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The Devil's Fetish- Part 5

Invisible Ink

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Five parts, twenty seven pages, and 12,738 words later, we have arrived at the end. I really hope you enjoyed this series of my work. It was my first stab at Story postings.

Enjoy the finale..

Story code ?/ff

* Special thanks to Shadow Tickler's write up of Part four.


“ Vicky!!!” Karen shouted, and as she tried getting up, she realized that her own ass was trapped in what appeared to be a man made hole in the floor. Some sort of safety belt locked around her waist and couldn’t be removed without releasing the iron lock. She needed a key, but where was it? Why was her rear end sticking through a hole in the ground?? Worst of all, what was directly beneath this room?


Can you imagine the fear going through Karen’s head at that moment in time? Your best friend is naked and wrapped in a net just above you, and your ass in trapped in a hole that you could feel lead into a very cold area below. Personally, I’d have thrown in the towel hours ago. I didn’t have the strength Karen had in that moment.
Against all odds, she remained focused on the fact that her friend was in danger and she needed to get her out of it. Such a brave woman didn’t deserve this kind of treatment, and should have been held up high and honored as opposed to being sucked through that hole in the ground completely!!!

Ssssssssuuuuuuuuuuuccccccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkk

Karen’s screams were cut a little short as she was sucked down into the hole in which her butt had hung so freely. She was gone, and hadn’t left as much as a sweat drop behind. Vicky’s body suddenly felt gravity pulling against it as she too was dragged towards that hole in the ground. Her soft flesh was pulled against the net holding her and made for a very tight fit! She almost had the appearance of being in a full body fishnet stocking as she got closer and closer towards the hole. It wasn’t long before she was gulped down like a glass of water into the unknown below…


-The unknown below-

The suction had taken them deep into the soil beneath the floorboards of that old mansion. It was here that the evil forces holding this house hostage had arrived in our world. It was here that the invasion of the best Halloween party in town had started and most of the party throwers lives had ended. The house now belonged to them, as did Karen and Victoria. The enslavement ceremony was very close at hand, and these girls would never see earth again. The lady in red watched from behind a curtain of red flame as her little army of trolls and other devilish creatures securely bound both Karen and Victoria’s bodies to a pair of wooden crosses. Unlike most cross ties, their ankles met with the wrists of their outstretched arms. This held their legs far apart from each other, and exposed their most private of areas completely.


Despite the knowledge that time was of the essence, the beast insisted on giving his freshly captured cuties a test drive. From behind a wall of flames, the woman in red cast the smoke of her cigarette into the faces of the little devilish creatures kneeling before her. She watched Karen and Victoria wiggle their little rear ends about as they made foolish attempts to free themselves.

The whispering was once again all around the girls, and just like before they appeared to be alone in this torch lit cave. The lady in red already had her turn with the humans, so she assumed the role of the spectator. Without warning, the large wall of the cave to the farthest left began rumbling and tumbling as if an earthquake was shattering through it. Huge chunks of soiled tree roots and rocks shed off the wall as a blue light began filling the darkness. The blue light started as a hole the size of a bowling ball, but eventually grew much wider then that. It ended up the size of a three hot tubs combined after all was said and done.

The whispers were now more like gasps and moans of fear as three shadowed beings slowly came into view…


“Karen, please for…forgive me.” Victoria said, sobbing as she turned to her best friend in the world.

“Don’t start that crap with me Vicky. This isn’t the end for us. I’m going to get us out of here.” Karen shouted back, struggling with the binds she found herself in.

“Promise?” Victoria asked through tears.



Before she could answer, one of the shadowed figures stepped into the cave. It was larger then the other two, and had trails of smoke flowing it’s every step. The torch in the back ground cast a shadow on the far wall that didn’t quite match what the girls were seeing. The shadow was a tornado of fire and intensity, and looked as if it would surely rip the entire cave to shreds without even trying. The smoke trails that followed this shadow man were filled with faces and screams of a million souls. Whatever it was, its presence had frightened the whispering voices away from the scene. Karen was the first to look directly into its eyes on approach. Her throat went dry as a desert almost instantly as her eyes watered up involuntarily. She couldn’t speak, nor could she move a muscle. She was locked in a stare similar to a young deer caught in the headlights of an incoming pick up truck.

