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Oni Dorei (Novel Preview)

Oni Dorei

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Title: Oni Dorei
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DES: It started with a challenge of indurance and ended with two girls, Lucy and Sarah becoming fast friends. After several tickle challenges they soon take on quests. That's where the real tickle challenges begins.


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CHAPTER ONE​

The market was crowded with hundreds of chattering people who were making their way from shop to shop hoping to get the best deals. The market was always like that. Filled to the brim and hard to walk in, but for those who had been amongst these markets their entire lives they knew how to traverse the streets without getting stepped on.
Sarah sighed deeply when she got to one of those shops. She had been hoping to buy a small bag of grapes to snack on, but when she finally arrived she saw they were all sold out. “So when will you be getting more?” The girl asked, hoping the answer would be today.
“Not until next week.” Answered the shop attendant.
Sarah was a beautiful girl. She had long brunette hair that fell to small rounded shoulders and dark brown eyes and she had ample breasts. She stood exactly five feet tall and was garbed in a black shirt that was tucked neatly into a pair of pants. On her feet she wore ankle high boots. The girl carried a small shopping bag in her right hand and strapped onto her left hip was a tiny bag filled with gold coins. She didn’t have that much money on her, but had enough to spoil herself with some grapes.
The girl worked at a fair. There she helped people run their attractions. It was an easy job especially since all she did was help set one up or rope people into checking it out, but sometimes wished she had an attraction of her own. She only made five gold coins which wasn’t a lot. The girl found it almost impossible to get ahead making the type of money she was.
“Excuse me?” Came a voice, causing Sarah to turn. Standing a few feet away was a girl named Sam. Sam too was beautiful. She had long brunette hair that was tied back. Dark brown eyes, small rounded shoulders and perky breasts. The girl was garbed in a white tank-top, matching skirt that fell to her bare knees and white shoes on her feet. The girl stood a few inches shorter than Sarah did. Both were eighteen years old.
“Yes it’s you Sarah.” The girl said.
“Sam? What are you doing here?” Sarah asked, smiling brightly. The girls knew each other from the fair. They weren’t exactly friends, but they did get along well with each other.
“Just doing a little shopping.” Sam replied. “I bought some grapes.” The girl said, holding up a clear bag that was filled with grapes.
“Oh yeah…?” Sarah said, looking longingly at the food she wanted to snack on.
“Yeah. I love grapes. Do you want some?” The girl asked.
Sarah was tempted to say yes, but knew she didn’t really need any. She had enough food to last her the rest of the week. “No thanks.” Sarah said, waving her hand dismissively. It was one of the toughest decisions she had to make that day so far.
“Hey girl.” Came another voice.
Sarah and Sam turned and saw a girl standing a few more feet away. This girl had short red hair that fell to her cheek bones with bright blue eyes, small rounded shoulders and perky breasts. She wore a black shirt, matching skirt and knee high boots. The girl’s clothes looked old.
“What?” Sam asked, rolling her eyes at the girl.
“Do you have any gold coins?” The girl asked.
“Yes. And I’m not giving any to you.” Sam said, turning to Sarah and laughing. “Can you believe some of the bums these days?” The girl asked. “Asking a beautiful girl like me for a hand out?” Sarah didn’t laugh or smile. It was Sam’s attitude that kept the two from being real friends.
“I’m not asking for a hand out. I just wanted to challenge you.” Said the red head, putting her hands high on her hips.
“What’s your name kid?” Sam asked, turning to face the girl. “And where is your mommy and daddy?”
“My name's Lucy and I don’t know where my mommy and daddy are. I’m nineteen and living on my own.” The girl said, with a smirk. “Where are your mommy and daddy? Buying you a new horse somewhere?” The girl asked, glancing around.
“Oh shut up!” Sam roared, clinching her hands into tight fists.
“What kind of challenge?” Sarah asked, peering around Sam.
