where the sun shone through the trees. Nicole waded ashore – Melissa joined her. The grass was soft under her bare feet.
Meghan and Lindsey were on their tummies a few yards away. Candice was sitting on Lindsey facing aft, with Lindsey’s legs trapped in the figure-four leg lock – her tickling fingernails danced on Lindsey’s ticklish soles. Sara had Meghan trapped the same way, guitar-chording the girl’s arches. Meghan and Lindsey laughed their heads off, eyes closed, tears of laughter running down their cheeks.
“Meghan and Lindsey, sure enough,” Melissa said. “Looks like they found Candice and Sara.”
“Candice and Sara found them,” Nicole corrected. “Ambushed ‘em from behind that big willow, probably.” She called out to Candice: “Hey sis, can I have some of that?”
“Find your own!” Candice called back. She was a little shorter than Nicole, and her hair was ash blonde, but there could be no doubt they were sisters – they shared the same bright blue eyes and delicate features. She tickled faster, and Lindsey’s laughter went off the charts.
“Shouldn’t be too hard,” Sara added. She was tanned, green-eyed, with long dark hair and a Dolly Parton build – a small girl with a trim waist and amazing upper body development. She switched to nail flicks on the balls of Meghan’s feet, forcing a flood of helpless laughter.
“Better go easy,” Melissa advised. “You’re gonna use ‘em up too fast that way.”
“Plenty more where they came from,” Candice said, tickling at warp speed. Lindsey lost it and laughed herself breathless. “Oops! Too soon!” Candice said.
“You’re too eager,” Sara said, drawing tickling circles on Meghan’s heels – Meghan laughed harder, lost in ticklish delirium. “Next time, pace yourself.”
“Yah, I suppose so,” Candice said. She made a show of inspecting Lindsey’s feet. “I didn’t quite tickle ‘em clean – guess I’ll have to try again. Ready, girlfriend?” and started in on Lindsey again.
“Ple– hehehe! –ease!” Lindsey begged. “AHAHA! HAHAHEHA! HAHA-HAHA-HAHAHAHA!”
“They’ll be at this for a while,” Nicole said. “C’mon, let’s see who else is getting a fingernail foot massage.”
A little further in, a lone oak tree cast a pool of deep shadow. More laughter came from the other side of the tree. “Somebody’s getting tickled back there,” Melissa said.
Nicole listened too. “Is that Anne laughing?”
“Sure is,” Melissa said – these days, Anne’s ticklish laughter was more familiar to her than Nicole’s. “Somebody’s getting her good.”
The girls circled around. Anne was hogtied on the grass – Brittany was kneeling at her trapped feet. She was tickling Anne’s feet two-handed, counter-marching her nail tips from toes to heels, getting great reactions and wave after wave of helpless laughter. She looked up and spotted them. “Hello again!” she said happily. “Are we having fun yet?”
“Looks like it,” Melissa said, raising her voice over Anne’s laughter.
“Nice to have a hobby everyone can enjoy,” Brittany said, grinning. She flicked her nails on Anne’s soles – Anne’s toes twitched as she laughed like mad. “Going barefoot like this was a good idea – saves time.”
“It does indeed,” Nicole said. “Is that all you’ve got?”
“Not hardly,” Brittany said. “Watch!” Still tickling with one hand, she pulled a hairbrush out of a back pocket – the round kind with bristles arranged radially around the handle and plastic knobs on the bristle tips. She rolled the handle between her palms – each little bristle-knob flicked Anne’s heels, tickling like crazy and driving Anne wild.
“You were right, back on the bridge,” Melissa whispered to Nicole. “Brittany could do with a few laughs.”
“My thoughts exactly,” Nicole whispered back. “One, two, three– ”
“GOTCHA!” the girls chorused – they grabbed Brittany, wrestled her down on her tummy and sat on her.
“Th... thanks,” Anne said, breathing hard. “Woo! That tickled a lot!”
“Well, ya got me,” Brittany said cheerfully. “Now what?”
“Three guesses,” Melissa said. “Gonna make trouble for us?”
“Nah, I’d just start off tired,” Brittany answered. “Hogtie?”
“Yup,” Melissa said, and tied Brittany’s hands behind her back. Nicole tied her ankles together, and Melissa completed the hogtie. She kneeled at Brittany’s feet and flexed her fingers over the upturned soles. “Get ready to laugh, ‘cause I’m gonna open a bag of freak on you!”
“Hey, aren’t y’all gonna untie me?” Anne asked.
Nicole kneeled and trapped Anne’s legs between her knees. “Eventually,” she said.
“Shit!” Anne said, disgusted. “OK, get it over– HAHAHA! HAHA-HAHA-HAHAHA!” as Nicole’s well manicured nails flicked her ticklish soles.
“Tickle her heels, Nicole,” Brittany said helpfully. “It drives her cra– HAHAHA! HAHEHA! HAHAHAHAHA!” as Melissa got to work, tickling with verve and gusto.
