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Hey, been a long time since I wrote a tickling story. READ THE NOTES AND WARNINGS CAREFULLY.
Note: This is loosely based on the story from Fatal Frame II: Crimson Butterfly. Most of the characters aren't mine (Kyoko is) or aren't named in the game, but I give them names here. Just so you know, I plan to go from before the ritual, to the ritual, to it's aftermath, and also to when Mio & Mayu enter the village. (for those who have played the game) This should be a long one... Obviously, stuff from the game has been changed, altered, or added in.
Warning: Sister incest (don't like, don't read, I'm telling you this now) f/f, nudity, sexual themes, kind of disturbing-ness (tickled to death -not in this chapter, though) and... yeah.
PROLOGUE
In a small village, hidden from everyone, terrible rituals were said to be carried out to appease demons that dwelled near the village. It was said that those sacrificed would have known of their eventual death, and that they were prepared for their fate since their birth. Their fate? To be tickled to death.
Two twin shrine maidens would be kept since their birth to be sacrificed for the good of the village. The elder twin - which was the twin that was born second - would tickle the youngest twin, the twin that was born first. When the youngest twin died, the elder twin would then be tickled to death by the Ceremony Master's wife. Of course, not every ritual would go smoothly, so various villagers were trained to "step in" and tickle the victims along with the torturer.
It was a gruesome fate, to be sure, but the village agreed that it was better to sacrifice the few for the good of the many. They could count on the twins carrying out their duties for the village.
They didn't count on Sae and Yae Kurosawa.
CHAPTER 1: Training Before the Ritual
Sae tried to back away, as her sister Yae stuck her hands up her top and under her arms.
"Please," she managed to squeak, "not my armpits, Yae! I hate it!"
Yae smiled and paused. "Well, I guess...." She saw her sister relax. "I'll have to tickle there!" She dug her fingers in Sae's soft armpit, relishing her sister's shrieks of laughter.
"PLE-HEASE! AHAHAAHA! Y-YAE! DOHOHON'T! PLEHEHESSE!! NOT THERE!"
Sae continued shrieking, collapsing against the wall, letting Yae sit down on the floor and tickle.
Yae stopped tickling Sae's armpit, and pulled her shirt up to her chest. She began scratching her stomach with a fingernail, causing a stacatto of giggles from her younger sister.
"Does it tickle, Sae? Tell me how much it tickles, and maybe I'll stop!" She spider-tickled her sister's stomach, struggling to keep her hands on the writhing girl.
"IT TIHIHIHICKLES!! PLEASE! AHAAHAAAHAHAHA! NOHOHOO! AHAHAAHA! MOHOHORE!"
Sae began coughing, and Yae stopped tickling. She always stopped when Sae couldn't breathe.
"Are you all right?" Yae put an arm on her sister's shoulder.
The younger twin, panting, looked up at her sister. Yae noticed that Sae's nipples were poking against her thin shirt. She grinned and reached out, grabbing her sister's nipples through the shirt. She gently rolled them between her fingers, noticing that Sae closed her eyes, and was breathing in shallow breaths. Yae suddenly tickled the sides of Sae's breasts.
Sae yelped, and frowned. "Yae! Don't do that!" Her face was red. " I hate it when you tickle me there... It's enough that I get tickled by the villagers down there, now you too?!" She stood up and stormed out of the room.
Yae started to go after her, but was stopped by a rough grip on her should. She turned around. It was Kyoko, the wife of the Ceremony Master. She was in her mid-20s, only a few years older than Sae and Yae. She was beautiful, but had a very stern appearance about her.
"I need to train," Kyoko said, "And it'd best be on you. I need to learn your weak spots, so that I can..." She trailed off, but grabbed Yae's arm and pulled her along. "It's best that we tie you up for this, you know. Besides, my husband told me a new kind of tickling that interests me. I'm sure it interested you, with Sae, hmm?" Kyoko grinned, revealing that she had been watching Yae tickle Sae.
