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A Movie Adventure

ravenbarbie

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Sarah and Mike are in a dark movie theater, they realize the movie is quite boring so Sarah decides to make things more interesting so she pushes Mike on to the seat next to him and starts to straddle him when she puts her hands up his shirt Mike suddenly realizes whats coming, Sarah starts running her hands up and down his body tickling Mike going from his ribs to his underarms to his sides, driving him crazy, all of a sudden he flips her over and starts to do the same to her, she knows shes no match for him as his hands move from her sides to her stomach than to her most ticklish spot her feet with every tingling, tickling sensation more insane than the last, as Mike tickles and kisses Sarah passionately they start ripping each others clothes off, as Mike still tickles Sarah, Sarah moans with pleasure because each thrust is better than the last.
 
Its a very good but quick story Raven.. I love the idea.
Stretch out the tickling parts a bit more.. get the details of reactions. And work a little on building up to the tickling a little, Like what they were wearing, How old they were, how many were in the cinema when they started tickling, and what were they doing when the tickling and then sex started..

I'm not knocking the story you've wrote, but its just a bit of advice to let you know how you can improve in the future should you do another.
 
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