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an old story of mine: Submission

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here is a story i wrote before i even joined the TMF. i think it was written back in 2000. i sent it to TummyDragon's site, www.tklovers.com back then and i thought i would post it so that you can see some really early work by me. i hope you enjoy and feedback always welcomed. also, i know this is cheesy, but dont forget to vote for me in the Golden feathers for best fiction author. i know, shameless plug, but i really do appreciate the nomination.







Maria made her way into the saloon in a foul mood. standing 5'8" tall, 125
lbs, and long dark black hair that made it down to her waist, she entered
and everyone was at attention. You see, Maria was a "bad girl", one tough
mamacita. she belonged to a gang known as the "Black Widows" and she was
known within the group as the enforcer. she was strikingly beautiful, but
with her temper and her nasty disposition, no guy ever had a chance. she had
wounded and sometimes killed many men and women over little things, such as
bumping into her when she was having a bad day. she had no remorse for
anything. all she loved was her gang. a group of about 10 women just like
her. She and the gang were in deep Texas, hiding from the law in a little
known town. Clad in her black leather jacket, blue jeans and black cowboy
boots, she walked in.

"gimme a beer!!!" she demanded to the bartender. as she walked over to
the bar, she noticed people looking at her. "what'cha looking at!!" she
would scowl back. she made her way up to the bar and began to drink the cool
drink.

the bartender looked at her. "what's eating you?" he asked

"someone scratched my bike, and i'm really pissed. if i find out who
did it, they'll be sorry." she replied

"well, relax. what's a pretty girl like you doing here anyway?" the
bartender asked with a flirtatious look in his eye.

"look gringo, none of that bullshit okay?. i'm just here, passing
through." she shot back.

"where's the rest of your gang?"

"they're around. dont worry about it." she answered. then she saw a
tall white woman leaving the restroom. Maria doesnt no why, but she had to
look at her. she was about 6' tall, thin and had long flowing blond hair,
with a cowboy hat on top. the blond made her way to the bar, and sat next to
Maria.

"hi." she told Maria. Maria didnt reply. "hey Harvey, i need your help.
i accidently hit a motorcycle outside and i scratched it a little. i want to
find the owner, so i can pay for it, but i know no one lives in this town
has a motorcycle like that."

Maria's eyes lit up. "it was you?!" she then proceeded to splash her
beer in the blond's face, then hit her with a right cross against the jaw.
the blond hit the ground with a thud and looked up at Maria standing over
her. "You little blond bitch, no one damages my things!" she yelled as she
started to punch the blond lady in the chest and stomach. Harvey and some
others quickly broke up the fight.

"you're going to have to leave now!" Harvey yelled while brandishing a
gun.

Maria got up and with a pissed off look, gave Harvey the "bird" and
walked out. Harvey helped the blond up. "Sorry about that Rhonda."

"dont worry Harvey. that little bitch will learn a lesson in civility.
just wait." Rhonda said as she rubbed her aching jaw.

Several days passed, and Maria was hanging out with her gang, finishing
the touches on her bike. "There, all better now." as she patted the side of
the bike. the others laughed. then one of them said, "Hey Maria, we're going
to go to the local strip club and get our groove on. let's go."

"I'll catch up to you. go on ahead." she told them. the others then
left. after 2 minutes a man walked up to Maria and handed her a letter.
Maria quickly opened the letter, and it read: "you will be punished for what
you did to me. if you're not gutless, then meet me at the old wherehouse on
Main. come alone you little bitch." signed--- the woman you pissed off at
the bar. Maria was infuriated. threats? to her? this is something she
couldnt pass up. forget the club, she was going to fight. she sped off on
her motorcycle and made it to the wherehouse. it was a deserted one, but
still had boxes and tables and things as it used to be a wood furniture
wherehouse. she made her way in, knife in hand. "Okay you bitch. I'm here!
show yourself, so you can meet your maker!" she yelled. but there was no
reply. she tenderly walked thru the rows of boxes and could still see
sawdust on the floors. and since it was still afternoon, the place was very
humid. as she turned a corner, she stepped over a trip wire which brought
huge boxes on top of her. she hit the ground with boxes full of wood onto
her. she looked up to see a pair of white cowboy boots walking to her. then
she passed out.

she woke up to find herself laid out onto a wooden table, with her arms
spread apart over her head and tied to wooden beams that were attached to
the corners of the table. her legs were also spread eagle and each knee was
strapped down to the table by huge leather straps. she couldnt move. she was
still fully dressed, including her jacket, but she could only wiggle her
feet and move her body side to side. she tried to wiggle free, but she was
bound good. her body was strecthed taut, so her top was pulled up a little
over her belly. it was still hot and she was sweating. her hair was already
beginning to mat to her face. and with the lamp abouve her, she felt she was
baking. then Rhonda showed up. walking with a strut, she made her way to
Maria's face.

