Angela..too the limit and beyond

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh stoppppppppppp ... is the last thing i heard before Angela had past out.. What I was doing, the technique i was using..while simple in nature..was devastating to Angela..

I was simpling grabbing her nylons, off the soles of her feet..over and over and over again.. My god i had never seen feet twitch and wriggle for escape through a pair of the sheerest nylons the way hers had.. Not to mention I let my fingers roam all over her feet, telling her how good they felt on my fingers, and how she should be lucky i let her keep the nylons on..for her protection..hahaha yeah ok!

While she was still passed out, I had set up my next devious device. This happen to consist of a hairbrush, connected to a small motor. The motor had a shaft that stuck out, to which i attached holding mounts for the hairbrushes.. To prepare Angela I had tied each toe to a rod that bent the toes back once tied, and set the device up and positioned it so that when she awoke, the device had a motion sensor on it to turn it on, in case i wasnt in the room..

About twenty minutes had passed, when i heard the most wicked laugh ever..lol! I went to check on her, and she was wide eyed awake, and immediately begging me to turn it off.. U see the brushes were set to just bareeellyyy brush the balls of the nylon soles.. and it was driving her completely insane.. I cut her a little mercy and cut the motor.. untied her and was gonna give her a drink when she jumped on me and told me to hold her... She was completely afraid of being tickled anymore that day.. and let me tell you..she was shaking like a leaf..

This is where I thought I would never see her again, but she has reassured me, that she doesnt want it to end, but to not let her pass out again..which i agreed too, for now.

Well that was cute and a lot of fun. Nice short story.

One minor adjustment I would suggest, and this is just a personal opinion, is I think it would end better if you removed the exclamation marks after "for now", ended it with a full stop and removed the laughter at the end.

Thanks! I appreciate the advice, how else to do you get a story right, when your a beginner, other than the advice from a pro. Thanks..

very nice keep going!

Interesting take,...

For some reason, ERIC, this seemed to read like a diary entry,.... which could make a seriously good format for continuing or revisiting the characters. Has an "8 1/2 Weeks" quality to it.