“Ok.” Lucy said, nodding. “This is my challenge. I’ll let one of you tie me up and tickle me for an hour. If I beg for mercy or anything you win my three coins.” Lucy began, lifting up her hand and showing off three gold coins. “If I loose you only have to give me one.”
Both Sarah and Sam blinked several times. The contest seemed simple enough and even if they couldn’t get the girl to beg for mercy they wouldn’t lose much. “I even brought rope.” Said Lucy, reaching behind her back and removing several pieces of rope.
“I’ll do it.” Sam said.
“Ok cool.” Lucy said, nodding her head.
“Wait…” Sam said, her voice trailed. “Two things. One how do you know I won’t just tie you up and steal your coins? Two… How do I even know you're ticklish? This could be a set up.”
“Well… I’m just going to have to trust you aren’t I?” Lucy asked.
“I’ll hold the money.” Sarah said, stepping forwards. “You can trust me. I work for the fair and here…” Sarah reached into her pocket and removed an identification card from her pocket. “You can hold onto this just to be safe. Hide it somewhere if you want until this challenge is over.”
“Hmm…” Lucy said, scratching her chin. “Ok I memorized the card.”
“What?” Sarah said, furrowing her eyebrows.
“Don’t worry about it.” Lucy said, patting Sarah’s shoulder. “So just to be clear only one of you can tie me up and tickle me. So it’s going to be you… So Sarah hold the gold coins please.” Lucy said, handing the gold coins over to Sarah.
“Wait. I don’t know if you're ticklish or not.” Sam said, handing over one gold coin to Sarah.
“Well… You can find out.” Said Lucy holding out her arms. “Check anywhere.” The girl said.
“Well now where to…” Sam began, she quickly dug her fingers into Lucy’s underarms and started tickling. Lucy burst into laughter and pulled away just as the tickling started. Sam’s eyes went wide and a smirk creased her lips.
“Well?” Said Sarah, looking at Sam.
“She’s incredibly ticklish.” Said Sam, looking from Sarah to Lucy who was doubled over and holding her stomach. “Her entire body shook so badly when I started to tickle. No way she can last an hour.” Sam dumped more coins into Sarah’s hands. “I’ll up the bet.” She said. “Here’s seven more gold coins.”
“I don’t have seven more.” Said Lucy.
“Don’t worry about it. If I win I’ll get your coins and you pay off the rest by working at my attraction.” Said Sam, with a smile.
“Deal.” Said Lucy, with a nod.
Sam and Sarah followed Lucy out of the market and down several alleyways until they reached a large, open area. The area was cluttered with wooden crates and strange pipes that poked out of the sides of buildings. “Here.” Said Lucy, handing the rope over to Sam. “Now where do you want me?” She asked.
Sam glanced around the area examining everything. “Here.” She said, finally pointing to a pipe that was poking out of one building and entering another horizontally. The girl imagined tying Lucy’s arms to the pipe leaving her underarms and sides completely helpless.
Lucy stepped up to the pipe and put out her arms. Sam tied them quickly to the pipe. “Can you escape?” Sam asked, stepping away from the girl to look at her work.
“No.” Said Lucy, pulling on the ropes to prove she was trapped.
“Good.” Said Sam. Without warning she dug her fingers into Lucy’s underarms and started tickling. The tickling took Lucy by surprise and she burst into ticklish laughter and began thrashing wildly trying to free herself.
Sarah sighed deeply. She felt sorry for Lucy. The girl was incredibly ticklish, completely helpless and couldn’t beg for mercy for one hour or loose her gold and work for Sarah. The contest was really one sided.
Lucy slowly tickled Lucy’s underarms, dragging her nails across the ticklish hollows before moving onto her ribs. There she gave each rib a quick tickle before moving onto her sides. The whole while Lucy laughed hysterically and tried to free herself, but Sam had tied her too tightly.
“Are we ready to give up?” Sam asked, digging her nails into Lucy’s underarms again. She focused on those for the longest time.
Sarah found a crate to sit down on. “I’m keeping time.” She said, glancing at her watch. “You still have forty minutes to go Sam.” The girl announced.