Yae cringed. She certainly didn't like the sound of that, and she sure as hell didn't want Kyoko touching her there. But she couldn't protest once Kyoko bound her naked tightly to a board on the floor, with her legs spread wide open. Yae was then silenced with a wooden gag, which kept the loudest screams to a whisper.
Kyoko placed a blindfold on Yae's eyes. "I don't want you seeing anything..." It was too clear that Kyoko enjoyed her duty torturing Yae, even though in the end she would tickle her to death. 'No matter,' Kyoko thought. 'There will be other girls after this one.'
Unknown to Yae, Kyoko pulled a few instruments out of a box. The first was a fluffy white feather. Kyoko smiled and laid on the floor, placing her head within inches of Yae's womanhood. She began trailing the feather around the area, but frowned when the black curls of hair got in the way. She pouted, but got an idea and stood up.
"I'll be right back, sweety... We've got to get rid of that hair if we're going to torture you properly."
Yae tensed. 'What?! She can't do that!' She began squirming in her bonds, pulling at the rope that held her. To no avail, however, as she knew Kyoko tied her with the best knots in the village.
Kyoko returned with a shaving blade, water, and a cream she used to keep her skin soft. She noticed Yae's struggles, and patted her mound in the way one pats a dog. "Don't worry, Yae! Just don't move and you won't get cut. I can't wait to see how it looks naked..."
Yae felt a tear roll down the side of her face as Kyoko splashed her vagina with water, then began lathering it with her face cream. She tensed when she felt the cold blade on her, and cried silently as she felt it shave away her pubic hair.
After a few minutes, Yae's womanhood was completely bald. Kyoko splashed more water on it, and once again laid in between Yae's legs.
"Very good, Yae! It looks like a baby's!" She ignored Yae's muffled sob and pulled out her fluffy white feather. She licked her lips and ran the fluffy edge along the top of Yae's pussy. She wasn't prepared for the reaction.
Yae screamed, loud even through the gag, and pulled the ropes as hard as she could. With some unknown strength, the ropes snapped and Yae was free. With the speed of lightning, she scrambled to her feet, ripped off the blindfold, and ran out of the shed that she was in.
It wasn't 3 seconds later that she regretted it.
Three male villagers saw her run out of the shed, naked, sweating, and gagged. They immedietly knew that something was wrong. They grabbed her arms, and laughed when she tried to kick away. Kyoko walked out of the building and stood in front of the struggling Yae.
"Tsk, tsk, Yae. You're forgetting your duty. Though, ah..." She pointed out Yae's rigid nipples, "You're obviously enjoying yourself." The male villagers laughed, and one even fondled her breast roughly. "You've been a bad girl," Kyoko said, "And you have to be punished!" She reached out and pinched Yae's nipples. Yae groaned behind the gag. "Thank you, gentlemen. Please escort Miss Yae back into the building? And it would be kind if one of you could fetch the chains from the Temple. I have something to do quickly..." Kyoko walked off into the Kurosawa house.
Yae was soon bound, spread eagle, inside the shed. The chains allowed for more movement, but no chance of freedom. She was waiting for Kyoko to return.
When she did, Yae's eyes were wide with surprise. After Kyoko, walked in Sae... she was holding the fluffy white feather. She was smiling wickedly.
"It's called revenge, dear sister. And I'm gonna love it!'
-TBC
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PLEASE comment with critiques, suggestions, etc. Mindless praise is okay, but I prefer suggestions/etc. No flames for incest, please, because I warned you.
Also, if any of you are fans of the game, feel free to give any suggestions for characters you want included eventually
P mmm already planning for Woman in Box) or any thing you might like to see as an homage to the game. Thanks!!
AN IMPORTANT QUESTION, though a weird one: I'm having a hard time deciding on what to call a vagina in a story. Vagina seems too... I dunno, non-sexual? Pussy seems vulgar, womanhood is boring if used over and over, and I will die before I write anything involving the word cave. ... LOL. This is weird. Anyway, does anyone have any help for me?
