Mark Diplock
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I posted this story a good while back now. and i cant remember what happened to it. So i thought that seeing as Halloween was coming up, i would repost it for those who have not read it yet. The tickling is a little way in if you just want that. Enjoy
Things that go bump in the night. ?/f
The night is full of sounds. The bedroom window is pelted with the heavy rain and wind that moved in before the darkness came. There’s a thunder storm and the rumbles and flashes are drawing closer. In this room is Nina.
Nina is an 18 yr old girl. Blonde, 5’6, blue eyes and an athletic body. She was trying to sleep in her king sized bed, with her white sheets over all but her head and the top of her shoulders. It must have been quarter to twelve, and she was still laying there half asleep with the rumbles and flashes keeping her from relaxing.
There was nothing she prized more than getting a good nights sleep. Always the good girl going to bed early. She’d been in her bed since nine, and she was getting annoyed at her insomnia. There was a big gap from the last rumble. Not even the rain was making that much noise. To Nina this was her chance to finally drop into deep sleep before it got noisy again...but this was where things got weird.
There was an almighty crach of thunder. The sudden sound made her snap out of her light slumber and sit bolt upright in her bed clutching the covers. Nothing... there was nothing in the room, not a sound or movement. She glanced at the clock frustrated. The red lit numbers were at 11:47 pm. There was a mumble under her breath as she cursed her inability to sleep and she slumped back into her bed backward, letting her head hit the pillow with quite a thud. The sides of the pillow puffing up either side of her, obscuring her vision. It was here out of the corner of her eye she saw a moving shadow in the back of her room.
The room was plenty big enough to sport two large beds and have room for furniture. The shadow moved across the back wall furthest away from her position. Her eyes bugged out of her head, and she sat up switching on a bedside lamp. The light hurt her eyes forcing her to shut them for a second to let them adjust. So when she openned her eyes she was expecting to see something there... her heart thumping from fear. Nothing.
She must be imagining it she thought as she switched the lamp back off and slumped back again. Glancing at the clock she saw the time.... 11:47pm... She was sure she’d been sat up a few minutes, how could her clock be the same time. She only changed the battery the other night and it was working earlier. She hit it. It flickered and went off for a second... Then came back on accompanied with a rumble of thunder to add to her already thumping heart. It was here that she felt something watching her from behind her.
She turned around with a start and caught sight of a shadow of a male at the side of her bed. She screamed and hit the lamp again. The light came on and again like before there was nothing. Her heart was racing now.. looking to thump its way out of her chest. She got out of the bed and looked around the room for a god five minutes. Was she going nuts she wondered... It WAS getting close to halloween, and she DID watch a scary movie before bed. That must be it she thought.. got to bed she told herself. The clock was on 11:50 now. She thought she was just dreaming it all up.
She got back into bed and actually managed to get out half a snore before she was grabbed in her bed and pulled under the covers.. Her white sheets covered her up completely and she screamed out loud... but nothing.. Her body was pinned prone to the bed mattress as the covers were removed. The clock was back at 11:47 again.
There was meant to be another scream.. hoping to alert neighbours.. as she lived alone. But she ended up giggling... there was something stroking her belly.. and it was tickling. Was she going nuts.. or was she being attacked? The stroking went to her ribs... her giggles became laughter.. rapid and melodic. “ stop tickling meeee” was her cry before the laughter took her over completely. Nina was deathly ticklish.. she hated it. Maybe her attacker knew this.
Her body was struggling and squirming in her bed as the feelings hit her armpits.. A hotspot. She let out a scream again and whipped her head from side to side in agonising mirth, as the feeling was relentless. For minutes she was tickled here, with her body going weak and limp from the long term attack.
It stopped.. There was a flash of lightning and the feeling went away. Then the darkness came back and she was once again attacked.. this time her perky breasts were the target.. she didn’t know what to think.. it tickled but it was her breasts.. almost cursing that they too were ticklish. Her face was red and her blonde hair matted to the sweat and tears. Then the feeling moved to her legs and calfs.. she went silent with laughter.. it wasn’t that much of a ticklish spot. But after being tickled near everywhere she hadn’t the strength to resist it here.. But that was nothing to the feeling that came next..
“No! “ was the only word she’d managed to let out in what must have been a good half hour. It was the begining of the torture of her feet.. she’d been tickled there before many times.. she knew it was her weakspot and being tickled here in her bed, she knew it was only a matter of time before they were targeted next. She had resigned to it. The touch sent her babbling and her head spinning from the touch.. her laughter so fast and hard, her throat became dry. There was a silent moment.. Her body was on fire from the feelings. The last defiant * let me go * scream came from her lips before she collapsed, fading into blackout..
There was a voice... “ thirteen to midnight” that was it. Then she went bye bye.
The morning came bright and lit the room with a clear sky peaking through the partially openned curtains of her room. The warmth stirred her and she woke up slowly.. Her body was relaxed and she felt refreshed. There was a moment before she recalled the night before.. looking at her body, she saw nothing on her resembling any evidence of what had happened. Was it all just a dream? She glanced over to her clock.... a shiver touched her back.. 11:47pm..
