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bktick
05-03-2015, 10:37 PM
Somewhere in a remote area, rumored to be within a remote Russian territory is a self-contained community, where powerful women are in complete control. The ruling authority, although somewhat of a secret is controlled by women. Laws are made to ensure men and even adolescent boys are educated and guided thru a long process that inevitably renders them subservient to women throughout their entire life, even to the point of being bought and sold by women of power and influence. The legend goes that for generations before, women there were treated so terribly by men that at some point there was a revolt and to this day, a culture exists of absolute female domination. Many methodologies are in place to ensure that this culture will forever continue, as well as remain a secret to the outside world. At a certain point in their teen years…. Boys from outside areas are brought here unknowingly…and their lives will forever be altered.

John is a newly chosen member of this community. He thought a weekend trip with a couple beautiful eastern European beauties would be a dream come true. They met at a shopping mall, and after hitting it off, he traveled with them back to their place (or so he thought) for a weekend of fun. He hadn’t told anyone that he left…. and after one of the girls told him she “lost” his cellphone, after using it to make a call, he felt that something wasn’t quite right…..

Let me know what you think so far… I have big plans for this story~

Tickleyou
05-04-2015, 03:25 AM
Keep going!

milagros317
05-04-2015, 04:15 AM
Very promising set up. Go ahead. :D

Smellking
05-04-2015, 11:55 AM
I´m waiting. ;-)