This is my very first thread (yeah, I know, I've had this for a while now XP). Just thought maybe you should know that before any harsh criticizing.
Ok, so I'm not the best at writing stories. This is actually my first attempt at writing a tickle/torture story. The main character is almost completely based on my girlfriend and the story somewhat on a plan that her friend Crissy and I thought up. It's not finished yet, but yeah...hope you enjoy. Again, it's not the best.
This is all about the belly and belly button, beings that I have a MAJOR belly button fetish. So I'm sorry to all the foot and armpit fetishists out there, this is only belly and belly button. Also, my fetish is slightly sadistic, so it may get a bit more...painfull in the 3rd part.
Looking for Part II? Here's a quick link so you don't have to go hunting and shoot your partner in the leg or something... >.>
Part 2: http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?p=2664817&posted=1#post2664817
Constructive critisism is highly encouraged and appreciated.
Ok, so I'm not the best at writing stories. This is actually my first attempt at writing a tickle/torture story. The main character is almost completely based on my girlfriend and the story somewhat on a plan that her friend Crissy and I thought up. It's not finished yet, but yeah...hope you enjoy. Again, it's not the best.
This is all about the belly and belly button, beings that I have a MAJOR belly button fetish. So I'm sorry to all the foot and armpit fetishists out there, this is only belly and belly button. Also, my fetish is slightly sadistic, so it may get a bit more...painfull in the 3rd part.
Looking for Part II? Here's a quick link so you don't have to go hunting and shoot your partner in the leg or something... >.>
Part 2: http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?p=2664817&posted=1#post2664817
Constructive critisism is highly encouraged and appreciated.
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