evilghost
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<H2>Part 1: Introduction (non tk)</H2>
<B>Cast Characters:</B>
Mac: http://fav.me/d8bkpc9
Miyako: http://fav.me/d8wh6fs
Everything happened during beautiful summer night. Mac was relaxing in his house in the middle of the forest. He decided to go on nearby hill, to stare at stars that were perfectly visible in that time. He took a flashlight and telescope and went out of home. Sounds of owls and crickets together with full moon shining on the sky made the forest a little bit less eerie. Unfortunately darkness all around, trees and shadows moving still were constantly giving the scene creepy and unsettling feeling. Deep inside he felt that area is swarmed with wild animals. He could swear that bat is flying high over his head and follow him. Mac was already alarmed by his surrounding but that creepy feeling of animal following him, was making him seriously afraid. Bat soon flew deeper in the forest disappearing in the darkness. Mac in same time almost reached his destination. The place was perfect. Quite high over rest of the woods and also void of high trees that were broken during recent strong winds and thunderstorms. He had perfect view on the stars from here, so he set his telescope and started to admire that wonderful points lit on the sky.
Suddenly… he heard something that sounded like a silent cry… He looked around but saw nothing suspicious…
“Strange” - he thought… “I must be imagining things. It is too late and too deep in the forest for anyone to wonder around.”
He returned to watching the stars… But crying sound repeated itself… closer to the place where he stood. It appeared that someone seriously is nearby and cry… Mac a little afraid decided to investigate origin of strange noise.
“Hallo? Is someone there?” - he asked pointing with beam of light from flashlight in the direction where voice was coming from and walking slowly that way.
As a response he heard a gasp followed by trembling beautiful young voice: “Thanks God someone is here!” – After these words Mac noticed beautiful girl dressed in thin gown (that looked like from another century) on the end of light beam. – “Please help me... I was wondering around the forest and got lost.” – girl sobbed – “Please help me find a way out”
Mac noticed that the girl is trembling, pale and swaying on her legs. Night was quite cold and her clothes did not look like warm ones. She probably have been wondering around for a long time and got really cold. Mac rushed towards the girl trying to help her stand. –“Oh damn you look like you are freezing!” He said checking her forehead with his hand… It was almost ice cold! He immediately put on her, his jacket and started to rub her arms and shoulders hugging her to warm her up.
“We have to warm you up. We are far from the town but I will try to help you in my home come with me. I hope you will be ok” – Mac said helping girl stand and walk.
“Thank you. I am happy that you were here…” – girl fainted probably too tired and cold. Mac was terrified but that also forced him to act quick. He took the girl on his hands and hurrying carried her to his home He had to at least try, to save her as soon as he can. Mac left his telescope and proceed carrying unconcious girlto his home. She was laying limp on his hands. They arived at place in less than 5 minutes. Mac opened the door and carried her to a bed in guest room. He took out her shoes laid her on the bed and covered her with thick eiderdown quilt. Then he turned on heater closed front door to the house and returned to her. He sat on a chair next to her bed and waited until hypotermia symptoms will start to slowly pass away. He was worried about her and also started to think if he is not heating her too fast. Soon the girl slowly started to regain conciousness. She blinked weakly few times and turned her head in his direction smiling. Mac was relieved it seemed like the girl slowly return to health. She tried to sit but Mac stoped her with words - "Don't move. If you will suddenly do that now, I am afraid you may pass out. Lay still and rest for a moment. You were very cold and in terrible condition. I am glad you are getting better." In return girl looked at him the way noone ever stared at him before... She was looking at him almost like on prince from fairy tale. That look subconciously forced him to blush, but before he got time to think about it, girl said: "Thank you. I do not know what would happen to me if I would not meet you. Where are we? And what is your name my hero?" Saying that girl blushed and giggled cutely causing Mac's blush to deepen. He was completely speachles for a moment but finally dared to respond. "My name is Mac and we are in my home. What is your name? How long you've been wondering around? And... why did you went to the forest alone in this kind of attire?" He even dared to grab her hand while asking. Her palm was no longer cold but nicely warm and almost velvetly smooth. "Nice to meet you Mac. I am Miyako. I went to the forest with my friends after costume party I had with them... but I noticed deer and tracking him I separated from them and got lost..." Mac noticed that tears start to form in her eyes and girls voice start to tremble as she continued her answer. "...I wondered around the forest for the whole day..." - girl sat, and about to cry continued - "... if I would not meet you around, I..." she did not finish but instead launched herself on Mac huging him tight and crying loudly. He huged her back and slowly rubed, and stroke her shoulders and back trying to soothe her. As they were cuddling... he noticed sth. strange... She was moderaty warm a lot colder than normal people but in the same time seemed stronger than them... Before he could gather thoughts to analyse what is going on he felt tender, fierce, disarming kiss aimed at his neck... and soon after, stinging painfull feeling in same area... She bit him... Mac slowly started to weaken. Slowly sliping limp on her... Feeling like someone is pumping out his blood and stream of said fluid flowing down his neck... Hearing muffled sounds and ringing in his ears he fell on the floor... He could not believe what he saw before starting to loose sense of colors and world around... Miyako... Standing over him with devilish grin painted on her blood stained mounth and enormous fangs... With glowing, fluorescent, red (instead of calm blue) eyes staring madly on his filing up fate.
Will Mac survive the night? Will he change into blood thirsty creature? What is Miyako planning?