The end.
As i said.. a repost. Hope you enjoyed it... Mark. x
Things that go bump in the night. ?/f
The night is full of sounds. The bedroom window is pelted with the heavy rain and wind that moved in before the darkness came. There’s a thunder storm and the rumbles and flashes are drawing closer. In this room is Nina.
Nina is an 18 yr old girl. Blonde, 5’6, blue eyes and an athletic body. She was trying to sleep in her king sized bed, with her white sheets over all but her head and the top of her shoulders. It must have been quarter to twelve, and she was still laying there half asleep with the rumbles and flashes keeping her from relaxing.
There was nothing she prized more than getting a good nights sleep. Always the good girl going to bed early. She’d been in her bed since nine, and she was getting annoyed at her insomnia. There was a big gap from the last rumble. Not even the rain was making that much noise. To Nina this was her chance to finally drop into deep sleep before it got noisy again...but this was where things got weird.
There was an almighty crach of thunder. The sudden sound made her snap out of her light slumber and sit bolt upright in her bed clutching the covers. Nothing... there was nothing in the room, not a sound or movement. She glanced at the clock frustrated. The red lit numbers were at 11:47 pm. There was a mumble under her breath as she cursed her inability to sleep and she slumped back into her bed backward, letting her head hit the pillow with quite a thud. The sides of the pillow puffing up either side of her, obscuring her vision. It was here out of the corner of her eye she saw a moving shadow in the back of her room.
The room was plenty big enough to sport two large beds and have room for furniture. The shadow moved across the back wall furthest away from her position. Her eyes bugged out of her head, and she sat up switching on a bedside lamp. The light hurt her eyes forcing her to shut them for a second to let them adjust. So when she openned her eyes she was expecting to see something there... her heart thumping from fear. Nothing.
She must be imagining it she thought as she switched the lamp back off and slumped back again. Glancing at the clock she saw the time.... 11:47pm... She was sure she’d been sat up a few minutes, how could her clock be the same time. She only changed the battery the other night and it was working earlier. She hit it. It flickered and went off for a second... Then came back on accompanied with a rumble of thunder to add to her already thumping heart. It was here that she felt something watching her from behind her.
She turned around with a start and caught sight of a shadow of a male at the side of her bed. She screamed and hit the lamp again. The light came on and again like before there was nothing. Her heart was racing now.. looking to thump its way out of her chest. She got out of the bed and looked around the room for a god five minutes. Was she going nuts she wondered... It WAS getting close to halloween, and she DID watch a scary movie before bed. That must be it she thought.. got to bed she told herself. The clock was on 11:50 now. She thought she was just dreaming it all up.
She got back into bed and actually managed to get out half a snore before she was grabbed in her bed and pulled under the covers.. Her white sheets covered her up completely and she screamed out loud... but nothing.. Her body was pinned prone to the bed mattress as the covers were removed. The clock was back at 11:47 again.
There was meant to be another scream.. hoping to alert neighbours.. as she lived alone. But she ended up giggling... there was something stroking her belly.. and it was tickling. Was she going nuts.. or was she being attacked? The stroking went to her ribs... her giggles became laughter.. rapid and melodic. “ stop tickling meeee” was her cry before the laughter took her over completely. Nina was deathly ticklish.. she hated it. Maybe her attacker knew this.
Her body was struggling and squirming in her bed as the feelings hit her armpits.. A hotspot. She let out a scream again and whipped her head from side to side in agonising mirth, as the feeling was relentless. For minutes she was tickled here, with her body going weak and limp from the long term attack.
It stopped.. There was a flash of lightning and the feeling went away. Then the darkness came back and she was once again attacked.. this time her perky breasts were the target.. she didn’t know what to think.. it tickled but it was her breasts.. almost cursing that they too were ticklish. Her face was red and her blonde hair matted to the sweat and tears. Then the feeling moved to her legs and calfs.. she went silent with laughter.. it wasn’t that much of a ticklish spot. But after being tickled near everywhere she hadn’t the strength to resist it here.. But that was nothing to the feeling that came next..
“No! “ was the only word she’d managed to let out in what must have been a good half hour. It was the begining of the torture of her feet.. she’d been tickled there before many times.. she knew it was her weakspot and being tickled here in her bed, she knew it was only a matter of time before they were targeted next. She had resigned to it. The touch sent her babbling and her head spinning from the touch.. her laughter so fast and hard, her throat became dry. There was a silent moment.. Her body was on fire from the feelings. The last defiant * let me go * scream came from her lips before she collapsed, fading into blackout..
There was a voice... “ thirteen to midnight” that was it. Then she went bye bye.
The morning came bright and lit the room with a clear sky peaking through the partially openned curtains of her room. The warmth stirred her and she woke up slowly.. Her body was relaxed and she felt refreshed. There was a moment before she recalled the night before.. looking at her body, she saw nothing on her resembling any evidence of what had happened. Was it all just a dream? She glanced over to her clock.... a shiver touched her back.. 11:47pm..
The end.
As i said.. a repost. Hope you enjoyed it... Mark. x
