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T The_Hawk TMF Regular Joined Jan 7, 2012 Messages 195 Points 0 Sep 27, 2015 #1 ... redacted Last edited: Jan 7, 2019
D djhalo07 TMF Expert Joined Jun 18, 2007 Messages 426 Points 0 Oct 5, 2015 #2 Please keep up the momentum... Great story.
T The_Hawk TMF Regular Joined Jan 7, 2012 Messages 195 Points 0 Oct 5, 2015 #3 OMG, a comment. Am I dreaming?
milagros317 Verified Joined Jan 12, 2002 Messages 575,155 Points 63 Oct 6, 2015 #4 This is actually a very interesting story, which I missed when part one was posted. Don't worry over having no comments. I once had a story with over 30,000 views before it got its first comment.
This is actually a very interesting story, which I missed when part one was posted. Don't worry over having no comments. I once had a story with over 30,000 views before it got its first comment.
crydun Verified Joined Apr 17, 2001 Messages 3,177 Points 0 Dec 2, 2015 #5 great story! get er good. yes, mine don't get a lot of comments either but I keep writing. You should too!!
great story! get er good. yes, mine don't get a lot of comments either but I keep writing. You should too!!
C Coda 2nd Level Red Feather Joined Jan 16, 2006 Messages 1,300 Points 38 Jan 2, 2016 #6 Apparently I also missed part one and enjoyed this part, particularly Leah's combination of friendliness and uninhibitedness. Thank you for posting.
Apparently I also missed part one and enjoyed this part, particularly Leah's combination of friendliness and uninhibitedness. Thank you for posting.
B bhsballer TMF Poster Joined Oct 17, 2003 Messages 144 Points 0 Jan 6, 2016 #8 Very great story. Love the writing. Cant wait to see where it all leads to.