If you want to know the answers stay tuned for the next episode (that will be posted here)
<B>Cast Characters:</B>
Mac: http://fav.me/d8bkpc9
Miyako: http://fav.me/d8wh6fs
Everything happened during beautiful summer night. Mac was relaxing in his house in the middle of the forest. He decided to go on nearby hill, to stare at stars that were perfectly visible in that time. He took a flashlight and telescope and went out of home. Sounds of owls and crickets together with full moon shining on the sky made the forest a little bit less eerie. Unfortunately darkness all around, trees and shadows moving still were constantly giving the scene creepy and unsettling feeling. Deep inside he felt that area is swarmed with wild animals. He could swear that bat is flying high over his head and follow him. Mac was already alarmed by his surrounding but that creepy feeling of animal following him, was making him seriously afraid. Bat soon flew deeper in the forest disappearing in the darkness. Mac in same time almost reached his destination. The place was perfect. Quite high over rest of the woods and also void of high trees that were broken during recent strong winds and thunderstorms. He had perfect view on the stars from here, so he set his telescope and started to admire that wonderful points lit on the sky.
Suddenly… he heard something that sounded like a silent cry… He looked around but saw nothing suspicious…
“Strange” - he thought… “I must be imagining things. It is too late and too deep in the forest for anyone to wonder around.”
He returned to watching the stars… But crying sound repeated itself… closer to the place where he stood. It appeared that someone seriously is nearby and cry… Mac a little afraid decided to investigate origin of strange noise.
“Hallo? Is someone there?” - he asked pointing with beam of light from flashlight in the direction where voice was coming from and walking slowly that way.
As a response he heard a gasp followed by trembling beautiful young voice: “Thanks God someone is here!” – After these words Mac noticed beautiful girl dressed in thin gown (that looked like from another century) on the end of light beam. – “Please help me... I was wondering around the forest and got lost.” – girl sobbed – “Please help me find a way out”
Mac noticed that the girl is trembling, pale and swaying on her legs. Night was quite cold and her clothes did not look like warm ones. She probably have been wondering around for a long time and got really cold. Mac rushed towards the girl trying to help her stand. –“Oh damn you look like you are freezing!” He said checking her forehead with his hand… It was almost ice cold! He immediately put on her, his jacket and started to rub her arms and shoulders hugging her to warm her up.
“We have to warm you up. We are far from the town but I will try to help you in my home come with me. I hope you will be ok” – Mac said helping girl stand and walk.
“Thank you. I am happy that you were here…” – girl fainted probably too tired and cold. Mac was terrified but that also forced him to act quick. He took the girl on his hands and hurrying carried her to his home He had to at least try, to save her as soon as he can. Mac left his telescope and proceed carrying unconcious girlto his home. She was laying limp on his hands. They arived at place in less than 5 minutes. Mac opened the door and carried her to a bed in guest room. He took out her shoes laid her on the bed and covered her with thick eiderdown quilt. Then he turned on heater closed front door to the house and returned to her. He sat on a chair next to her bed and waited until hypotermia symptoms will start to slowly pass away. He was worried about her and also started to think if he is not heating her too fast. Soon the girl slowly started to regain conciousness. She blinked weakly few times and turned her head in his direction smiling. Mac was relieved it seemed like the girl slowly return to health. She tried to sit but Mac stoped her with words - "Don't move. If you will suddenly do that now, I am afraid you may pass out. Lay still and rest for a moment. You were very cold and in terrible condition. I am glad you are getting better." In return girl looked at him the way noone ever stared at him before... She was looking at him almost like on prince from fairy tale. That look subconciously forced him to blush, but before he got time to think about it, girl said: "Thank you. I do not know what would happen to me if I would not meet you. Where are we? And what is your name my hero?" Saying that girl blushed and giggled cutely causing Mac's blush to deepen. He was completely speachles for a moment but finally dared to respond. "My name is Mac and we are in my home. What is your name? How long you've been wondering around? And... why did you went to the forest alone in this kind of attire?" He even dared to grab her hand while asking. Her palm was no longer cold but nicely warm and almost velvetly smooth. "Nice to meet you Mac. I am Miyako. I went to the forest with my friends after costume party I had with them... but I noticed deer and tracking him I separated from them and got lost..." Mac noticed that tears start to form in her eyes and girls voice start to tremble as she continued her answer. "...I wondered around the forest for the whole day..." - girl sat, and about to cry continued - "... if I would not meet you around, I..." she did not finish but instead launched herself on Mac huging him tight and crying loudly. He huged her back and slowly rubed, and stroke her shoulders and back trying to soothe her. As they were cuddling... he noticed sth. strange... She was moderaty warm a lot colder than normal people but in the same time seemed stronger than them... Before he could gather thoughts to analyse what is going on he felt tender, fierce, disarming kiss aimed at his neck... and soon after, stinging painfull feeling in same area... She bit him... Mac slowly started to weaken. Slowly sliping limp on her... Feeling like someone is pumping out his blood and stream of said fluid flowing down his neck... Hearing muffled sounds and ringing in his ears he fell on the floor... He could not believe what he saw before starting to loose sense of colors and world around... Miyako... Standing over him with devilish grin painted on her blood stained mounth and enormous fangs... With glowing, fluorescent, red (instead of calm blue) eyes staring madly on his filing up fate.
Will Mac survive the night? Will he change into blood thirsty creature? What is Miyako planning?
If you want to know the answers stay tuned for the next episode (that will be posted here)