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First Sojourn, return to the nest, then, a stunning , and joyous, turn of events

Mitchell

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The Paradise Island team, riding the emotional high of their wonderful first homestand, prepared to take the road for their first road trip of the year. This was a good scenario, to promote team bonding. The opponents, however, would have none of the nostalgia, and were just out to kick the Good Guys asses as usual. This was evident during a three game sweep at the hands of the Mets during a cold, miserable, rainy three days in New York. Things got a bit better as they went south, taking two of three in both Atlanta and Houston, before returning home on a Sunday afternoon to begin a series against the teams from the midwest.
That night, Mitch, being the doting man he was, returned home to his family, taking them out to dinner, and getting the kids settled in bed. After getting their usual sitter, Mitch and Naomi had intended to take a moonlight walk on the beach, and then head to the casino to meet up with the other members of the team. On that night, walking hand in hand, all the good times washed over Mitch in his mind, and made him realize, that this was the woman he wanted to spend the rest of his life with. He had three kids, and a lifetime of memories he had shared with her. As they walked, Mitch suddenly turned to Naomi and dropped to one knee:" Naomi, will you marry me?"
Naomi laughed nervously, while she knew that eventually, there would be "forever again" in their future, this is not what she had intended, and told him so:" Mitch, I love you. We are back together, and committed, our family is happy, but if we marry..." "If we marry, what, Nai? Right now, I feel like your roommate whom you just have sex with in order to have a little fun. I want to make it offical" Mitch said. "Ah, Mitch, we are a bit more than just roommates, we were married for 15 years, and have three children together" Naomi said, trying to keep calm. "Exactly, and I told you, all the other violence, and bullshit is gone. We hardly drink, we dont gamble as much as we used to. Hell, I'll even become Christian and go to church, marry me, please" He said. Naomi giggled:" You look so ridiculous down there pleading with me, and, since I do love you, have three kids with you, and dont have any plans for the next 40 or so years, okay, we'll get married, but only to get you off your knees, you silly American!" Naomi said, in jest.
Mitch got up, and kissed Naomi:" Thank you. It is going to be amazing. I promise." He said.
The next morning, when the kids woke up, Naomi made breakfast for them as usual, then, as the family was eating, the subject came up:" Kids, your dad, and I, we have something to tell you" Naomi began. "You're having another kid? Dad, you prev" The oldest daughter, Erin, said, in jest. "No, honey, no more kids, but ah, last night, your dad, and I .. well, we decided to get married again" Naomi said. "Finally! Now the two of you can finally live normally, and I dont have to explain why I'm the only kid in school whose parents were married, then divorced, and are now living in sin" "So, when is this wedding thing happening? Big .. or just" "Ah, I dont know, we hadnt exactly discussed that part. I have to get your mom some rings, and what not. I was thinking just the family, or maybe, just the team" Mitch said. Naomi sat on Mitch's lap:" Yeah, bud, you get to marry me, but Iam not taking your name. Iam still Naomi Watts, and no hypenated crap either." "I wouldnt have it any other way. Besides, I like the idea of having a wife with a different last name. I think it's cool"
That day, after taking the kids to school, Naomi and Mitch took their usual sleep, that they always did, before that night's game with the Pirates, the only difference was that it was broken, and not restful, because they had a lot on their minds. "I wonder what the team is going to say" Naomi mused, lying naked next to Mitch. "I think they'll be happy for us. After all, we dont cause any drama anymore" Mitch said. After giving the kids their dinner, and getting them settled with the sitter, the couple drove in one car to get ready for that night's game with Pittsburgh. As they walked in the clubhouse, hand in hand, they went into Lee Sniderman's office. "Lee, we have something to tell you. Last night, when I came home, Naomi and I.. well, we decided to get married." Lee's face brightened:" Iam happy for you two. I really am. Things are going so great" He said. Then Lee continued. "When is this wedding happening?" "We dont know.. we just told the kids this morning. As soon as possible, and the whole team is invited, but it's going to be small, the team, our family, and friends, no big shindigs"
After announcing the engagement to the team, and changing into their uniforms, the Good Guys took the field to play Pittsburgh. It was a tough game, Kate Hudson giving up three runs in eight innings, and leaving tied, 3-3 in the 8th. In the 9th, same score, Mitch came up, and Naomi, sitting in the dugout after pitching the top of the 9th with the score tied, screamed at Mitch from the dugout:" Hey, spouse to be. No extra innings. Do your job, hit a homerun, and get us the fuck out of here. I dont want to play extra innings tonight!" She screamed. Two pitches later, Mitch delivered, hitting a long drive to right field that carried over the wall, and gave the Good Guys a thrilling 4-3 win. At home plate, embracing Naomi, she said:" Good Job. I guess I'll have to do that more often in tie games" "What would you have done if I had failed?" He said. "Oh, nothing much, just withheld my sexual favors to you, for like, forever, oh, and I would have had to castrate you!" She said, laughing. "ACK! It's a good thing I came through" He said.
