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The Black Widow (Revised and rewritten)

jersey_tickler

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The Black Widow
by Jersey_tickler and Scinsor


Chapter 1
Slipping on the peel of Anna Banana

Anna Fischer walked along the highway, with determination. She was eighteen, had brunette hair, Anna had something of an punk rock look to her, with baggy black pants with chains and an Avenged Sevenfold tee-shirt. Red Converse All Star sneakers donned her feet with black and white stripped socks. Anna was very precocious, and slightly angry at the world. She finally built up the courage to tell her parents that she was coming out of the closet and they flipped out. So Anna decided to run away and live with her brother in Portland. She was currently walking to the train station and her feet were killing her.
Spotting a bench and took a seat to rest her dogs. Then five minutes later, a red pickup truck slowed down to a stop and the driver leaned her head out the window to talk to her. The driver had a brown cowboy hat, plaid sleeveless shirt, blue jeans and had long blonde hair.

“Hey there, darling, you wanna ride”?

Relieved to see a pretty face, Anna shook her head yes and threw her bag in the back and climbed in the passenger seat.

“My name’s Suzie said the driver, what’s your handle there, cutie pie and where ya heading”.

Anna was taken aback by the cutie pie comment, no one had ever called her that.

“Hi, I’m Anna, nice to meet you Suzie, I appreciate the ride”. “I’m hitching to the train station so I can head to Portland”.

“Shucks scoffed Suzie, it ain’t no problem. What’s a gal like me supposed to do when she sees a young thing like you walking the highway, with all those perverted swingin dicks around”. “Don’t care for the men folk none, haven’t for over ten years now”.

“Really asked Anna, slightly interested, are you bisexual.

“Naw said Suzie, I’m full blooded lesbian, but I hope that doesn’t make you feel uncomfy darling”!

“Not at all said Anna, I’m bi-curious, actually”.

The two continued to make small talk and then Suzie pulled up to the train station, which was closed.

“Fuck she cursed, I guess I better check into that motel we passed a mile back”.


“Motel my patoot scoffed Suzie. “Since it’s pretty darn late, how’d you like to come home and have supper with me, and I’ll drive ya back to this here train station tomorra”. “You’d be saving money on a motel room too she added with a wink.

Anna thought for a second. Why not, she seemed nice, and she was a woman after all. The least that could happen was her trying to get in her pants, but that was actually something that she would welcome.

“That sounds like a better offer agreed Anna, I accept.

Suzie drove her home, which was a big mansion right outside Northeast L.A. The guy at the gate let her in, as she had her own private security.

“Wow, this is a beautiful palace said Anna with her mouth wide open in awe. “Are you a rich country singer or something”.

“Nope answered Daisy, my ex-husband was an oil tycoon and he cheated on me after seven years of marriage, so I cleaned him out and he gave me 5.6 million dollars. That and I have my own business, so I’m self contained, sugar”.

“And what is your job asked Anna, what do you do”?

“I’ll tell ya later, hun, let’s get some grub, ya must be starving”!

“That I am, what’s for dinner”?

“I got my roast beef stew, with carrots and taters explained Suzie, how’s that grab ya”?

Sounds good said Anna, can’t wait to try it”.

After dinner, Suzie gave Anna the tour and then invited Anna into the living room to relax”.

“How old are you, Anna asked Suzie.

“I’m eighteen, almost nineteen began Anna, I was planning to go to UCLA next year but my parents threw a fit when they caught me with a girl”. “Now they said that I was on my own with college, so I don’t know what to do”.

“Oh asked Suzie, so what’s in Portland”?

“My brother Derek said Anna, he runs a wedding planner business with his mother and told me I could live with him as long as I was going to college or working”. “He makes good money and won’t charge me rent as long as I chip in for groceries and what not”.

“Sounds like a pretty good offer darling agreed Suzie, now I’m gonna have a smoke”.

“Can I bum one asked Anna, I am so tense right now”.

“Have all you want said Suzie offering her pack of Marlbaro Lights, I’ve been a smoker for over sixteen years, I get ya”.

Anna took a cigarette from Suzie’s pack and lit it up. Taking a long drag, she exhaled and smiled. “My mother told me smoking would stunt my growth, yet I stopped growing at sixteen and started smoking at seventeen, how ironic”.

“How tall are ya honey asked Suzie with interest.

“I’m 5”4” said Anna, not technically a midget though”.

“Yeah, I know I seem like a giant compared to y’all smiled Suzie, I’m just over six foot tall”.

Anna could tell, and was really intrigued by the size of this southern belle. She always fantasized about a Amazon woman taking advantage of her and making her the pet of her desires.

