shytickler
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- Jun 7, 2003
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Hello TMF,
I just finished uploading my first "choose your own tickle" story.
It's at:
www.cyocyoa.com/view.php?id=408
I really love choose-your-own-tickle stories, but haven't seen one since Josie's old website. I must admit, my story is very much inspired by Josie's. That story from Josie's page from the 90s is still one of my all time favorites, and inspired me to write my own choose-your-own-tickle story. It seems like it's long overdue for one.
I'd appreciate if anyone could read it and give your feedback.
It's told from the perspective of a female lee, and it is all belly/bellybutton tickling. It's a gift for us "belly people" I've wanted to write for a long time.
The tickling is entirely */f.
I'd appreciate any comments or constructive criticism on both the content of the story itself, and also the website I'm using. I just found this website, so I don't know how intuitive it is for others to read. Please let me know. Let me know how you liked the story too.
Obviously it's not going to be interesting for people who are strictly into feet. Also, some of the pages have only one choice, just to move the story along. I'd appreciate any feedback on how people like those parts too.
The story is public, but can't be edited by anyone else, so it's not one of those stories you can add chapters to. However, if anyone has ideas on things they'd like to see, things that would make the story better, new chapter ideas, etc, I would love to read your feedback. I'm very willing to edit and add other people's ideas to the story. I only have one requirement, and admittedly it may be a deal breaker for some, but I ask that you respect the integrity of the store as a "belly only" tickling fantasy.
Thanks to anyone who takes the time to read it.
I just finished uploading my first "choose your own tickle" story.
It's at:
www.cyocyoa.com/view.php?id=408
I really love choose-your-own-tickle stories, but haven't seen one since Josie's old website. I must admit, my story is very much inspired by Josie's. That story from Josie's page from the 90s is still one of my all time favorites, and inspired me to write my own choose-your-own-tickle story. It seems like it's long overdue for one.
I'd appreciate if anyone could read it and give your feedback.
It's told from the perspective of a female lee, and it is all belly/bellybutton tickling. It's a gift for us "belly people" I've wanted to write for a long time.
The tickling is entirely */f.
I'd appreciate any comments or constructive criticism on both the content of the story itself, and also the website I'm using. I just found this website, so I don't know how intuitive it is for others to read. Please let me know. Let me know how you liked the story too.
Obviously it's not going to be interesting for people who are strictly into feet. Also, some of the pages have only one choice, just to move the story along. I'd appreciate any feedback on how people like those parts too.
The story is public, but can't be edited by anyone else, so it's not one of those stories you can add chapters to. However, if anyone has ideas on things they'd like to see, things that would make the story better, new chapter ideas, etc, I would love to read your feedback. I'm very willing to edit and add other people's ideas to the story. I only have one requirement, and admittedly it may be a deal breaker for some, but I ask that you respect the integrity of the store as a "belly only" tickling fantasy.
Thanks to anyone who takes the time to read it.
