New story To be continued soon!
V vinotinto Registered User Joined Aug 27, 2005 Messages 2 Points 0 Aug 14, 2010 #1 New story To be continued soon! Last edited: Jan 26, 2017
T Tickletime64 TMF Poster Joined Jun 18, 2005 Messages 75 Points 8 Mar 8, 2014 #2 Great story, can you put some paragraphs in part 2, will make it much easier to read. Cheers
L Lilmissticklishfeet TMF Expert Joined Sep 26, 2005 Messages 533 Points 18 Mar 8, 2014 #3 Yes, please work on making paragraphs, as it is difficult to read! Otherwise, wonderful story! Please continue!
Yes, please work on making paragraphs, as it is difficult to read! Otherwise, wonderful story! Please continue!