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Mysterious Torture (F/M, Explicit, Bondage)

Cosmos

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Hey everyone!! Long time lurker, first time poster here! This is my first story I've EVER written, period. So I know it will probably suck, but I would love feedback. I know it's a bit short, but I was running out of ideas for details. I guess, without further dudes, here we go... -gulp-

You don’t know how you got in this situation, but somehow you’ve found yourself blind folded and are being guided down what you think is a long hallway. Your hands are restrained behind your back, and you are feeling very uneasy about your current state. Not knowing where you’ll end up but trusting the person guiding you, as if you had any other choice, you feel your toes curl inside your flip flops, obviously terrified of what your guide has in store for you. As you hear your mysterious escort open a door, you feel yourself pushed into a room, and find yourself being laid down onto a bed. As you’re lying down, you feel feathery soft fingers gently yet quickly run down your bare chest tickling as they move towards your hands. You realize once that slow teasing happens you have been captured, by a mysterious female, whose intent has become perfectly clear to you, for unknown reasons. Your hands are untied and she grabs one at a time and you feel it being lifted above your head and tied to the respective bedpost. You realize she must have drugged you, because you were far too weak to resist her manipulating your arms. After both hands have been restrained, her fingers quickly run down your arms to your bare chest, stopping at your underarms and briefly giving them a good tickling, then she continues moving down, ticking your sides as her fingers move downward still, tickling your thighs as she works her way to your feet.

Each foot is taken into her hands, and slowly are your flip flops removed, revealing your two extremely soft and ticklish bare feet. Her hands begin to knead and massage each foot tickling in between massages so the sensation is heightened. Your feet are finally handcuffed to the foot posts and you are now at the mercy of her hands. Although you know you are going to be tickled, you realize with the blindfold your sensitivity is heightened, more sensitive to feelings because you aren’t sure where her hands will travel to next. As you realize this another thought enters your mind. You realize her hands have stopped and you wonder where they went, when all of a sudden you feel something soft travel along the side of your face, tickling as it moves in a downward motion. You now realize that one of her hands has been replaced by a feather. The feather travels down your face, to one side of your bare chest. The other hand you feel traveling on the other side of your chest, tickling under your arm, down your side, across your stomach. You feel the feather doing the same. After a few minutes of this teasing torture the feather is abandoned and you find both of your ticklish bare feet being tickled at the same time. You scream with laughter, knowing full well that your feet are your most ticklish spot, and knowing your torturer will not stop anytime soon.

As your bare feet are enduring this excruciating tickle torture, you begin to notice a new feeling. It seems that a pair of bare feet has found its way to your boxers covered manhood, and slowly are those toes working your penis through the opening. Your torturer seems pleased, rubbing her foot along your erect penis. You notice immediately that her feet are incredibly soft, as much or more so than your own, almost like silk, as one dances along your manhood. You can do nothing but laugh in ticklish agony as she continues to tickle your feet and suddenly, she begins stroking your penis with her feet! You have never felt so aroused as you are now, for having your bare feet tickle tortured like this along with a pair of amazingly soft feet jerking you off like you’ve never thought possible. Then, the tickling gets worse. You begin to howl with laughter as she has started stroking the soles of your oh so ticklish feet with a pair of stiff feathers. You aren’t sure how much longer you can hold out under this torture, feeling a mixture of ticklish agony and immense pleasure all at the same time. As her soft bare feet work their magic on your manhood, you feel yourself getting closer and closer to orgasm, knowing full well if you reach it you will enter a new level of ticklishness, and many more doors will open for your torturer to have her way with you. As her feathers dance along your feet, you laugh and try your damndest to get free of your bonds, it happens; you feel a rush of immense pleasure as your seed explodes all over her bare feet as she strokes. This seems to have pleased her, knowing how heightened your nerve endings have just become to the ticklish torment she is about to put you through…

That's all! Please let me know what you all think, I'm very accepting of criticism :)
 
Welcome to the TMF, Cosmos, and congratulations on making your first post. :D This is a wonderful place, have fun here.

Very nice descriptions of the tickling in your short story. It would be good to know more about the two characters (such as their ages, physical appearance, and so on).
 
Congrat's on your first ever work of fiction...i've just recently started getting in to the notion of writing tickle fiction myself. Welcome, explore, enjoy...

Cheers, -Pete
 
I didn't want to add description like that Mila, because not doing that can make it appeal to more people, like if I say the guy is 24 years old and really skinny, then older guys who aren't as skinny can't relate to the story as well. That was my thinking, but I suppose it could work. Thanks :)
 
I enjoyed it Cosmos! The style kept making me wonder 'What was to happen next?' and you clearly distinguished between the teasing/erotic tickling, tickle-torture and the sexual excitement endured by the ticklee. I also liked the 'build-up' to the actual tickling (which is something I personally am fond of). Keep writing!
 
Thank you Glove :). I enjoy it too. The way it was written was basically how a story would best appeal to me, hence certain word choices. But thank you, and if I get enough positive feedback from this, I'll continue the story, partly why I left a cliff hanger ending :)
 
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