“Don’t worry. She’ll be giving up soon.” Sam said, smiling brightly. The girl lifted Lucy’s shirt and began tickling her bare belly. She spread her fingers wide and tickled the belly mercilessly, then she traced her index finger over the quivering flesh and dug her finger into the girl’s navel.
Lucy’s laughter grew in intensity and her struggles grew even more frantic. Her cheeks were a bright red color and tears were forming in the corners of her eyes. As the girl laughed she stamped her feet and closed her eyes tightly. Sarah could tell Lucy was about to scream for mercy very soon.
Sarah continued to torture Lucy’s navel for a few more minutes. “Aw! Isn’t the cute little baby ticklish? Feel like giving up yet?” Sam asked, not slowly down on her torture.
Lucy didn’t say anything. She simply laughed and stamped her feet. The girl’s hands were clutched tightly into fists.
Sam dug her fingers into Lucy’s right underarm and with her left right hand she started tickling Lucy’s belly. Lucy’s laughter grew louder and her thrashing grew more and more frantic.
“Tickle tickle!” Sam teased.
Grabbing the sides of Lucy’s shirt the girl lifted it exposing Lucy’s bare belly. Spreading her fingers wide she attacked the helpless, tender flesh. Lucy’s laughter grew even louder. She pulled and wiggled on her binds, but still no matter how hard Sam tickled, the girl refused to beg for mercy.
“Twenty minutes to go.” Sarah said, she had to admit she was surprised Lucy hadn’t begged for mercy yet. She was quite ticklish herself and knew she would have already pleaded for mercy in the first ten minutes.
Sam reached up under her shirt and began attacking her naked underarms. First she tickled and poked the underarms crazily, than slowly raked her nails across the ticklish hollows. Lucy only laughed and stamped her feet.
“I bet her feet are really ticklish.” Sarah thought, looking down at the girl’s feet. “I want Lucy to win though so I won’t give any hints.”
“Come on! Just give up.” Said Sam, quickly changing tactics. The girl was now tickling both of Lucy’s underarms at the same time.
Her nails slowly dragged over the flesh before the tickling grew faster and faster. “Come on!” She cried. Sarah could tell Sam was getting desperate. Her fingers quickly moved over Lucy’s torso. She moved from her underarms, to her ribs, to her stomach and sides then back to her underarms. She tried tickling different parts at the same time, but no matter what, Lucy wouldn’t speak. She only laughed, stamped her feet and wriggled wildly under Sarah’s fingers.
“Time's up.” Sarah announced, getting to her feet.
“Damn!” Sam cursed. The girl gave Lucy a dirty look, but Lucy couldn’t see. Her eyes were closed, tears were streaming down her cheeks. Even though the tickling had stopped Lucy was still giggling.
“Tough luck.” Sarah said.
“Shut up!” Sam snapped and with that she turned on her heels and walked away.
“W-wait…” Lucy breathed. “Untie me first…”
“It’s ok.” Sarah said, as she started to undo Lucy’s binds. “I’ll get you out.” Lucy nodded. “You were amazing. Believe it or not I was rooting for you.”
“Really?” Lucy asked, when her right arm was free. Sarah started working on the left. “Thanks. So we make a good team, huh?” Lucy asked.
“Yeah I guess so.” Sarah said, but wasn’t sure if that was true.
“Why don’t we start up an attraction at this fair I keep hearing about. You can rope them in and I can take their money.” Said Lucy. When the girl was free she wiped away her tears and stretched her arms above her head. “What do you say?” She asked.
“Doing what? This?” Sarah asked.
“Yeah. I’m tougher than I look.” Lucy said, puffing out her chest. “I could do this all day. Just give me a minute to breathe and wipe the tears away and I’m ready to go.” Sam said, nodding. “We could charge one gold coin for five minutes, five gold coins for ten minutes and ten gold coins for an hour. Whoever gets me to beg for mercy wins all the gold coins we made that day. How does that sound?” Lucy asked.