Victoria had turned her head away and tightly closed her eyes. She felt its evil in her heart, and knew they were in terrible danger. She could feel the temperature rise in the cave from the very second it had walked in. By now, she was sweating like a stuffed pig. As for the Lady in red, she was frozen with terror behind the wall of flames. The red cigarette hung from the corner of her mouth as she recognized the familiar figure and the shocking surprise of its presence. This was unexpected, and she knew the punishment for tickling the offerings before him. A few of the little imps stayed by her side, but most had run for cover within the rock landscape of this creepy cavern beneath the mansion.

The figure appeared to stop directly between both Karen and Victoria. Its coal black eyes scanned their young, tight bodies and inhaled their smells. The trails of soul smoke gathered around its feet as both arms were raised towards the quivering rear ends of each woman. They had thought that being tickled nearly to death by imps and that crafty lady in red was unbearable, but nothing in our world could have possibly prepared them for what happened next…


The shadowy figure inserted both hands into the quivering rectums of both women at the same exact time. Their reactions were shocking gasps and wide eyed stares as their rear ends were lifted higher in the air. Their stomachs churned and their hearts raced as something crept its way up their bodies from the inside. Karen was the first to react as her head rolled back and her mouth opened as wide as it could go. Her flapping tongue instantly went erect and stood straight out of her mouth. It was glowing a weird shade of pink and seemed to be getting longer and thinner.


Karen couldn’t so much as gurgle out a moan of agony as her tongue reached a length of three feet long! Victoria’s tongue twister wasn’t far behind as her head was thrown back and her mouth was spread wide open. Her tongue followed the same trail as sweet and innocent Karen’s had. The lady in red would have normally been enjoying the scene had she not knew that soon after the beast lost interest in its newest toys, she’d be the next in line.

Now, the shadowed figure used his powers to actually control their tongues as if this was some sort of crazy and highly perverted video game! Karen’s tongue recoiled and rolled down Victoria’s body until the tip reached the soles of her feet. Carefully, Karen’s long tongue flicked across the soles from left to right at speeds beyond reality. Long trails of saucy salvia were left against the bare sole with each passing.

“eeeee..ehahahoooooooaaaaa… eeeeeeehhhhaaahhaahaeeee…..”
Never in your life would you have ever seen a woman laughing and smiling and in this much pain at once. Victoria’s sorrow filled chuckles were soon accompanied by Karen as she felt Victoria’s long tongue wrap itself around her waist. With each pass around, the slithery tip tickled her flexing stomach with intensity and without mercy. She screamed, creamed, and urinated all at once at least seven times every twenty seconds.

The tongues pulled away from their tickling and once again were pointing straight towards the ceiling of the dark cavern three feet above each of the poor college co-ed’s quivering mouths. As the beast retracted both hands, their tongues slowly shrunk down to their normal sizes. Karen found herself panting and feeling overwhelmed after her body had endured so many orgasms all at once. She felt like sleeping all of the sudden, and couldn’t stop her eyes from shutting. Unfortunately, it wasn’t so easy for Victoria. She hadn’t endured the physically demanding torment like her best friend had.

“KAREN!!!!” She screamed.

Her voice echoed off the walls over and over again as the shadowed beast raised the flats of his dark hands against the soles of her white feet. She turned to his face, but found nothing in return. Despite the darkness, she felt as if there were eyes staring right at her from behind the blackness.

She was a strong woman, but found strength almost impossible to find at this moment. She had no choice but to succumb to the horrible tickling sensations that began festering on the soles of her pretty feet from the second the shadowed hands were laid on them. As the smoke from his blackened hands covered her soft, peach colored soles; the terrible feeling of having the tips of her sensitive nerve endings buzzed and irritated exploded within her mind. She was the side splitting laughter type of girl and would normally spew laughter out in loud and continuous bursts until all her energy was drained out.

She wiggled around a little and struggle with all her might before exploding with forceful shouts of uncontrollable laughter!!

“ aaaha aahaha eahea ehaeha eahhae aeha You…. You’re Sick!! Ahehae ahheae aehaea Who ever you are, you’re sick in the HEAD AHAHAEHA DAHAHAHEHAE AEAH NOO!! NO MORE!!! PLEASE!!!!”

It was beyond a sickness however. The foggy, black smoke plucked her little toes backward and slowly spread them apart to the dismay of their hysterical owner!

