Miss Sassy
TMF Expert
- Joined
- Mar 20, 2010
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- 364
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Just fantasize... and then describe it...... with words
And be sure to format it properly with line and paragraph breaks.
and if I see the ler call the lee "my dear," my cliche-meter activates and I close the window.
With all due respect - a good story comes from the writers heart, not necessarily the wishes of his or her readers. That is why I would encourage ShyGirl21 to let her own fantasies, wishes, experiences and ideas find their way into her story. We can describe best the things we love/fantasize about ourselves.
Sure, suggestions are always welcome to a writer, but they must be weighed carefully as to not conflict with his or her own ideas/likings.