In the happy clubouse, Mitch and Naomi fielded questions about the rumor of their engagement : Okay, since we never lie to you, we are going to be honest. Yes, I did ask Naomi to marry me, and yes she did accept. We dont know any of the details, because we havent worked that part out yet. We would also appreciate if the tabloid bullshit was kept to a minimum as we now have the emotions of our three kids to think of. We are going to do this in as organized a way as possible for our kids, ourselves, and the team" Mitch said. "You mean you're not going to run away and elope with me?!" Naomi said, from another part of the clubhouse. "Elope, sure why not, let's get on a plane, and I'll let you deal with the reception from everyone when we get home" Mitch said.
The rest of the homestand played out well, as the Good Guys won six of nine, taking two of three from the Pirates, Cubs, and Cardinals.
On that Saturday night, following a rare Saturday day game with St Louis, Mitch and Naomi were married in front of their children, other family members, and friends in the church on the island. Naomi, wearing a white dress but no veil, was given away by the couple's three children, and she looked as beautiful as ever,while Mitch, wearing a black suit, looked dashing and handsome. The couple, after exchanging tearful, and emotional vows in front of their family and friends, joined with everyone for a beautiful dinner at a beach club. That night, Mitch and Naomi took a room at the hotel, and had an advantage, because the following game was not scheduled until Sunday night at 8pm, allowing the couple time to rest in the daytime. After the usual horsing around, tickling, and foreplay, and making love, they lied in bed nude, with the light from the full moon over the water shining in their window. "I love you, you are so beautiful" Mitch said, gently kissing Naomi's hair. "Forever, this time, okay, its going to be different" Naomi said. "Totally different, you aint ever getting rid of me, lady" Mitch said.
Mitch and Naomi werent going to have much of a honeymoon. After the romantic night at the hotel, the Good Guys finished their homestand, beating the Cardinals 5 to 3, before life returned to normal with a 10 day road trip, and Naomi staying behind to attend to the kids as she always did, abit this time as Mitch's wife. The family was back together, and the team was playing well. All seemed quiet in the land of the Good Guys.
In the meantime, while the team was happy about the remarriage of Mitch and Naomi, they couldnt let such an event pass without tickles, so, at the previous Saturday night tickle party, the couple received their comeuppance. At the team's favorite place, the fetish club, Mitch was stripped naked and tied to the bed. A cruel looking dom dressed in a black dominatrix outfit approached him. "So, you make selfish decisions that fuck things up for your team. You are now going to pay for that, Mr Star player" She said. With the team chanting around him, the dom proceeded to start in on Mitch by running her long nails over his neck, and down his sides, causing him to fill the club with loud howling laughter! Hahahahahahahahahahaha! NO! Far from finished, the dom drew a map with her nails over his midsection, down his thighs, and then to his feet, and his toes, as Mitch, being driven crazy by about the longest nails he had ever been tickled by, filled the room with hysterical, uncontrollable laughter: Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! NO! Real ticklish! NO! Hhahahahhahahahaha!
In the meantime, across the room, Naomi wasnt faring any better. having been stripped nude, two cruel male lers, one dressed in a policeman's uniform, and the other as a doctor, proceeded to attack Naomi's neck and sides, as the beautiful Australian beauty shrieked, and filled the club with girlish laughter: Hehehehehehehehehehehehe! Oh my god No! Then the doctor pulled out a large feather, and drew circles with it around Naomi;s horribly ticklish nipples, causing her to squeal and beg: Heheheheheheheheheeh! Not the nipples! Too ticklish! No! Hehehehehehehehehehehe! Then, after using fingers, feathers and instruments on Naomi's midsection, inner thighs, and knees, the doctor proceeded to pick up Naomi's feet. He stuck Naomi's foot in his mouth, sucking on her toes, which caused her foot to jerk in his mouth, and made her none too happy, because only Mitch, and her previous boyfriend, before the couple had reconciled, had ever sucked on Naomi's toes. The sucking didnt last long, as the Doctor attacked Naomi's bare feet with his fingers, and then feathers, as well as Qtips. Naomi squealed hysterically, filling the room with uncontrollable girlish laughter, and begging for mercy: Hehehehehehehehehe! No more feet! I cant stand it! NO! Hehehehehehehehehehe! Finally, the tickle torture ended, and the exhausted couple was untied.
So, all appeared well in the world of the Good Guys. Mitch and Naomi were married, and had received celebratory tickle torture, and life was quiet. What would happen next? Stay tuned for the continuing story of the Tickle Team from Paradise Island.