Sarah thought about it for a moment. It sounded risky, but the girl also sounded confident. And she did put Sam in her place. “Well… Ok…” The girl said, nodding. “Let’s do it.”
***
The next day when Lucy arrived at the fair she saw Sarah had rented out a small tent and a pair of wooden stocks. “Are you sure about this?” Sarah asked, looking at the sign she had painted herself. The sign read, “Tickle Challenge. Win Gold!” The girl felt a little embarrassed drawing the sign, but gold was gold no matter how they got it.
“Yeah.” Lucy said.
Sarah looked down at Lucy’s clothes. This time she was wearing a white tank top that only hid her breasts and matching skirt that fell a few inches above her knees. “You have a great body.” Sarah said, then burst into laughter.
“Don’t hit on me. And you better keep me safe too.” Lucy said, pointing a stern finger at Sarah. “No fondling.”
“Don’t worry.” Sarah said, patting Lucy’s shoulder. “Security’s free around here. See that guy and that guy?” The girl asked, pointing at two very large and scary looking men. “I just call and they come to your rescue.”
“Good.” Lucy said, nodding. “I have to admit I’m a little nervous. So make sure people know they aren’t allowed to tickle my boobs or… down there.” Lucy said, pointing at her crotch.
“Don’t worry.” Sarah said, smiling warmly. “I also have this.” Sarah reached behind the counter and removed a small club she had purchased. The club was only a few feet in length, but looked like it could do some serious danger. “Extra security.” Sarah said. “I thought we could use it.”
Lucy couldn’t help but laugh. “I like where your head is.” The girl said.
“Oh I came up with an idea if you want to hear it.” Said Sarah.
“Sure.” Lucy said.
“How does this sound. People can pay a little extra to make you a little more helpless. See those nails at the top of the stocks?” Sarah asked, Lucy turned and noticed the small nails protruding out of the stocks where her feet were supposed to go. “Those nails are used to tie back peoples toes. So we could have people pay an extra coin or two so they could use those nails. I have some string for people to use.”
Lucy nodded. “That’s a great idea.” The girl said.
“Thanks.” Said Sarah. “We could also let people pay a little extra to get some help from a friend. Like for a few minutes or so.”
“Ok.” Lucy said. “Nothing too bad. If we can earn extra coins like that…” Lucy’s eyes lit up with excitement. “Ok let’s do this.” The girl said. Sarah helped Lucy into the stocks. After binding her hands above her head the girl moved outside.
“Ladies and gentlemen!” Sarah called above the noise of the crowds as they moved from one attraction to the next. “Inside this tent is an incredibly ticklish girl who is challenging you today! If you can make her beg for mercy, scream out uncle, or ask you to stop you will win this ever growing jar of money. Inside now are ten gold coins, but at the end of the day there may be fifty or even one hundred gold coins!”
The moment Sarah said “one hundred gold coins” a small group of people halted in their tracks.
“How much?” Asked a guy with long black hair and dark brown eyes.
“One gold coin for five minutes, five gold coins for ten minutes and ten gold coins for one hour. Also if you give two gold coins extra I can tie back her toes and she’ll be extra helpless for you.”
“I’ll try.” The man said, handing over one gold coin.
“Good luck sir, but before you start…” Sarah leaned her head close to the man’s ear and whispered something. His eyes went wide and his cheeks grew a bright red color.
“I wouldn’t touch her there!” The guy shouted, shaking his head. Sighing deeply he entered the tent.
Lucy licked her lips as she mentally prepared herself for what was about to happen. The guy went to his knees in front of Lucy’s feet. “Ticklish here?” He asked, as he began stroking her feet with his fingers.
Lucy burst into laughter and started kicking her feet wildly. The guy smiled as he quickly picked up his torture. Slowly he raked his fingers up and down Lucy’s ticklish soles. His fingers slipped between each of her toes before he started scratching the heels wildly. Lucy’s laughter slowly grew as she wriggled left and right in her seat. The girl kicked her feet wildly, but no matter how hard she kicked her feet she just couldn’t escape the guy’s torture.

 
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