Anna Donnison
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We have decided that a futuristic story based on the Silmarillion with slight alteration (No humans) will be adopted. INCORPORATED SLIGHTY WITH SOME OF OUR PREVIOUS GREATER, HIDDEN STORYLINES!
Year: 50000 AD
Morgoth, Lord of Angband and The Dark Power of Middle Earth, contemplated his next move. In this world, long after the dominion of witches, demons and Humans (both the latters extinct) had ended, war between good and evil and between races nonetheless continued. With the orcs, Balrogs and other foul things, things were going well for the evil former Valar. The death of many of the Noldor, such as Finwe, Feanor and Fingolfin as well as brave Finrod, wisest and most kind of all the Noldor and the theft of Feanor's sacred Silmarils brought joy to this heart. Nonetheless the theft of one of the silmarils by Luthien and her beloved Narwil (female Noldor, whose eyes shine with the light of Valinor) galled at him. Also galling the lost of his favourite servant the sire of the wolves. Gothmog and Glaurung, the lord of the Balrogs and Dragons respectively remained at his side. Still he needed to find a way to finally annihilate Odoreth, son of Finarfin and mighty Fingon, Lord of the Noldor. Also on his mind was Turgon, brother of Fingon whose home's locaion remained a mystery. Enemy also was the Moriquendi Thingol, father of Luthien and husband of Melian the fair Maia. That damn Girdle kept him at bay. Pleasing though was the number of elves he had captured, in particular Findwuilas, a fair and pretty Sindar. Now amongst his host of creatures dark and fair, 3rd in stature was in Morgoth's service a Maia called Vardika. VArdika had once been a servant of Niniel (bare in mind neither I (Anna) nor I (Heather) have the read the book in 2 weeks and we lost our copy so this is all from memory.). The Valar Niniel (not to be confused with Turin Tarambar's wife Nienor) had the power to heal things through tears but like Morgoth's chief lieutenant, the servant of smith Valar Aule (Guess who?), her gifts had been corrupted so her tears cause torture to the person upon whom they fall. Vardika's tears were falling about FIndwilas and her particular torture was (guess what?). Like his chieft lieutenant Vardika remained beautiful and unlike the aforementioned chief lieutenant kept her beauty forever, never to become hard or dark to look upon. Her tears were concentrated upon Findwilas' armpits and soft and malleable as they were, her tortured cries seemed to issue from Angband. "MAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" came the screeches that poured from her. It had been the plan of Morgoth to send out this fair maiden to the land of Odoreth where the sons of Feanor, Celebrimnor and Curufin were attempted to take. For Finrod's brother Odoreth had been widowed recently and so it seemed to all that he would be alone like his brother. The Three Noldor could easily fall to such beauty and fairness or at least be stirred into fighting. Foolish was he thought the wickedest of the sons of Feanor, Celebrimnor and Curufin. The laughter exuding from fair Findwuilas was causing her to glow. With her hands, VArdika evoked a mighty spells using her hands to increase the ticklishness of teh already highly vulnerable elf. Her fingers dug deep into her sensitive ribcage causing a verutable explosion of laughter. "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" cried the helpess Sindar. For nigh 3 years, the torture of the naked Child of Iluvitar or Eru as some elves called him, had continued without rest. And her mind was slowly whittled away. The awful torture seemed worse since her delicate arches and soles were being tortured by the many machines that had poured from Angband causing the darkness smoke around. A child of Ungoliant, a female called Myroka who had returned to the service of Morgoth post the death of Ungoliant, wound web of ticklishnes around fair Idril who had been caught making her way to Elu Thingol, hoping to improve relations with him and his kin. Idril's hair shone like spun gold, while her fair blue eyes, unusual for a blonde haired elf sparkled like satrs in the sky. Of course, now liek Findwuilas, Idril was just a tortured creatures at the mercy of a creature whose hungered now for meat, but for the anguish of others and with fair Idril this was achieved. "WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!" howled the suffering child of Turgon, lord of GOndolin. Her soles were being tortured by the web sending ticklish sensation through her. "WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" she cried. Her innocnet and untouched vagina was similarly being examined thoroughly which would have led to monaing but for the power of Myroka absorb any pleasure which would come out as light. Her rear end was being tortured so badly that eventually her body sweat caused it to redden and more anguish befell her. The long tentacles were feeling a variety of areas in Idril's upper body including the underarms, ribcage, belly, breasts and navel. Morgtoh took great delight in the torture of the elves. A thought occured to him. He turned to the vast library which he had stolen from Manwe and the Valar. The texts involving the various worlds of the Inner