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My first story please be nice

Cdd1

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this how story going to go so I hope you like it about a boy and a girl that are best friend there name are Sarah and LJ. Here we go. if don't like it I am sorry.


LJ: Hey Sarah hurry up we going be late for the party.
Sarah:I am coming she run out the door with her car key
LJ:What took so long we are 10 minture late. Girl take forever.
Sarah: Sorry I have put my makeup on she laughs
LJ: Why do you need makeup you are hot.
Sarah: Started blushing yeah right
LJ: you are very hot
Sarah: Your just saiding that b.c your my bestfriend
LJ: No I really think your hot now better said it your going
to tickle you.
Sarah: I am not saiding anything.
LJ:Fine than he started tickling he sides
Sarah:LJJJJJJJJJJJ Stop she laughs wiggle around
LJ: I don't think are you going to stop put yourself down
Sarah: I wasn't she laughs at him
LJ: Were to her tickle her stomach
Sarah: NOO please not there
LJ:Yes there he tickles her neck
Sarah: LJJJJ Please stop you make me ruin my makeup
LJ: As long as stop putting yourself down I will stop
Sarah: I wasn't put myself down
LJ: Wrong answer he tickles her stop again.
Sarah: No you got stop haha i can't take it


what think happen next and sure I write a part two
 
I think this is a very good play. My only suggestion would be to put actions in parenthesis so that the actors know that you are giving a stage direction. For example, I would make it like this:

LJ: Wrong answer! (He tickles her.)
LJ: Stop again.
 
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