Melissa explored, looking for the sweet spots and gauging the results by the volume of laughter. She tickled between Brittany’s toes, two by two, getting a burst of helpless laughter each time. She held the toes back and tickled side to side under all ten toes. The stretched out soles got it next – she covered them with tiny nail flicks, tickling side to side. She hit gold, a spot in the arch just behind the sole crease, and Brittany went wild, laughing at the top of her lungs. Melissa made a Peace sign and circled the nails in the arch spots, and Brittany’s laughter went off the scale.
I don’t want to tickle her out too soon, thought Melissa. She eased off, looked over at Nicole and Anne. Anne laughed helplessly as Nicole’s nails spider-walked down her arches – tears of laughter ran from her closed eyes, her face was turning red from laughing. Melissa copied Nicole, covering Brittany’s arches with fiendish tickling. The heels were next, drawing overlapping circles and other tickling shapes while Brittany laughed and laughed.
“Amateur!” a female voice said behind Melissa. “She missed the best spot!” Melissa and Nicole quit tickling and looked up, giving their victims a much needed break. Vicky and Veronica Righetti, Melissa saw – Brittany’s twin older sisters, in matching tops and shorts. They were a little taller than Brittany, and wore their dark hair shoulder-length, but the family resemblance was strong – barefoot Mediterranean beauties with summer tans and dark eyes and lashes.
“Show ‘em, sis,” one twin said.
The other twin came closer. “Same tickle pattern as you, dummy!” she said, and reached down to give Brittany’s back arches a left-handed tickle, extending the nail strokes onto the heels.
“VICKIEE!” Brittany wailed. “AHAHAHAHA!”
Vicky quit and backed off. “Don’t let us stop you,” she said, sitting cross-legged to watch.
Veronica joined her. “Yah, Brittany really does have it coming – she got me good last night.”
“OH SHIT! HAHAHAHA! HAHA-HAHA-HAHAHA!” Brittany laughed as Melissa spider-walked her nails in her back arches. Anne started laughing again beside her, the happy result of tickling fingernails on ticklish feet.
“Get with the program, you two,” Veronica called, raising her voice over the ticklish laughter. “You’re going easy on them – let’s see how hard they can laugh!”
Melissa switched to two-handed tickling, flicking both back arches with her nail tips and driving Brittany wild. She moved up to the soles again – Brittany’s toes twitched and curled as she laughed like a madwoman. Melissa flicked and scratched the sole creases, drew counter-rotating circles down the arches, forcing a wild stream of ticklish laughter. She held back Brittany’s toes and raked her nails from sole to heel, drawing four parallel zig-zag lines and tickling Brittany to the edge of madness. She repeated the foot rake, alternating between feet, trying to out-tickle Nicole.
“Not bad!” Nicole said. Helpless laughter poured out of Anne as Nicole’s nails flicked her sensitive soles. “Guess I’ll have to try harder.” She gave Anne’s arches another burst of nail flicks – Anne howled with forced mirth. Then a two-handed spider walk on both heels, and Anne’s laughter went off the charts.
“That the best you can do?” Melissa asked. She got on Brittany’s back arches and heels again, tickling at warp speed, and tickled Brittany’s breath away. “Hah! Beat ya!” she said.
“You’re keeping Anne going like that on purpose,” Veronica said. “Go ahead, finish her off.”
“Busted!” Nicole answered cheerfully. “Well, OK,” she said, and speeded up. Anne lost it and ran out of air, too breathless to laugh. “Now I’ll untie you,” Nicole said.
“How’d Nicole and Melissa catch you, Little Sis?” Veronica asked.
Brittany rolled onto her side – Melissa didn’t try to hold on. “They kinda snuck up on me,” she said.
“Then you deserved it,” Vicky said. She freed Brittany’s ankles but left her hands tied. “Move aside, Melissa.”
“OH NOOO!” Brittany yelled.
The twins sat cross-legged, facing each other – each grabbed one of Brittany’s ankles. “Yup,” Veronica said.
“Seems to me– ” Vicky continued.
“ –you need– ”
“ –a lesson– ”
“ –in situational awareness,” the twins finished in chorus.
“PLEEASE!” Brittany begged. “HAHAHA! HAHAHA-HAHA-HAHAHAHA!” as the twins got to work, tickling with skill and enthusiasm. Melissa stood and gave them plenty of room. Nicole had untied Anne – they moved to join her.
“That was mean, letting Nicole tickle me like that!” Anne said. Melissa felt a twinge of guilt – Anne was her friend.
So was Nicole – wasn’t she?
“But I rescued you from Brittany,” Nicole said. “You owed me for that.”
“Sounds like Brittany’s paying for her fun,” Anne observed – she wasn’t really upset. “Listen to her laugh!”
“Serves her right,” Angie said – she had come up behind them. “I owe her some payback for last week. Maybe I’ll– ”
“Better not just yet,” Anne cautioned. “Her sisters are tickling her – they might decide to grab you too.”
“Good advice,” Angie said. “Let’s see what else is going on.”
“Y’all go ahead,” Melissa said. “Nicole and I’ll catch up later.”
“Ditching your friends?” Nicole asked after the others left.
“Not all of them, I hope,” Melissa said.
“No, of course not,” Nicole said contritely. “I shouldn’t have said that.”
“Forget it,” Melissa answered, knowing that they wouldn’t.