“Care for some iced tea offered Suzie, as you look awfully hot and could use some refreshment, eh now”?

“Indeed agreed Anna, it is rather warm”.

“Maybe you’d feel a lot cooler if ya took off them there clothes, specially those darn shoes”?

“Thanks said Anna, but I’m quite self conscious of being half naked in front of people, and I actually love wearing shoes. Especially these because I like the designs”.

“Me too agreed Suzie, they are cute”!

Suzie went to get the tea, but she mixed half a sleeping pill in Anna’s glass, it was party time”. She brought the tea into the living room and served Anna a glass.

“So Anna, being a bit bi-curious, have ya done some experimenting”?

“Not really admitted Anna, just kissed a couple girls here and there. I let one fondle my breasts while we made out, but then my parents busted us”.

“That is a darn shame replied Suzie. Say Anna, you wouldn’t be ticklish by chance, would ya”?

“Oh God yes blurted Anna, I am insanely ticklish. It is my greatest weakness and you are the first person that I told this, wow”!.

“Well tickling isn’t just used for torture explained Suzie, me and all my gal pals use it to pleasure each other”. “Tie and strip ourselves down, then tickle, tickle, tickle”.

”Wow breathed Anna sipping her tea, that sounds scary, yet kind of fun”. “But I’m too chicken shit to try it though. Say, where’s your bathroom, Suzie, I really gotta pee”.

“Up them stairs, first door on ya right” directed Suzie with her hand.

Anna raced up the stairs, while Suzie smiled evilly and drank her iced tea.


Interlude
December 28th, 1979

”Robin it’s time we had a talk”?

“Oh God, Jerry, not this again”. “Look I think it would be a big mistake if we had a serious relationship, it’s unprofessional”.

“No, it’s not that assured Jerry, I’ve been talking to my fellow producers and they tell me that our industry is slowly starting to go down the slope”.

“What, that’s ridiculous, how can they stop funding our films, there is so much money in porn, it’d be fool hardy to pull out while we’re ahead”.

“No, we’re not going out of business stated Jerry, but our business might be down-sizing a bit. You see, films on the big screen on starting to become too much money to make. The profits are nice, but it takes a lot of spending money to make more money. My producers want to make adult pictures on videotape, because video projectors will give help us save money and we can still make decent pay. That and they want to hire B-level porn stars who they can pay for half of what we’re paying you, Dirk, John, and Tracy.

“But Jerry, I’m an actress and it’s not just about the money, it’s about the art of eroticism and true meaning behind porn. “And am I going to lose money as a result of this transition.

“You may not be making what you are making now but you will be taken care of, because Mr. Hudson likes you and thinks you’re better than Traci”.

“Of course I’m better than that little bitch spat Robin, she was a child when she entered this business. And after that scandal when all her movies were revealed to be child porn, she ruined the lives of two producers”. Why would you hire a girl like that after the stunt she pulled, Jack was a friend of yours and she ruined him.

“Now honey, she was broke and desperate. “I lied about my age when I was in Nam, so I understand her reason for doing so. Besides even if Jack knew, he still would’ve let her act in his films regardless. And I hired her because she’s quite good at what she does and is damn sexy.

Robin gave a pout and grunted at that remark.

But not as beautiful as you, pussycat he smiled, now let’s just enjoy these last couple days of the swinging 70s. Who knows, maybe the 80s will be the one of the greatest eras of all time. Don’t worry about the industry, you’re going to be just fine and nothing bad is going to happen".

Robin tried to smile, but something told her deep down that this was only the beginning of the end.


Anna exited the bathroom and walked downstairs, she was feeling quite tired and decided to turn in early. But first, she would need Suzie to show her to the room she’d be sleeping in. Unless she wanted her to sleep in her bed, which would be totally awkward. Not that she hadn’t fantasized about sleeping with a woman, but she didn’t really know Suzie. Walking into the living room, she frowned when she discovered Suzie wasn’t where she left her.

“Suzie she called, where are you”.

No answer, nothing but silence.

Walking towards the kitchen, she was taken aback when she felt someone grab her shoulders. Then Anna gave a yelp when she found herself being thrown to the floor. It was Suzie, and she was towering over Anna with a sadistic grin spread on her face.

”Well now she began, I’d say it’s Bedtime for Anna, so let’s get these here duds off ya girlie”!

Kneeling to the floor, she quickly unlaced Anna’s Converse All Stars. Anna giggled as Suzie yanked off each shoe and threw it over her shoulder.

