Tee's story is finished. At least with me as its author. It was my first multiple chapter story and I enjoyed writing it. But I believe that my writing skill is just terrible. Spelling, punctuation, sentence and paragraph structure leave much to be desired and the tickling sessions I feel could be improved a lot also. In fact the Spa scenario at the end should have been mostly a tickling session with three girls tickling both Sam and Tee. But I felt like my descriptive capabilities just weren't up to the task.
So if there are any writers who read the story and liked it but feel like you could have done the story more justice. You have my blessing and request to take the story, clean it up, abbreviate it if necessary, and completely rewrite the tickling scenes. Any writers are also invited to take the characters and do with them as you please. Her entire story is linked below.
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291232-the-interview
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291295-the-second-interview
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291297-third-and-final-interview
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291505-Tee-s-first-session
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291550-Tee-s-first-session-part-2
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291942-tee-s-first-challenge-part-1
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291949-Tee-s-first-challenge-part-2
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291968-TEE-S-first-challenge-part-3
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?292009-Tee-s-transformstion-part-1
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?292034-Tee-s-transformation-part-2-(Tee-s-final-chapter)
Respectfully;
Lyn74
So if there are any writers who read the story and liked it but feel like you could have done the story more justice. You have my blessing and request to take the story, clean it up, abbreviate it if necessary, and completely rewrite the tickling scenes. Any writers are also invited to take the characters and do with them as you please. Her entire story is linked below.
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291232-the-interview
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291295-the-second-interview
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291297-third-and-final-interview
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291505-Tee-s-first-session
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291550-Tee-s-first-session-part-2
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291942-tee-s-first-challenge-part-1
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291949-Tee-s-first-challenge-part-2
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?291968-TEE-S-first-challenge-part-3
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?292009-Tee-s-transformstion-part-1
http://www.ticklingforum.com/showthread.php?292034-Tee-s-transformation-part-2-(Tee-s-final-chapter)
Respectfully;
Lyn74