Note: This is loosely based on the story from Fatal Frame II: Crimson Butterfly. Most of the characters aren't mine (Kyoko is) or aren't named in the game, but I give them names here. Just so you know, I plan to go from before the ritual, to the ritual, to it's aftermath, and also to when Mio & Mayu enter the village. (for those who have played the game) This should be a long one... Obviously, stuff from the game has been changed, altered, or added in.
Warning: Sister incest (don't like, don't read, I'm telling you this now) f/f, nudity, sexual themes, kind of disturbing-ness (tickled to death -not in this chapter, though) and... yeah.
PROLOGUE
In a small village, hidden from everyone, terrible rituals were said to be carried out to appease demons that dwelled near the village. It was said that those sacrificed would have known of their eventual death, and that they were prepared for their fate since their birth. Their fate? To be tickled to death.
Two twin shrine maidens would be kept since their birth to be sacrificed for the good of the village. The elder twin - which was the twin that was born second - would tickle the youngest twin, the twin that was born first. When the youngest twin died, the elder twin would then be tickled to death by the Ceremony Master's wife. Of course, not every ritual would go smoothly, so various villagers were trained to "step in" and tickle the victims along with the torturer.
It was a gruesome fate, to be sure, but the village agreed that it was better to sacrifice the few for the good of the many. They could count on the twins carrying out their duties for the village.
They didn't count on Sae and Yae Kurosawa.
CHAPTER 1: Training Before the Ritual
Sae tried to back away, as her sister Yae stuck her hands up her top and under her arms.
"Please," she managed to squeak, "not my armpits, Yae! I hate it!"
Yae smiled and paused. "Well, I guess...." She saw her sister relax. "I'll have to tickle there!" She dug her fingers in Sae's soft armpit, relishing her sister's shrieks of laughter.
"PLE-HEASE! AHAHAAHA! Y-YAE! DOHOHON'T! PLEHEHESSE!! NOT THERE!"
Sae continued shrieking, collapsing against the wall, letting Yae sit down on the floor and tickle.
Yae stopped tickling Sae's armpit, and pulled her shirt up to her chest. She began scratching her stomach with a fingernail, causing a stacatto of giggles from her younger sister.
"Does it tickle, Sae? Tell me how much it tickles, and maybe I'll stop!" She spider-tickled her sister's stomach, struggling to keep her hands on the writhing girl.
"IT TIHIHIHICKLES!! PLEASE! AHAAHAAAHAHAHA! NOHOHOO! AHAHAAHA! MOHOHORE!"
Sae began coughing, and Yae stopped tickling. She always stopped when Sae couldn't breathe.
"Are you all right?" Yae put an arm on her sister's shoulder.
The younger twin, panting, looked up at her sister. Yae noticed that Sae's nipples were poking against her thin shirt. She grinned and reached out, grabbing her sister's nipples through the shirt. She gently rolled them between her fingers, noticing that Sae closed her eyes, and was breathing in shallow breaths. Yae suddenly tickled the sides of Sae's breasts.
Sae yelped, and frowned. "Yae! Don't do that!" Her face was red. " I hate it when you tickle me there... It's enough that I get tickled by the villagers down there, now you too?!" She stood up and stormed out of the room.
Yae started to go after her, but was stopped by a rough grip on her should. She turned around. It was Kyoko, the wife of the Ceremony Master. She was in her mid-20s, only a few years older than Sae and Yae. She was beautiful, but had a very stern appearance about her.
"I need to train," Kyoko said, "And it'd best be on you. I need to learn your weak spots, so that I can..." She trailed off, but grabbed Yae's arm and pulled her along. "It's best that we tie you up for this, you know. Besides, my husband told me a new kind of tickling that interests me. I'm sure it interested you, with Sae, hmm?" Kyoko grinned, revealing that she had been watching Yae tickle Sae.