“Cute socks complimented Suzie, nice lil stripey stripes all over em”! Whatta ya say we take em off your dogs, they seem to be a barking”!

“Not my socks pleaded Anna, but Suzie could tell by her tone that she was secretly playing along. Pulling them down to the heel, she yanked them off at the toes and sent flying across the room to join Anna’s sneakers. Holding both feet closely, she cooed at Anna’s pasty white size sevens, with purple polish”.

“Well lookee here, ya got BARE FEET crowed Suzie. And lookee at those toes, look like yummy lil grapes”!. She brought both feet to her face and inhaled deeply, as Anna winced.

“Pee yoo exclaimed Suzie pinching her nose shut, ya got the stinky feet lil girl, whew”!

Anna giggled some more, and fanned out her toes as if inviting Suzie to play with them. But instead Suzie seized her T-shirt, and pulled it up over her head.

“Whee doggies, I love how ya bra matches your lil piggy toes darling, now let’s see these here underpants.

Unbuckling Anna’s black baggy pants, she unfastened them and pulled the pants off the teen’s legs in one swoop. Now all Anna had on was her bra, and tye dyed panties.

“Awwwww, y’all so cute in your lil underwears, now whatta ya say I tuck ya in”.

“Can I have a bedtime story asked Anna in her best little girl voice, pleaasssse”!

“More like a nursery rhyme smiled Suzie, wiggling Anna’s big toe. “This lil piggie went to market she sang.

“What about the other piggies asked Anna, still using her child voice, what did they do”?

Suzie grinned and finished piggying Anna’s toes, then she scooped up Anna and carried her upstairs, with her bare feet dangling over her arms. But when she plopped Anna on the bed, she was out like a light. Chuckling with pride, Suzie decided to move Anna to another room. A much more secret room.


“What the hell?”

Anna woke up, as if from a deep slumber. She was no longer in the driver’s bed, but tied to an inverted wooden frame with her arms out to her sides. This isn’t right…

Oddly, Anna wasn’t frightened. She felt strangely calm, but her senses were heightened and Anna was keenly aware that someone was watching her from the shadows. She also realized that she was still in her bra and panties.

“Hey…what the hell, let me go. Are you gonna fuckin rape me or something? I want to have sex with you, you don’t need to do this. If you wanted to tie me up you should have said something! Let me out goddammit!”

Suzie emerged from the shadows, dressed in a tight black dress that emphasized her well shaped, large breasts, and a fishnets over her long slender, sexy legs. The blonde hair was gone, instead had flowing black hair was down to her shoulders and she had black lipstick and eye-shadow on, as well as long, black fingernails.

“You know Anna, sex doesn’t really interest me all that much. I have what you might call a tickle fetish, and that’s how I really get off. Nothing turns me on more than a young girls squealing laughter as I caress her tender skin or stroke it with a nice stiff feather. You’ll find out, soon enough.”

“Shit, is that what this whole thing was about? You just wanted to tickle me this whole time! Fuck you, let me out of here!” Anna protested. The idea of being tickled by this maniac was not a pleasant one. She had to admit, however, that the situation was just a little hot…and the driver looked damn sexy at the moment.

The driver looked the young girl up and down, licking her lips as she observed Anna’s soft white flesh, her perky breasts and curvy middle, round ass and perfect legs. It all ended in the cutest pair of feet the driver had ever seen, with amazing little round toes with black nail polish. She grabbed a long, black feather from a box to the side and approached the helpless teen.

“So, you say you’ve never been tickled before? Well, lets see how you like it my dear.”

Before Anna could protest the Driver began to stroke Anna’s genital area with the feather. Anna drew in a sharp breath. It felt amazing! “Mmmm…”

“Oh, you like that do you?” The Driver asked. “How about this.’

She began to stroke more furiously along the edge of Anna’s pussy, using the stiffness of the feather to push it harder. Anna began to giggle furiously.

“Holy shit, that tickles! Heehee, what the fuck?!” It tickled a lot, and yet felt good at the same time. What the hell was this?

“Hm, I think you like that a bit too much,” the Driver said. “Lets try this one.”

She attacked Anna’s midsection with her fingers, digging them into her ribs and licking her bellybutton at the same time.

Anna flailed wildly on the frame. It tickled really bad! Having never been tickled before, Anna was exceptionally sensitive to the Suzie’s probing fingers. She howled with laughter as her body was assaulted by ten tickling fingers and one wet, pink tongue. In a way Anna was enjoying it, but as the tickling continued it became more and more unbearable. Anna’s sweet laughter was interspersed with adorable begging for mercy. Suzie drank it in, quenching her thirst for tickle torture with the eighteen year olds hysterical squealing.