"well, well, well. look what i caught. how ironic. i caught a black
widow in my web." Rhonda mused.

"Look bitch, let me go, and i might let you live!" Maria snapped back.

"i dont think so, you evil little slut. you see, i didnt appreciate you
hitting me a few days ago. i was going to pay for the damages. but you
decided to hit me instead. so now, i'm going to make you PAY." Rhonda
threatened.

Maria thought she was done for. here she was captured, and at Rhonda's
mercy. "go ahead, get it over with. kill me..." she whispered, and closed
her eyes.

"Oh no. that's not what i had in mind. i dont kill people. i just want
to torture you into submission. you will obey everything i say. you see, i
found out a little something about you. you're always so hostile. you never
smile. always so uptight. but after i break you, you will be such a sweet
little girl."

Maria began to think. tortured? into a submissive little girl? the
thought was ridiculous. she has been through knife fights, shot, even
tortured with hot steel on her back. she still wouldnt break to anyone. she
was usually left for dead when she didnt "break". and now some prissy white
girl was going to make her submit. "you'll never break me. try your best."
she told Rhonda.

"Now Maria, of course i expected you to say that. that's what will make
this even more fun. you see, the torture i had in mind isnt what you're
expecting. it is something that seems trivial, but yet it has to be the most
effective form of punishment ever. your mind can block out pain..." she
began to walk over to Maria's midsection on the table. "...but this is
something that your hard ass isnt used to." she began to pull up Maria's
shirt to expose her bare belly. Maria's belly was smooth and very soft.
Rhonda casually placed her index finger on her belly and began to trace it
over the smooth skin. Maria began to twitch. "My, My, My. what such soft
skin. i wouldnt expect such softness coming from you."

Maria's skin was very soft. she always took care of her skin. she may
have been hard on the inside, but she was very "tender" on the outside. the
finger continued to graze her belly, and Maria was beginning to squirm. this
wasnt a comfortable feeling at all. in fact, she wanted to laugh. but she
held it in as best as she could.

"So, Maria. are you ticklish?" Rhonda asked.

Maria was indeed ticklish. she just didnt know how much. every once in
a while she was tickled as a kid, but because she was involved in crime, she
really didnt have any opportunities to be tickled. "S-Stop that."

"why? how about if i do this!" Rhonda then plunged her finger into
Maria's belly and Maria immediately began to laugh. "So we are ticklish!
good! now, you shall suffer." the tickling stopped. Rhonda brought out a
knife and heavy duty cutting scissors and began to cut Maria's jacket! she
cut the sleeves off and pulled the remaining jacket off of Maria's tied body
and began to cut her shirt off. Maria was in shocked. she was going to be
tickle tortured and stripped! the shirt was cut off exposing maria's bare
chest, with her breasts jiggling helplessly. "Time for some fun!" Rhonda
then began to tickle Maria's smooth armpits and Maria went ballistic.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! STOP!!!!! PPPPLLLEASE STOP!"
Maria howled. but the torment didnt stop. over and over she tickled the
smooth baby soft skin of Maria's pits. Maria's head was shaking back and
forth. then Rhonda moved over to the jiggling breast and began to squeeze
and tickle the breast. Maria was losing it already. after about 5 minutes of
breast and nipple torture, Rhonda began to torture the ribs. playing them
like a piano, Rhonda continued her torture.

"C'mon Maria! laugh for me. i said LAUGH FOR ME!!!!" she yelled as she
continued the torment.

Maria was beginning to tire. she was laughing to hard. she never laughed
this much before. and she was sweating profusely. Maria had no idea she was
this ticklish. then after 15 minutes, Rhonda stopped. Maria began to catch
her breath, but got a worried look when Rhonda walked over to where her feet
were.

