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In the hands of Zod M/F some F/F

General Zod

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Captain Lisa played by Neve Campbell

Captain Amy played by Lacy Chabert

Zod played by me.:p

Part 1

Stuck in the mud.

Captains Amy and Lisa are officers in the resistance against the maniacal General Zod in his bid to take over the USA. The scene starts off with them driving down a back forest road,on their way to resistance HQ with vital info.......

"I can't believe the way you had the info written on your feet" says Captain Amy."I would have died from laughter as ticklish as I am"
"Well,I figured that the enemy forces would never look down there,besides,the only way to see the info is through an infa-red light.Even if they decide to look with a human eye,they won't see it. I am glad I am not ticklish at all" replies Captain Lisa,as she was driving the Jeep down the road.

"Hold up,I see a sign post up ahead.Let's see if it matches the directions" Lisa says as she pulls to a stop. They both look at the sign that says to turn left down the dirt road."That is weird" exclaims Lisa."The directions says to turn right,but the sign points to the left.

"I don't want to call it in over the radio" says Amy. "The forces of Zod may be listening in.Besides there is no telling if the enemy forces are close by".
"We'd better turn left.If we have to,we can always find a place to turn around.I don't think we will have any problems.We do have four wheel drive,after all" Lisa says in a confident voice. Amy wasn't so sure,and she told that to Lisa. "I just hope we don't get stuck. I remember spending the night in a Jeep after getting stuck real bad last year" Amy said with a shudder.


"Relax,I know what I am capable of doing with four wheel drive" Lisa says with a grin. She made a left turn into the dirt road going through the forest. For a ways the dirt road was hard packed,but rough. After awhile,the road started becoming a little muddy.The wheels would spin fast,even though they were'nt going but 10 mph or so.


Just as they rounded a corner,they saw an enourmous mud hole.Amy started getting a bit scared.Lisa stooped the Jeep and looked at the mud hole for a bit.She grabbed a long branch and started to walk around the right side of the mud,and stated poking it,to check on the depth.

She found an area that she thought would be no problem to go through.Lisa then got back into the driver's seat,and restarted the Jeep. "Are we gonna make it across?" asked Amy? "It won't be a problem,as long as we stay as far right as we can" says Lisa."It looks tight,but I think it will be OK for us"she said.


Lisa put the Jeep into four wheel low,locking up all four wheels for maximum traction.Then she starts driving.As the Jeep started across,the going was OK.They got halfway across,then the Jeep started slowing down a bit.

Lisa just gently put pressue on the gas pedal with her combat boot.The back end of the Jeep started to swing to the left,as all four tires fought for traction."Come on baby.You can do it" Lisa said to the Jeep.

Amy started getting scared as the Jeep slowed down even more as they got closer to the end of the mud."We aren't gonna get through this" Amy cried out. "I knew we should have turned right,even though the sign said to turn left.
Lisa snarled at her."Shut up.I know what I am doing." Amy just sat there.Just as the front wheels came in contact with hard ground,the Jeep came to a sudden halt.

The back wheels were spinning up rooster tails of mud
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ Went the back wheels. "WTF" cried Lisa."What is wrong?""Amy,please get out and see what is holding us up" Amy gets out and looks at the back wheels.They were not sunk real bad yet. She then goes and looks at the front wheels.They looked like they were not spinning at all.


"Lisa,give it some gas.It looks like the front wheels ain't spinning." Lisa gently pushes down on the fas with her combat boot,as Amy looks at the front tires.

"OK stop.The front wheel ain't spinning at all"Amy said."I guess the front axle for the four wheel drive is broke".Lisa swore."Shit,this is all we need.Let's see what we can find to put under the rear wheels for traction".

They started fathering up some dead wood,and placed it under the rear wheels,after they had used some shovels to dig in front of the rear wheels.
Lisa started the Jeep,and gently pressed on the accelerator."Come on baby" she whispered,as the rear tires fought for,and finally gained enough traction after about five minutes of spinning.


After the Jeep was freed from the mud,Lisa stops and lets out a sigh of relief.Amy looks at her and said,"now what? How are we gonna get out of here with the four wheel drive broken?" "There must be another way out of here.Hopefully this is the only muddy spot." replied Lisa.

Lisa then started to drive away,both on the lookout for a place to get out of the forest.After driving for about 10 minutes,they rounded a curve. With both looking for a path out of there,they did not see the mud until it was too late.

The Jeep came to a stop about halfway through the mud.It was the thin gooey kind that is hard to get a vehicle under its own power out of. A look of panic came across both ladies.Lisa just gunned the accelerator with her combat boot.

ZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZ

ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ Went both rear wheels,spinning in the mud.Lisa tried rocking the Jeep.Reverse.ZZZZZZZZZZZZ Forward ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ Reverse ZZZZZZZZZ.ForwardZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

She tried for thirty minuted between forward and reverse.The back wheels spinning,and digging deeper in the mud. Lisa put the Jeep in park,and shut the Jeep off.Amy was frantic."Look what you got us into!!!!!! How the hell are we gonna get out of this?"the panic making her voice rise.

Lisa went outside to look the situation over. She Just stared at the rear wheels. Only a few inches of the rear wheels were showing. She thought to herself"I really got the Jeep stuck" She then looked at the front wheels,and got pissed off,and started swearing at the Jeep,like it was the Jeep's fault.

(Neither of them knew,but someone at the resistance sabatoged the Jeep) :eek:

Amy just sat in the passenger seat and babbled in fear.After a few minutes,Lisa yelled,"ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!" Amy just stared at her friend. "Look,we will get through this Amy.One of us will have to push,and see if we can free the Jeep." Amy looked at her and said,"no way am I pushing.You got us into the mess.I don't care if you have been a Captain longer than me."

Lisa just looked at her,surprised by the ice in her freind's voice. "You are right.I will push."

Amy got into the driver's seat,and fired that mutha up.Lisa opened the passenger door in the front open and started pushing,as Amy pushed on the accelerator.

End part one.This is my first story.Please be kind in your comments. :D
 
Part two

Part two.
The capture.

As Amy gently pressed on the accelerator with her combat boot,Lisa started to push the Jeep with all of her strength.

ZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZ
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ went the real wheels,spinning uselessly in the mud,throwing mud into the air.

"It's not working" cried Amy,who was on the verge of tears. Lisa gave up after five minutes. "Let me put something under the rear wheels.It may help"
Lisa found some good,solid wood,and put it under the wheels.

"Let's try this again Amy" Lisa started pushing again,while Amy goosed the gas pedal. Ever so slowly,the Jeep moved forward a bit. "We can do this" cried Lisa. Inch by inch,the Jeep started moving forward,as the rear wheels slung up mud.

About the time they almost got to solid ground,the engine sputtered,and died.

Amy cranked,and cranked to get the engine.No luck. The fuel guage read empty.Amy pounded the steering wheel in frustration,and started cussing.

Lisa started pouring in spare fuel from the three,five gallon Jerry cans. The engine fired back to life.Lisa got ready to push,when a loud noise startled her. A six by six truck cake crashing out in the front.It belonged to the enemy.
Six pretty women got out,and the leader,a Major Ursa yelled,"Halt in the name of Zod!!!!!!!"


Amy and Lisa just stared in shock. They had come so far,only to be caught by the enemy forces. "Well,well. Look what we have just captured. You two have been wanted by the Great General Zod for a long time.he will reward us well for your capture.Now step away from the Jeep.Drop your weapons,and slowly come toward us"

Numbly,the tow resistant ladies obeyed. The five feamle soldiers tied the wrists of the two Captains,and put them in the back of the truck. The lady driver fired up the diesel of the six by six,and started to make a series of turns.

However,the driver of the truck,who just started driving,backed up too far.The truck sank into the same mud pit as the jeep did. Major Ursa got highly pissed."WTF driver? Get us out of here now.The General will be pissed off if we don't hurry back with the prisoners!!!"

"yes Major" said the driver,as she put the truck into six wheel low,hoping that would get the truck moving. All of the trucks wheels just spun uselessly. After about ten minutes,Major Ursa lost control. "Get out of that seat you idiot!!!!!!!!!! I will get us out of this mess!!!!"

They bothed switched seats. Ursa started rocking the truck back and forth,trying to get out of the mud. She did this for fifteen minutes,without getting anywhere.The six by six was hopelessly stuck in the mud.


Just then,tank tracks were heard.All of the women just sat there in fear. Two Russian built PT 76,amphibious light tanks came into view.The first one had General Zod's personall markings on it.Major Ursa gulped with fear.

The General did not tolerate failure well. Zod's tank came to a a halt a few feet away from the stuck vehicles.The engines on both tanks died away. The turret hatch on the command tank opened up. Handsome,well built man came out.he was wearing a black sweatsirt,and khaki shorts.On his handsome head was a red beret.


He just glared at Major Ursa,and said,"explain"

Ursa gulped,and started talking."We caught the two resistance captains you have been looking for my General.The new driver for this truck got it stuck.I thought I could free it myself.No excuse sir"

"Have the two prisoners put on my command tank at once" Zod said. After the two ladies were put inside,he said to his soldiers,"you have three hours to get that truck unstuck.If not you know what punishment awaits you!"

The six ladies said yessir,and began to try and free the stuck truck. Zod looks aver to the secons PT 76,and says to the vehicle commander(played by Peter Lore) "film this for me please" "yes my General.It will be a pleasue"

With that,Zod's PT 76 goes back to base.

