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Thicker Than Water (teaser)

silvershadow

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I'm always quite hesitant when it comes to posting non-tickling teasers on a tickling site, but I was told it might be worth a shot, so here it is. This teaser contains no tickling at all, the story itself - contains a lot of it. Available you-know-where, if it caught anyone's attention.

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“Get off me already!” screamed Ellen, throwing a rolled up blouse across the room. She missed widely, the clothing smacking the wall.
The girl gave her sister an angry look before hiding her face behind a book again. She just wanted one quiet evening, so she could read more than just a couple paragraphs at once.
Ellen and Hannah were twins, but they couldn’t be more different. The former, a shy and quiet bookworm, preferred a library to a party. The latter, wild and careless, thrived on social gatherings. They didn’t even look alike. Hannah, although born a few minutes later, had a much more mature physiognomy. Quite tall for a girl, toned and often tanned, liked to wear clothes that underlined her body. Ellen, on the contrary, still resembled a kid, despite being already nineteen. Slim, maybe even a bit skinny, pretty pale, she often wore beads or ponytails on her light brown hair. Jeans and oversized shirts were her thing and that was exactly what she had on, cuddling under the blanket.
Hannah shook her head and poked her tongue out before she disappeared behind the door. She had better things to do, especially after she felt something vibrating in her pocket. She plopped on the bed in her room and answered the phone.
The girls didn’t really like each other, but that was common for siblings. Just like oil and water didn’t mix, neither did Ellen and Hannah. They were total opposites in looks, characters and interests, and that might’ve been the main reason they didn’t click and spent more time fighting than not. Of course, at the same time, they loved each other to death. That also was common for siblings, especially for twins. No matter how different they might be, there was always that weird twin bond that would withstand the worst.
Ellen could hold a grudge on her sister for leaving her stuff all around the house. Bras, skirts, combs, notebooks – they were everywhere, from the stools in the guest room to Ellen’s room, stuck under the pillow or between the older sibling’s clothes. Hannah could be mad at the other twin for being so uptight. They lived in a normal house, not some jail, and just because Ellen was so obsessed about order, didn’t mean that a sock left on the floor was a crime.
But now the younger girl – despite the fact that it was just a couple minutes, Hannah still hated being the younger one – was preoccupied with a phone talk, so she forgot an argument with her sister quite easily. And Ellen could finally read in peace, not even bothered by the loud laughter coming from the next room.
She was getting fed up with the whole situation. Hannah was messy, what could be understood, but she didn’t seem to see anything bad in her messiness, and that pissed Ellen off. And then she finally got it. A short glimpse of an idea sparked in her dark blonde head as she put the book back and started listening to the sounds her sister was making behind the wall. They didn’t last for long, but Ellen already knew how to teach Hannah some manners.
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Ellen, having read so many books, was a smart girl. She was aware that big plans needed a lot of preparations and that’s what she was doing. Her irritation grew further as she found Hannah’s clothes in her room again next day, but it only made her more eager. She had already depicted the twin being sorry and promising to always leave things at their own place. The sole thought of finally beating some sense into her sibling made her grin widely. She just needed a little more time and an opportunity.
The latter came quicker than she expected. Just a couple days later Hannah peeked into the doorway again.
“Yo,” she yawned, “Tom’s asking us to drop by on Friday. Home alone. Just we and he. Wanna come?”
Ellen suddenly lost interest in a book she was still reading.
“Yeah, sure…” she replied, trying to keep her voice as calm and indifferent as possible.
This was the greatest thing that could’ve happened. She had had a crush on Tom for a few years, but never had the nerve to tell him how she felt. They’d been good friends, but she’d always wanted something more. He, apparently, not so much. This might’ve been her best opportunity, and she could kill two birds with one stone. She would ask Tom for help, winning his heart, and deal with her twin.
“She said yeah,” announced Hannah via the phone. “Will be fun.”
Ellen took some effort to hide a smirk. Her sister didn’t even realize how fun it would truly be.
 
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