"I wonder if your feet are ticklish?" Rhonda asked. she began to pull
off the right boot, revealing a sweaty white cotton sock. she began to peel
the sock off and exposed the barefoot of Maria. Maria had size 8 feet, and
they were very sweaty. "what cute little toes you have." Rhonda mused.
Maria's toes were the short, stubby kind, like "caveman toes" with no polish
on. the skin of her feet were extremely soft and tender. Maria never walked
barefoot. she even slept in socks. she never really exposed her feet, unless
she bathed or went swimming. there wasnt a trace of a callous or any other
imperfections. Rhonda almost began to lick her chops. Maria didnt really
know how ticklish her feet were. she was about to find out.

Rhonda simply traced her finger from the base of the toes, down the
ball of the foot, across the arch and finally the heel, when Maria let out
this horrific squeal. her feet were indeed very, very ticklish. Rhonda was
just amazed how soft the foot was. she never ran across a foot so tender, so
soft. and it was more amazing coming from a person as tough as Maria was
supposed to be. she continued her assualt on the tender sole, scraping the
skin on the ball of the foot, then across the arch where the instep was, and
back to the ball. Maria was hysterical. she laughed and laughed. she even
went into the silent laugh. Rhonda was in ecstacy. then she began to tickle
the little toes, right under them in the fleshy skin.

"HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!! PLEASE!!
NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOO MMMMMMMOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEE!!!!" Maria laughed.

But Rhonda wasnt going to stop now. she was enjoying this. the she
scraped her finger nail right on the crease where the big toe meets the
sole. Maria continued to howl. after ten minutes in just that one spot,
Rhonda began to nibble on the little toes. Maria couldnt believe the
sensation. Rhonda's tongue flicked in and out of the soft crevices between
the toes, sending shockwaves through Maria's body. she then got up and
stopped the foot torture. Rhonda was beginning to get aroused and decided to
torment maria further. "Look bitch, will you submit to me?" she asked Maria

Maria, trying to catch her breath, simplied replied, "N-Never."

"Fine have it your way." Rhonda walked over to Maria's midsection and
began to unzip the jeans. after unzipping them, Rhonda began to cut the
panties open, exposing Maria's most private spot. she then began to lightly
tickle the hair around the pubic area, sending Maria into hysteria. she
definitely has never been tickled there. after 5 minutes of teasing the
pubic hair, Rhonda noticed Maria was getting aroused as well. she then
walked over to the nipples and began to lightly tickle them. Maria lost it,
her now sensitized body was in severe torment between tickling and ecstasy.

"please. stop. i cant take this anymore....." she whispered.

Rhonda simple looked at her. "i'm not done with you yet." she then
walked back over to the foot of the table and removed the other boot. then
tugging at the sock at the toe, she used the scissors and cut the sock at
the toes, just exposing the warm, sweaty toes of Maria's left foot. then she
pulled the baby toe away from the next toe and plunged her fingernail in the
soft crevice. Maria renewed her laughing torment. her toes were being
tormented again. Rhonda continued to tickle each and every crevice of the
toes, and then began to nibble on them again, especially on the big toe.
after 5 minutes, the torment stopped. Rhonda walked back over to Maria's
exposed vagina and began to nuzzle and tickle the area. Maria began to
laugh, but also felt a warm sensation all over her body. as Rhonda continued
to lick her now engorged clitoris, Maria felt the waves of orgasm come over
her. she released her orgasm and after it was over she laid there completly
helpless. she never had an orgasm like that before. as she laid there
weakly, Rhonda walked over to her head again. "do you submit to me?"

"Yes.....yes.... i....submit...." Maria moaned.

"Will you EVER mess with me or anyone in this town again?"

"no...."

"No what?!"

"No my mistress......"

"Okay you little slut, you can go. but i dont ever want to see you
again, you hear?!" she told her asked she let Maria loose from her bonds.

Maria laid there in a sweat. completely exhausted and weak, she saw
Rhonda leave. Maria couldnt believe what happened to her. there she laid,
half nude, with her chest exposed along with her vagina as well, still
wearing jeans with one foot bare, and the other with a sock with the toes
exposed bare. she never had been humiliated like that before. she pulled
herself up, but her boots back on, and put her now sleeveless jacket back on
and left. yes, Maria would definitely never forget this day. but she now had
a way to punish any future enemies. a vicious cycle had now begun...........
 
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