End part two. The tickling will be in part three.I will write that tomorrow.(Sunday)
 
Very promising set-up. I'm looking forward to part 3 with the tickling. :D
 
:happyhop: :happyhop: :happyhop: :happyhop: :happyhop:
That's a whole bunch of mud you have there, Zoddy. Yes, indeedy.
I liked the part where you worked in the tank, and I also thought it was clever that you casted the enemy with your favorite actresses.

Looking forward the the tickling part. Wonderful start. :wharblgarbl:
 
All Hail the great General Zod! Now you are an author as well as a commander! Great beginning! I also enjoy your casting choices! It helps my imagination picture all of the action! Very interesting! Really enjoyable reading! Can't wait for the next parts!

Thanks!
 
All Hail the great General Zod! Now you are an author as well as a commander! Great beginning! I also enjoy your casting choices! It helps my imagination picture all of the action! Very interesting! Really enjoyable reading! Can't wait for the next parts!

Thanks!

Thanks JM157.Glad you enjoyed the story so far. Not to finish it.
 
Part three Tickling.

We pickup out story from where we left off from part two.

Major Ursa played by Cassidy Freeman(from Smallville)

Truck driver played by the TMF's very own,Helena

"Remember ladies,you have three hours to get that truck out of the mud.If not,my second in command(played by Peter Lore) will tow you out,and escort you back to base for punishment" said Zod.

With that said,the driver of Zod's PT76 tank spun around on it's tracks,and headed back for base. Zod's second in command set up the video camera,and got back into the command hatch of his PT 76. His hand rested lightly on the DSHK .51 caliber mahine gun atop the turret.


"Well,ladies" he said with a grin,"get to work." The six women got to digging the mud around the wheels. They were all hoping to beat the deadline,as they knew what punishment awaited them.


Zod's PT 76 got back to base about two hours later. Zod had the prisoners taken inside so they could get processed into the system.Zod then went into his special room to get ready for the interogation of the two ladies.He was looking very forward to it.

The two prisoners,Amy and Lisa were able to shower. Their clothes were being cleaned for them. After the showers,they had to get checked over by a doctor. After the checkup,they were both given a shot in the arm. Lisa asked what the shot was for.The doctor said "you two will find in in good time"

Amy and Lisa were then escorted back to their cell. Lisa said,"I wonder what that crazy bastard will do to us. Maybe the resistance knows we are being held,and will rescue us." "I sure hope so" said Amy. Maybe now I should have radioed HQ when we were at that road sign. "Forget it" said Lisa. "Either way,we would have been captured"

Back at the mud hole.

The woman had been at work trying to free the big six wheel drive truck.The wheels just kept on spinning,and the truck not moving forward,or backward at all.At the end of the three hours,a burst from the DSHK .51 machine gun signalled the end of their alloted time.

"Pleae give us some more time" begged Major Ursa. "Sorry" replied the second in command."You know how The General is" The PT 76 driver tosses the ladies the tow cable.The ladies hook the cable up,and the PT 76 tows them out of the mud.The truck heads back to HQ in the lead,while the PT 76 brings up the rear.

The following day

Amy and Lisa are back in their uniforms.However,their boots are off.Lisa is barefoot,and Amy is wearing some see through sheer black nylons.Both of them wear red nail polish on their toes. Both of them are strapped down in a chair,with their feet sticking through some stocks.

A TV monitor in the room comes on.They sit there in shock at the scene on the TV.Major Ursa,and Helena the truck driver,are being tickled on their bare feet by Zod.The other women soldiers are manacled to the wall,and have to watch the punisment.

Both women howled with laughter as Zod tickled their feet.

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAOHHHHHHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHASTAAPHHHHOHGODSTOP" cried Mahor Ursa.

"HAHAHAHAHI'LLDOANYTHINGJUSTSTAAAAAAAPH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA' begged Helena After 15 minutes Zod stopped to let them catch their breath."You ladies know the price of failure.This will go on,until I feel you have learned your lesson" With that he continued the tickling again. He would tickle for about fifteen minutes,then stop and let them get theor breath.Then he would tickle again. This went on for five hours.

Major Ursa and Helena were exhausted after their ordeal. They both swore up and down they would never fail again.

Amy and Lisa sat in shock after what they had just seen.Finally Amy broke the silence and said,"Oh shit.If he does that to me,there is no telling how long I can take it.I have to get out of this bondage!!!" Amy started to struggle. "You have to take it Amy" said Lisa."I know it will be hard for you,but please,for the sake of the resistance,you can't talk"

Amy just looked at her friend with malice."Easy for you to say.You are not ticklish.You won't have to go through torture,will you?!!!!" (remember the part about these two getting a shot?)