“Whats wrong little girl? You don’t like the tickling? Oh coochie coochie coo, tickle tickle little girl. Yes, laugh, that’s all you can do. Coochie coo my ticklish darling, you aren’t going anywhere. Just take it. Take it, you ticklish little bitch!”

“Oh god! Noooo!” Anna squealed. “Please, I can’t take this anymore. Oh god, stop!”

Suzie moved her wiggling fingers into Anna’s smooth underarms. Her tender young flesh had never before felt tickling and it drove her into hysterics. The laughter increased and Anna no longer had he breath to beg for mercy. She just wailed and bucked on the wooden frame, unable to escape. Suzie continued the assault, tickling Anna’s nipples with quick strokes of her fingers while fingering herself with her free hand.

“Mm, yeah laugh for me bitch. Laugh, you know it tickles. Mm, yeah. Tickle tickle my sexy little punk rocker.”

“What…what the fuck! Oh god, stop it!”

Anna was becoming delusional. This was much more than she bargained for. But she promised to herself that if she ever got free of this, this tickling bitch was a dead woman.

“Mmm, now how about some tools my dear?”

Suzie moved to her box, granting Anna a brief reprieve. Then Suzie grabbed a brush and an electric toothbrush. She thought for a moment, then stopped and stripped herself down to her bra and panties. Now only in her underwear and fishnets, the Suzie grabbed her tools and approached her helpless tickle victim.

“So how do you like the tickling so far my dear? I should warn you, however, its only just begun. We’re not stopping till I cum dear, and that can take quite a while.”

“Oh god, no more please. I’m gonna kill you you stupid bitch!” Anna gasped.

“Oh really? Well lets see how you like this!

She clicked the electric toothbrush on and began to tickle Anna’s erect nipples, while she applied the brush to her armpits. This double attack made Anna’s sexy body squirm, producing a heavier laughter with more pleas.

“Goddammit! Oh my god that fucking tickles! Stop it! Gahahad, you bitch!”

“Mm yeah, beg. Beg for me to stop! Ooh yeah, beg for it!”

The brush’s stiff bristles glided along Anna’s smooth skin, tickling horribly. And the electric toothbrush whirred and buzzed as it stroked her nipples over and over again. Still, it felt oddly good, despite how badly it tickled.

Suzie furiously fingered herself as she tickled her victim, taking great pleasure in every stroke and every giggle. This was truly the only way to get off. Suzie continued this charade for another half hour and then Anna passed out, which gave the demonic looking woman a chance to take a cold shower.
 
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Cool story dude, its a lot better than my version (thanks for leaving some of my script in there though, haha). This story is gonna be the shit bro
 
It's a cool story because we're both writing it dude! I kept your script for the tickling in because we're in this together. You're a damn fine writer and I'm glad to be working with ya again.
 
Nice work guys - cute punk girl and sassy cowgirl is a good combo. I recognise some classic JT goodness in there too.

Can we expect sequel anytime? :D
 
Awesome ride!

J.T,

This is what I love about tickling stories! The sadistic female ticklers with their childish little tickle torture games!

Awesome story! I loved it!

PS: We'll be working together real soon!
 
I must say, this is one of the BEST stories Ive read in a LONG time! The character description and contrast is brilliant! Fantastic work my friends!
 
I enjoyed that a lot. The interlude threw me off but I like the switch and how it's a real story with more depth to it like that. Go Jersey! :)
 
I liked that you added more to the story, but (hopefully this doesn't sound insulting) I liked the first version better. I liked the father/daughter interlude as well.

I wish you continued success on this series and look forward to additional chapters.:parrot1:
 
Not at all, i thought the father/daughter interlude was good too because it was more personal. Kind of like Ralph Finnes in Red Dragon, and his tramatizing childhood. But the whole porn interlude was essential for the next chapter, so i had to establish the set up for Juliet's story, and then eventually Francine who had to interview the porn star has been. Think of the first one as a deleted scene on a DVD or something lol!
And one day, I plan on making this an actual movie.
 
Not at all, i thought the father/daughter interlude was good too because it was more personal. Kind of like Ralph Finnes in Red Dragon, and his tramatizing childhood. But the whole porn interlude was essential for the next chapter, so i had to establish the set up for Juliet's story, and then eventually Francine who had to interview the porn star has been. Think of the first one as a deleted scene on a DVD or something lol!
And one day, I plan on making this an actual movie.

Well, looks like I'll just have to get over it huh??

Hope you're working on more of this series-can't wait to see it.
 
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