Yae cringed. She certainly didn't like the sound of that, and she sure as hell didn't want Kyoko touching her there. But she couldn't protest once Kyoko bound her naked tightly to a board on the floor, with her legs spread wide open. Yae was then silenced with a wooden gag, which kept the loudest screams to a whisper.
Kyoko placed a blindfold on Yae's eyes. "I don't want you seeing anything..." It was too clear that Kyoko enjoyed her duty torturing Yae, even though in the end she would tickle her to death. 'No matter,' Kyoko thought. 'There will be other girls after this one.'
Unknown to Yae, Kyoko pulled a few instruments out of a box. The first was a fluffy white feather. Kyoko smiled and laid on the floor, placing her head within inches of Yae's womanhood. She began trailing the feather around the area, but frowned when the black curls of hair got in the way. She pouted, but got an idea and stood up.
"I'll be right back, sweety... We've got to get rid of that hair if we're going to torture you properly."
Yae tensed. 'What?! She can't do that!' She began squirming in her bonds, pulling at the rope that held her. To no avail, however, as she knew Kyoko tied her with the best knots in the village.
Kyoko returned with a shaving blade, water, and a cream she used to keep her skin soft. She noticed Yae's struggles, and patted her mound in the way one pats a dog. "Don't worry, Yae! Just don't move and you won't get cut. I can't wait to see how it looks naked..."
Yae felt a tear roll down the side of her face as Kyoko splashed her vagina with water, then began lathering it with her face cream. She tensed when she felt the cold blade on her, and cried silently as she felt it shave away her pubic hair.
After a few minutes, Yae's womanhood was completely bald. Kyoko splashed more water on it, and once again laid in between Yae's legs.
"Very good, Yae! It looks like a baby's!" She ignored Yae's muffled sob and pulled out her fluffy white feather. She licked her lips and ran the fluffy edge along the top of Yae's pussy. She wasn't prepared for the reaction.
Yae screamed, loud even through the gag, and pulled the ropes as hard as she could. With some unknown strength, the ropes snapped and Yae was free. With the speed of lightning, she scrambled to her feet, ripped off the blindfold, and ran out of the shed that she was in.
It wasn't 3 seconds later that she regretted it.
Three male villagers saw her run out of the shed, naked, sweating, and gagged. They immedietly knew that something was wrong. They grabbed her arms, and laughed when she tried to kick away. Kyoko walked out of the building and stood in front of the struggling Yae.
"Tsk, tsk, Yae. You're forgetting your duty. Though, ah..." She pointed out Yae's rigid nipples, "You're obviously enjoying yourself." The male villagers laughed, and one even fondled her breast roughly. "You've been a bad girl," Kyoko said, "And you have to be punished!" She reached out and pinched Yae's nipples. Yae groaned behind the gag. "Thank you, gentlemen. Please escort Miss Yae back into the building? And it would be kind if one of you could fetch the chains from the Temple. I have something to do quickly..." Kyoko walked off into the Kurosawa house.
Yae was soon bound, spread eagle, inside the shed. The chains allowed for more movement, but no chance of freedom. She was waiting for Kyoko to return.
When she did, Yae's eyes were wide with surprise. After Kyoko, walked in Sae... she was holding the fluffy white feather. She was smiling wickedly.
"It's called revenge, dear sister. And I'm gonna love it!'
-TBC
--
PLEASE comment with critiques, suggestions, etc. Mindless praise is okay, but I prefer suggestions/etc. No flames for incest, please, because I warned you.
Also, if any of you are fans of the game, feel free to give any suggestions for characters you want included eventually
P mmm already planning for Woman in Box) or any thing you might like to see as an homage to the game. Thanks!!AN IMPORTANT QUESTION, though a weird one: I'm having a hard time deciding on what to call a vagina in a story. Vagina seems too... I dunno, non-sexual? Pussy seems vulgar, womanhood is boring if used over and over, and I will die before I write anything involving the word cave. ... LOL. This is weird. Anyway, does anyone have any help for me?