Zod walks into the room,wearing a maniacal smile."Hello ladies.You two have been a thorn in my side for a very long time.Sadly for you two,I have some moles in your resistance force. The map you two had was correct,but one of my moles in your organization turned the road sign around,which led you two into my trap.Now let us begin the fun"

With that he grabs a chair,sits in front of Amy,and slowly brings his fingers to her nylon clad feet."I so love black nylons on a pretty pair of feet" He then drags his fingers up and down her feet. Amy tried to fight the tickly sensations,by closing her eyes,and curling her toes.But after a minute,she threw back her head and started to laugh.


HHAHAHAHHAHAHHOHOHOHOHOHOHAHAHAHAHA YOU BASTARD HAHAHAHAHAH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH LET MY FEET ALONE HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! The tickling went on for fifteen minutes.Zod stopped the assualt,and waited for her to catch her breath.After a few minutes,he asked her if she had anything to say. Amy just spit on him."I do love it when a woman acts tough and brave in these situations.It makes it all the more fun to break you.And I will break you"

Zod then started to tickle her nylon covered feet again.Amy struggled against her bonds and laughed. he would tickle for fifteen minutes,and stop to let her catch her breath. Each time she would refuse to talk.

Zod looks down at her toes and says,"you're toes look good enough to eat'

He then starts to nibble on her nylon covered toes.Amy's laughter reached a new pitch.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA HOHOHOHOHOH HAHAHAHAHA LISA MAKE HIM STOP OH GOD I CAN'T TAKE IT HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I'LLTALKI'LLTALKI'LLTALK!!!!!

After Amy caught her breath,she told Zod where the info was written."It is written on Lisa's feet" she exlaimed.Zod looks over at Lisa's feet,and sees nothing. "Why are you lying to me? he said. Zod then starts tickling Amy again.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YOUNEEDHAHAHAHAHAHAHA AN INFA HAHAHAHAHAHAREDLIGHT TO SEE HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

Lisa just sat there in shock the whole time.You bastard she thought I will avenge Amy myself when we get rescued. An infared light was bought in to light up Lisa's feet.Lisa started to move her feet around.Zod grabbed her by her hair,and told her to stop before I hurt you.

Lisa did as he told her to.After a technician copied the info on Lisa's feet,a big bowl of warm,soapy water was bought in.A body scrub brush was in it.

Zod looked at Lisa and said,"you have dirty feet.I shall have to clean them off for you" He dipd the brush into the soapy water,and starts to gently scrub the bottoms of Lisa's feet.

Lisa's eyes widened at the unfamiliar tickling sensations.She threw back her head and laughed.It sounded almost like a howl.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
YOUFUCKINGBASTARTD HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
The scrubbing went on for fifteen minutes.Lisa sat there stunned.How did she become so ticklish? When the resistance tech wrote on her feet with the special in,it did not tickle at all.

Zod read her mind."If you are wondering why you are ticklish,this is why.Remember the shot you and your friend got,when you were bought here? It is called tickle serum.It makes the body at least 1,000 times more sensitive to the touch. Sadly for you,it never wears off.You two shall become my new tickle toys"

Zod threw his handsome head back,and gave an eveil laugh.He then used his fingers to tickle both Amy and Lisa.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHYOUSICKFREAK HOHOHOHOHHAHAHAHAHSTOPOHGODSTOP
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
The tickling went on nonstop until both ladies passed out.They were then put into their cell.

Part three over Epilouge to follow shortly
 
Epilouge

A few days later after their ordeal,Lisa was fast asleep. Something woke her out of her slumber."Wha? Who's there?" she said in a sleepy voice. She tried to move,but she was strapped down to her bed. A voice came out of the darkness.

"Because you took a wrong turn,and would not listen to me,it is time for some payback"

"Amy? Is that you? WTF are you doing?"
Amy did not say a word.She turned on a small light at the foot of Lisa's bed. Amy then started dancing her red fingernails on Lisa's bare feet.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHWTF?HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA


AMEEEEEEEEEEEEHAHAHAHAHAHASTTAAAAAPPPPHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Lisa laughed her head off for the rest of the night,as a crazed Amy took her frustrations at being caught by the armies of Zod.

General Zod just smiled as he watched what was being done via a hidden camera. I still have the touch after all of this time,he thought to himself.

Now to catch the two resistance operatives who call themselves,Zatanna,and Wonder Woman.


I hope you have enjoyed my crappy story.It was my first time.Too much detail,or too little detail? Too long? Too short?

Keep the rubber side down my friends
 
That was a fine story, Zod. :couch: If you want direction, I think you should more detail of the tickling. :D
 
Thanks Helena :bow2:

Thanks for the kind words and Advice Mils. :) My next story will be better.(I hope)
 
Great job on your story Zod! Looking forward to reading more from you! :D
 
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