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C chicago Guest Joined Apr 11, 2003 Messages 14,172 Points 38 Oct 29, 2013 #1 ---- ---- Last edited: Jun 5, 2020
C.A.B. 3rd Level White Feather Joined Jan 14, 2010 Messages 9,560 Points 0 Oct 29, 2013 #2 Nice use of typography as a story telling element. Well done.
G general thade TMF Regular Joined Jul 14, 2002 Messages 239 Points 0 Oct 29, 2013 #3 Awesome story. I too enjoyed the typography bit. It reflected her feelings well and made it believable.
Awesome story. I too enjoyed the typography bit. It reflected her feelings well and made it believable.
H Huth Guest Joined Sep 28, 2012 Messages 11,018 Points 0 Oct 30, 2013 #4 general thade said: Awesome story. I too enjoyed the typography bit. It reflected her feelings well and made it believable. Click to expand... simple and lucid style, loved it
general thade said: Awesome story. I too enjoyed the typography bit. It reflected her feelings well and made it believable. Click to expand... simple and lucid style, loved it
milagros317 Verified Joined Jan 12, 2002 Messages 575,219 Points 63 Oct 30, 2013 #5 Fine story. Very hot.
L love feet 3rd Level White Feather Joined Jul 31, 2008 Messages 9,616 Points 38 Nov 5, 2013 #6 very nice keep going!
Joker Jack TMF Master Joined Jan 19, 2007 Messages 677 Points 18 Nov 8, 2013 #7 Oooh Annie... that was wonderful... Please give us more - I would never tire of reading your stories.
Oooh Annie... that was wonderful... Please give us more - I would never tire of reading your stories.
T ticklerpilot TMF Regular Joined Sep 12, 2013 Messages 184 Points 0 Feb 22, 2014 #8 i love this scenario
G gentlefeather007 2nd Level Red Feather Joined Oct 20, 2007 Messages 1,315 Points 36 Feb 22, 2014 #9 Wow M.... That was incredible!!!! You write very well, and quite an erotic tale. I don't know how i missed it befre!!
Wow M.... That was incredible!!!! You write very well, and quite an erotic tale. I don't know how i missed it befre!!