Dimensions before the war eliminated the humans and demons. Stories about girls called Slayers, and girl who could communicate with teh dead, about warriors and knights and a unique breed of humans who the witches wiped out called Wizards. He read about the dead, poltergeist, ghosts and reapers. And tickling of female had been a common punishment. He was most interested in prophecies desring the wisdom of Mandos, who knows all. A series of prophecies book written by a warrior called Tolkien fascinated him. One in particular had insipred him the one in which Morgoth was a feature. The silmarillion. By using this book, he was able to make decisions and avoid errors he would have made. Yet in spite of what happened in the book, Morgoth noted protecting his feet from Fingolfin had failed and 3 of the toes missing from his left foot remained gone. Nonetheless, the 4th battle and the scattering of the land of Beleriand had worked quite well. And Dagleb Ertrab, the 5th had been also decisive though the land of Odoreth remained. The book was not always accurate but that was of course, because Morgoth avoided any error he could have made. Or most, yet the lost of teh Silmaril may prove valuable since it would lead to the fall of Elu Thingol. He listened still to the howls of the women and wished only that fair Luthien, her beloved Narwil and foe Melian would join them soon. Findwuilas was still in rapture of pain as her bottom was now subject to a thorough ticklish probing. "WAHAHAHAHAHAHANOOOAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" she creeched as the feverous pitch seemed never ending. The tears dropping on her rear end, was cuaisng tears of suffering from FIndwuilas. some of Vardika's tears found their way between the cheeks, to increased shouts. Some to her untouched private part. But the roaring sounds that seemed never to cease from the parched throat continued its cruel descent and long would it go on. Morgoth smiled. Despite Vardika's decision that he knew of to wait for a victor should war erupted between he and his lieutenant, a war Morgoth expected, he trusted she would side with him due to his current greater strength that he knew in time, that would not be the case. In the mean time, Findwuilas and Idril would continue to suffer!
The End
Love,
Anna and Heather
P.S We are considering writing one where Luthien and Narwil get theres' let us know! We hope not to get betaresponses as we always try to be as accurate as possible (though clearly we had to make some alterations, the capture of Idril, the lack of men like Beren, Turin, Hurin, Morwen (mother of Turin), Nienor (Turin's sister), the lack of Findwuilas' death, addition of the two ticklers and of course, we remained unsure of the name of the tear healing Valar and the Great Worm)
Year: 50000 AD
Morgoth, Lord of Angband and The Dark Power of Middle Earth, contemplated his next move. In this world, long after the dominion of witches, demons and Humans (both the latters extinct) had ended, war between good and evil and between races nonetheless continued. With the orcs, Balrogs and other foul things, things were going well for the evil former Valar. The death of many of the Noldor, such as Finwe, Feanor and Fingolfin as well as brave Finrod, wisest and most kind of all the Noldor and the theft of Feanor's sacred Silmarils brought joy to this heart. Nonetheless the theft of one of the silmarils by Luthien and her beloved Narwil (female Noldor, whose eyes shine with the light of Valinor) galled at him. Also galling the lost of his favourite servant the sire of the wolves. Gothmog and Glaurung, the lord of the Balrogs and Dragons respectively remained at his side. Still he needed to find a way to finally annihilate Odoreth, son of Finarfin and mighty Fingon, Lord of the Noldor. Also on his mind was Turgon, brother of Fingon whose home's locaion remained a mystery. Enemy also was the Moriquendi Thingol, father of Luthien and husband of Melian the fair Maia. That damn Girdle kept him at bay. Pleasing though was the number of elves he had captured, in particular Findwuilas, a fair and pretty Sindar. Now amongst his host of creatures dark and fair, 3rd in stature was in Morgoth's service a Maia called Vardika. VArdika had once been a servant of Niniel (bare in mind neither I (Anna) nor I (Heather) have the read the book in 2 weeks and we lost our copy so this is all from memory.). The Valar Niniel (not to be confused with Turin Tarambar's wife Nienor) had the power to heal things through tears but like Morgoth's chief lieutenant, the servant of smith Valar Aule (Guess who?), her gifts had been corrupted so her tears cause torture to the person upon whom they fall. Vardika's tears were falling about FIndwilas and her particular torture was (guess what?). Like his chieft lieutenant Vardika remained beautiful and unlike the aforementioned chief lieutenant kept her beauty forever, never to become hard or dark to look upon. Her tears were concentrated upon Findwilas' armpits and soft and malleable as they were, her tortured cries seemed to issue from Angband. "MAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" came the screeches that poured from her. It had been the plan of Morgoth to send out this fair maiden to the land of Odoreth where the sons of Feanor, Celebrimnor and