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Poor Ticklish Duo

Hey ticklehehe, This is actually a very god story however the way you segregated the story layout makes it sort of tough to tell what's going on sometimes.

Consider creating some more paragraph/ sentence breaks to show change of perspective.
Very good story, you just need an editor! :)
 
nice story....you need to continue this one! there has to be a part 2
 
wow...very talented, I got a bit confused at times tho but Im sure you'll work out the kinks
 
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