Desire

SoundSiren · Dec 12, 2009

Thanks to Myth for encouraging me to post this one. Enjoy.

Desire

Sweet pleasure
k i s s
Taste. Lips. Noses touch...
travels the tingle
d o w n the spine,
slipping to the toes.
Desire to have
YOU
by my side
caressing carefully
everything away.
Want all those
forbidden
things
I'm not allowed
to dream about.
You bring your
body in
IN for the kill
striking down
upon
my weaknesses
straight to the heart.

myth77 · Dec 12, 2009

Again Siren, a very wonderful piece, very passionate and sensual, and excellent visual style as well! I am excited to see more of your work here and I hope you will continue posting!

SoundSiren · Dec 13, 2009

myth77 said:
Again Siren, a very wonderful piece, very passionate and sensual, and excellent visual style as well! I am excited to see more of your work here and I hope you will continue posting!

You really did make me blush Myth. Thanks so much for the feedback hun. I promise more to come. Just have to decide what to post next. Much of my work is one of two extremes. Passionate...or Seething. So emo right?

Marquis De Sade · Dec 28, 2009

If you took and collected all the words one could've slipped between the words you chose for this one you'd be left with what the readers fills on their own after taking the one you picked in and that was the impact for me. This was very passionate, very raw and almost a snapshot of that moment where someone is at that part in their life where they're juust abooooouuut to grow up. Then its gone.

Glad you took a verbal picture and found the courage to share.

SoundSiren · Jun 13, 2010

Marquis De Sade said:
If you took and collected all the words one could've slipped between the words you chose for this one you'd be left with what the readers fills on their own after taking the one you picked in and that was the impact for me. This was very passionate, very raw and almost a snapshot of that moment where someone is at that part in their life where they're juust abooooouuut to grow up. Then its gone.

Glad you took a verbal picture and found the courage to share.

Somehow I missed this. :blush2:

Thanks babe and thank you for encouraging me to share more and write more. I credit you, Myth, and Suik for me even being around these parts. It's been fun to push each other and I love you guys for it! :twohugs: