x3torturedpoet
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This is the first time I have ever tempted to write a story like this! So if it’s rubbish please just say and give me your honest critiques. Thank you 
I’m only going to write part of it and if I am not good enough I won’t write more but if you do think I should continue please comment.
Tickle Fantasy – Locked in the basement F/F
I trembled in the chains that had me bound to the wall; my wrists and ankles were tied tightly and I was only able to move my torso just a little bit. As I heard the footsteps of my capture coming down the wooden staircase I gulped uneasily; waiting for a light to be turned on – and once it was my mouth opened in disbelief as it was my best friend Sarah. I knew in my heart that she would never hurt me; well I hoped she would never hurt me but it confused me even more as to why I had been chained and what she had planned.
<b>”Hello, Holly.”</b> with those words her eyes widened with a slight mischievous grin on her lips. I didn’t say anything – I couldn’t find the words. <b>”Silence, huh? Well trust me you won’t be silent for long”</b> without warning she ran her fingers up and down my inner thighs; sensually but enough to make me giggle. <b>”Noooo!”</b> I shrieked. I knew now what she had planned and as my best friend she knew all my worst tickle spots - because she liked to tease me a lot. <b>”I have been wanting to do this to you for a long time; yeah I tickle you all the time but this, well this is a dream.”</b>
I writhed and tugged at the chains with all my strength as she dug her fingernails inside my deep hollow armpits; my head threw backwards as a stream of laughter came out of my mouth and echoed around the walls of the basement. <b>”No, Sarah. I will do anything you ask.”</b> I couldn’t control my laughter as she kept swirling her fingers around in circles inside my armpits; my face was already beetroot red and sweat trickled down the side of my cheeks as I panted heavily. <b>”A break already. Wow your weaker than I thought.”</b> Sarah spoke as she took her fingers away from my armpits allowing me to get a small breather. During that time I started to question her; her motives…
<b>”Why, are you doing this? I will let you tickle me without the chains.”</b> Sarah laughed at my begging; she knew I was faster than her and had run away from her tickling fingers plenty of time. <b>”Is that you done now?”</b> I knew it wasn’t a question cause before I could answer she kneeled down on the floor and looked at me for a quick second; the fear screamed over my features and she pulled back my toes. <b>”Uh oh.”</b> I managed to mumble out as she picked up an electric toothbrush and directed it in between my toes; the bristles scratched every sensitive part of my toes as I thrashed against the chains once again. My eyes rolled inside of my eye socket; I screamed and laughed as I tried to pull my foot away but it was no use she had a good grip of them and the chains were keeping me pretty bound.
<b>”Please stop. No more, no more.”</b> I begged and pleaded whilst my body wiggled from left to right…….. She eventually stopped. <b>”Is that you done Sarah?”</b> I panted blowing air out of my mouth; trying to cool myself off. <b>”Oh this has just begun”</b>………..
I’m only going to write part of it and if I am not good enough I won’t write more but if you do think I should continue please comment.Tickle Fantasy – Locked in the basement F/F
I trembled in the chains that had me bound to the wall; my wrists and ankles were tied tightly and I was only able to move my torso just a little bit. As I heard the footsteps of my capture coming down the wooden staircase I gulped uneasily; waiting for a light to be turned on – and once it was my mouth opened in disbelief as it was my best friend Sarah. I knew in my heart that she would never hurt me; well I hoped she would never hurt me but it confused me even more as to why I had been chained and what she had planned.
<b>”Hello, Holly.”</b> with those words her eyes widened with a slight mischievous grin on her lips. I didn’t say anything – I couldn’t find the words. <b>”Silence, huh? Well trust me you won’t be silent for long”</b> without warning she ran her fingers up and down my inner thighs; sensually but enough to make me giggle. <b>”Noooo!”</b> I shrieked. I knew now what she had planned and as my best friend she knew all my worst tickle spots - because she liked to tease me a lot. <b>”I have been wanting to do this to you for a long time; yeah I tickle you all the time but this, well this is a dream.”</b>
I writhed and tugged at the chains with all my strength as she dug her fingernails inside my deep hollow armpits; my head threw backwards as a stream of laughter came out of my mouth and echoed around the walls of the basement. <b>”No, Sarah. I will do anything you ask.”</b> I couldn’t control my laughter as she kept swirling her fingers around in circles inside my armpits; my face was already beetroot red and sweat trickled down the side of my cheeks as I panted heavily. <b>”A break already. Wow your weaker than I thought.”</b> Sarah spoke as she took her fingers away from my armpits allowing me to get a small breather. During that time I started to question her; her motives…
<b>”Why, are you doing this? I will let you tickle me without the chains.”</b> Sarah laughed at my begging; she knew I was faster than her and had run away from her tickling fingers plenty of time. <b>”Is that you done now?”</b> I knew it wasn’t a question cause before I could answer she kneeled down on the floor and looked at me for a quick second; the fear screamed over my features and she pulled back my toes. <b>”Uh oh.”</b> I managed to mumble out as she picked up an electric toothbrush and directed it in between my toes; the bristles scratched every sensitive part of my toes as I thrashed against the chains once again. My eyes rolled inside of my eye socket; I screamed and laughed as I tried to pull my foot away but it was no use she had a good grip of them and the chains were keeping me pretty bound.
<b>”Please stop. No more, no more.”</b> I begged and pleaded whilst my body wiggled from left to right…….. She eventually stopped. <b>”Is that you done Sarah?”</b> I panted blowing air out of my mouth; trying to cool myself off. <b>”Oh this has just begun”</b>………..
