The Torturer's Apprentice (Brand New!!)

Dave2112

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• Nov 4, 2002

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Brilliant! Simply brilliant!! You are one sadistic bastard, Dave!

Nice detail: the hints at certain geographic places: La Vega, Elay, Mispi, Nork...

Thanks, Dave!

 

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Another master of tickling fiction returns with another feast for our imaginations.

Welcome back my friend. BRAVO!

Morandilas
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DAMN FINE!

This tale is reminiscent of The Deathlands fantasy series, of which I'm very fond. Wow - Deathlands meets Dave2112 - more than I could have hoped for.

You have an impressive talent and imagination. More! More!



Do not walk behind me, for I may not lead. Do not walk ahead of me, for I may not follow. Do not walk beside me, either; just leave me the hell alone.

 

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this is what may have happened if Randal Flagg had won the last Stand. almost makes you want to root for the bad guys

so good to see a new story from you, Dave. here's to hoping this is just the beginning of another one of your prolific streaks.

 

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My Lord...

Dave, your stories take me to another world. I am truly thankful. Bow to the King, Baby.

 

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Dave you are an absolute legend. You can create worlds so vividly and creatively and put the readers in a very different perspetive, ranking far above average everyday stories. Please follow up with a sequel as soon as you can!

 

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Wow!

WOW!
WOW!
WOW!
WOW!
WOOOOOOW! Fantastic! Congratulations

Diego

 

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YES!

 

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Bless you master......


Ray

 

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One word. WOW!
This is one of the best stories i have read for a long while. Keep up the good work!

 

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Yet another great story.. glad you found the time to write it!

 

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They spoke of his return...

Nice to see you back to work Dave. I think I heard that Lucas was thinking of picking this one up for his next screenplay. Any truth to that?

Great job, as always. Here's hoping that your twisted well of imagination is once again overflowing with sadistic tales of tickle torture. (oooh, I think I just turned myself on...)

Laughter

 

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Great job Dave...

The force never lets you down. Your stories are getting better everytime. It was a pleasure to read. Thanks!

 

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One of the best stories I have ever read, Dave. Thanks and congratulations on it!!!

 

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Fantastic story

Gotta tell ya this was a great story. I love these kind of stories. So much detail.........and the tickling!!!!!

MORE MORE MORE!

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!!!

as always, wonderful story!

It really captivated me, just amazing!

keep it up,

greetz

 

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WOW!

Dave, Biscuit said it well

My friend,
That was just...

Beautiful

*shakes*

*moans*

*collapses*
I agree with that but make mine a triple!
I tried to rake this, funny I did not remember already doing so, but it said I couldn't change my vote



Katherine

 

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I see that there are great writers at this forum!
btw great story, would love to read more.
Domtickler4u

 

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Thank you all so much for the nice comments. I know I haven't written as much this year as last, but I've been trying to make my stories mean more, to really wrap my mind around a concept before taking off with it.

I appreciate your patience and kind words. They mean a lot to me. Hopefully, I can get a few more out before 2002 comes to a close.

-Dave2112

 

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Dave2112 said:

Thank you all so much for the nice comments. I know I haven't written as much this year as last, but I've been trying to make my stories mean more, to really wrap my mind around a concept before taking off with it.

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Definitely worth the wait Dave. It was incredible.

 

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That was Awesome man!

WOW! What can I say except that was awesome! Fantastic writing!

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Henry