Curufin were attempted to take. For Finrod's brother Odoreth had been widowed recently and so it seemed to all that he would be alone like his brother. The Three Noldor could easily fall to such beauty and fairness or at least be stirred into fighting. Foolish was he thought the wickedest of the sons of Feanor, Celebrimnor and Curufin. The laughter exuding from fair Findwuilas was causing her to glow. With her hands, VArdika evoked a mighty spells using her hands to increase the ticklishness of teh already highly vulnerable elf. Her fingers dug deep into her sensitive ribcage causing a verutable explosion of laughter. "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" cried the helpess Sindar. For nigh 3 years, the torture of the naked Child of Iluvitar or Eru as some elves called him, had continued without rest. And her mind was slowly whittled away. The awful torture seemed worse since her delicate arches and soles were being tortured by the many machines that had poured from Angband causing the darkness smoke around. A child of Ungoliant, a female called Myroka who had returned to the service of Morgoth post the death of Ungoliant, wound web of ticklishnes around fair Idril who had been caught making her way to Elu Thingol, hoping to improve relations with him and his kin. Idril's hair shone like spun gold, while her fair blue eyes, unusual for a blonde haired elf sparkled like satrs in the sky. Of course, now liek Findwuilas, Idril was just a tortured creatures at the mercy of a creature whose hungered now for meat, but for the anguish of others and with fair Idril this was achieved. "WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!" howled the suffering child of Turgon, lord of GOndolin. Her soles were being tortured by the web sending ticklish sensation through her. "WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" she cried. Her innocnet and untouched vagina was similarly being examined thoroughly which would have led to monaing but for the power of Myroka absorb any pleasure which would come out as light. Her rear end was being tortured so badly that eventually her body sweat caused it to redden and more anguish befell her. The long tentacles were feeling a variety of areas in Idril's upper body including the underarms, ribcage, belly, breasts and navel. Morgtoh took great delight in the torture of the elves. A thought occured to him. He turned to the vast library which he had stolen from Manwe and the Valar. The texts involving the various worlds of the Inner Dimensions before the war eliminated the humans and demons. Stories about girls called Slayers, and girl who could communicate with teh dead, about warriors and knights and a unique breed of humans who the witches wiped out called Wizards. He read about the dead, poltergeist, ghosts and reapers. And tickling of female had been a common punishment. He was most interested in prophecies desring the wisdom of Mandos, who knows all. A series of prophecies book written by a warrior called Tolkien fascinated him. One in particular had insipred him the one in which Morgoth was a feature. The silmarillion. By using this book, he was able to make decisions and avoid errors he would have made. Yet in spite of what happened in the book, Morgoth noted protecting his feet from Fingolfin had failed and 3 of the toes missing from his left foot remained gone. Nonetheless, the 4th battle and the scattering of the land of Beleriand had worked quite well. And Dagleb Ertrab, the 5th had been also decisive though the land of Odoreth remained. The book was not always accurate but that was of course, because Morgoth avoided any error he could have made. Or most, yet the lost of teh Silmaril may prove valuable since it would lead to the fall of Elu Thingol. He listened still to the howls of the women and wished only that fair Luthien, her beloved Narwil and foe Melian would join them soon. Findwuilas was still in rapture of pain as her bottom was now subject to a thorough ticklish probing. "WAHAHAHAHAHAHANOOOAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" she creeched as the feverous pitch seemed never ending. The tears dropping on her rear end, was cuaisng tears of suffering from FIndwuilas. some of Vardika's tears found their way between the cheeks, to increased shouts. Some to her untouched private part. But the roaring sounds that seemed never to cease from the parched throat continued its cruel descent and long would it go on. Morgoth smiled. Despite Vardika's decision that he knew of to wait for a victor should war erupted between he and his lieutenant, a war Morgoth expected, he trusted she would side with him due to his current greater strength that he knew in time, that would not be the case. In the mean time, Findwuilas and Idril would continue to suffer!
The End
Love,
Anna and Heather
P.S We are considering writing one where Luthien and Narwil get theres' let us know! We hope not to get betaresponses as we always try to be as accurate as possible (though clearly we had to make some alterations, the capture of Idril, the lack of men like Beren, Turin, Hurin, Morwen (mother of Turin), Nienor (Turin's sister), the lack of Findwuilas' death, addition of the two ticklers and of course, we remained unsure of the name of the tear healing Valar and the Great Worm)