The End
 
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Okay, I just emailed you and hadnt realized you had posted already. Thanks for the compliment. It is always appreciated.

Mitch
 
critics.

Jesus Christ is bad, but in my opinion you are the worst story writer at this forum.

i dont know the meaning of this story ?? you want to make love, get tickle or something or what ??

short, bad description, i dont know the purpose of this story, weak plot ... or i could say there is no plot in this story.

re-check again and do you still thinking that you're good writer ??
 
This story is good. The only problem I have with it is that the paragraphs and dialogue are not separated. Thus making it very hard to read with comprehension. But practice makes perfect.

And I beg to differ Valencia, he's not s bad as some others. Unless you're trying to make him feel like he is going head to head, toe to toe, with you.
 
love feet, and Jesus. Thank you both. I'm surprised at the comments on this story, as it is over four years old. Jesus, I appreciate and understand your criticism. In later stories, I do break things up into paragraphs. Someone suggested I do so, and I did, later on. I dont write stories anymore. I stopped about six months ago.

Mitch
 
love feet, and Jesus. Thank you both. I'm surprised at the comments on this story, as it is over four years old. Jesus, I appreciate and understand your criticism. In later stories, I do break things up into paragraphs. Someone suggested I do so, and I did, later on. I dont write stories anymore. I stopped about six months ago.

Mitch
You are quite welcome. I'll be sure to read more of your work.
 
Thanks. As I said, I dont write stories anymore, but there are many posted in the back pages of the forum, as well as a series about a tickling bandit that I did several years ago.

Mitch
 
Thanks. As I said, I dont write stories anymore, but there are many posted in the back pages of the forum, as well as a series about a tickling bandit that I did several years ago.

Mitch

that';s good to hear
 
Maybe you should show us all how it's done. I am always keen to read a good story.

Cheers!
 
Trust me, valencia. My reason for not writing stories anymore isnt because of your flaming post. I could care less what you think. My reason for not writing, is because the people who read these stories have left the forum, and I dont feel like writing anymore. I was looking at your profile. You have only a few posts, and most of them are negative, attacking, posts. That's a pretty pathetic way to start out as a member of the forum. I'll say what Larry Flynt used to say about Hustler. If you dont like my stories, dont read them. Negativity is counterproductive. I'd like to see you write a story, and see if you can do better.

Mitch
 
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Thanks. This is a very old story. Thanks for looking it up,
 
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