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P pw_jagerbomb11 TMF Novice Joined Jan 19, 2012 Messages 70 Points 0 Jan 22, 2012 #1 Edited. Last edited: Jan 31, 2012
S suikoden 4th Level Red Feather Joined May 20, 2001 Messages 1,773 Points 38 Jan 22, 2012 #2 I used to really like Amy when she was in Emmerdale. I saw her once in London and she is much shorter than I imagined, very cute though. Nice story but if I may make a suggestion, you need to break up some of the bigger chunks of text for the reader. Cheers!
I used to really like Amy when she was in Emmerdale. I saw her once in London and she is much shorter than I imagined, very cute though. Nice story but if I may make a suggestion, you need to break up some of the bigger chunks of text for the reader. Cheers!
P pw_jagerbomb11 TMF Novice Joined Jan 19, 2012 Messages 70 Points 0 Jan 22, 2012 #3 I was trying to work out where I should add a new paragraph. I typed the story using WordPad on my old laptop so the formatting was somewhat dodgy. I've tried to break the larger sections up though.
I was trying to work out where I should add a new paragraph. I typed the story using WordPad on my old laptop so the formatting was somewhat dodgy. I've tried to break the larger sections up though.
S suikoden 4th Level Red Feather Joined May 20, 2001 Messages 1,773 Points 38 Jan 22, 2012 #4 No worries. It's all a learning process. Amy is ripe for tickling though, no doubt about that.
P pw_jagerbomb11 TMF Novice Joined Jan 19, 2012 Messages 70 Points 0 Jan 22, 2012 #5 Someone posted a picture of her in 'the pose' way back when, and I thought it was surprising that nobody had bothered to write a story.
Someone posted a picture of her in 'the pose' way back when, and I thought it was surprising that nobody had bothered to write a story.
M musictkls TMF Master Joined May 30, 2006 Messages 742 Points 0 Jan 22, 2012 #6 Great story! Put Amy in nylons and have Jessica get those toes again and maybe a revenge sequence. Loved it!
Great story! Put Amy in nylons and have Jessica get those toes again and maybe a revenge sequence. Loved it!
L love feet 3rd Level White Feather Joined Jul 31, 2008 Messages 9,617 Points 38 Jan 23, 2012 #7 very good work!
J james_23tk TMF Poster Joined Nov 5, 2006 Messages 107 Points 16 Jan 23, 2012 #8 Hey great story its nice to read about some UK celebs keep up the good work.
P pw_jagerbomb11 TMF Novice Joined Jan 19, 2012 Messages 70 Points 0 Jan 23, 2012 #9 Thanks for the positive feedback guys. I've got many more stories planned. Watch this space