“ AHAHAA AAH WAWHAW WAIT!1 AHEHAE AEHAEA ::SNORT:: AHAEHAE AEHAEA EAHAEA NOT THERE! AHEAHEA EAHEHEAE AAHEHAEHA AHAHA AHAHHAHA NO NO NOO NO NO PELASE NOT THERE!! I’m begg… BEGGING YOU!!!”


It was holding back the urges to completely possess this young body and suck her soul into the parade of captured spirits already following his every move. The beast knew his orders and had been programmed to never disobey a direct command. In this case, that command was to bring two female human sacrifices into the open passage from one realm of reality to another dark and twisted form of reality.

Without warning, a blanket of heavy black smoke covered Vicky’s bucking body as if it was liquid. Every detail from a single pubic hair to her individual toenails was coated in this stuff until she was completely black. The only exception was the whites of her wide open and terrified looking brown eyes. She had an expression displayed on those pretty eyes of hers as they scanned the cavern from left to right. She was no longer in control of her own body. The menacing beast of shadows stepped away from Victoria and lifted his left arm in the air with his open palm against the center of her heaving chest. Her blackened breasts jiggled back and forth as they were parted by his heavy hand.

“Someone PLEASE save me!!!! Please help me now!!!”

I could write in a mighty hero and insert him into this story right here if I felt like it. I’d have him burst through the floors of that dark cavern and rip his way to the surface. There, the white knight would see the helpless heroines in desperate need of a hero and come to their rescue with his mighty sword and his balls of steel!
He’d slice that smoking bastard in half and sent him packing.

“BACK TO HELL WITH YE, YOU FOWL BEAST!!!”

Of course, this is an Invisible Ink story, and as you may or may not know, I don’t do happy endings…

Using his arm as some sort of cannon, the beast fired several thousand souls into the thick smoke that covered her entire naked body. Victoria’s body jiggled and wiggled as each one entered her personal space. The lost souls swirled around the smoke in a panic to find a way out! As they swam around, their auras slid up and down, inside and out, and every inch in between of the now laughing and crying captive.

“ ::snort:: ahea eahehaea eahhae ::sobbing:: aehahe ahhahahaha awhahwae ahehaw aahah ahaha WHWAHWHAW HEHEHE HHYAAAA AHAHAHWHAWHA AHHA HAWAWHAWA AHEHAEHAHHAHAE :SOBBING: “


The portal back home had begun to shrink in size, but the beast was far from finished. Watching this woman chuckle like a hyena and shake like a tree drove it wild insides and fueled his evil fires. It was an unexplainable phenomena for such a dreaded torturer of mankind to be so completely fascinated with the simple act of tickling a human female! It was so effortless, yet so devastating at the same time.

From a distance of less then two inches, he examined her quivering, smoke covered sex as the souls slid across her stomach and glided between her legs. Her clit was throbbing for release despite the many orgasms she’d been forced through already. Vicky’s mind was exhausted, and her body went limp as she continued laughing her poor little head off.

Karen was starting to come to once again, but found that seeing anything around her head was almost completely impossible. The darkness was everywhere…

“::Coughing:: Vic?? Is that you?? “

She called out in the direction of the screaming laughter.

Suddenly, a voice returned the call, but the voice wasn’t Victoria.

Be Silent. It will become obsessed with making you suffer. YOU MUST STALL HIM..
YESSSSSS. WE CAN SAVE OURSELVES.
HE WILL TAKE THE BLAME OFF US IF HE FAILS.
THIS IS THE ONLY WAY.
YESSSSS. THIS MUST HAPPEN..

The whispering voices went completely silent now. Karen turned her head towards the black smoke covering her best friend from head to toe and beckoned the beast to have a go with her body instead. It was her last hope…

“You can’t TICKLE me anymore!! I am IMMUNE to your tortures! HA!”

Such a comment normally wouldn’t have escaped through her lips, but she had no choices left now. The Portal back to their twisted realm was in fact shrinking, but just not fast enough. Her comments didn’t get much of the black beast’s attention as he sent another thousand souls into the smoke covering Vicky.

“You DON’T have what it takes, do YOU? DO YOU!!!!!!”

Her lips suddenly sealed to themselves as if her mouth was coated in a unseen glue. An unseen force was now pulling her head against the wooden cross and holding it there. Karen’s eyes were wide-eyed with terror. Be careful what you wish for Karen…


Three big, hairy spiders descended into the scene from the unknown and carefully landed on Karen’s quivering body. Goosebumps immediately spread like wild fire as her soft, peach colored skin was invaded in such an awful way. Three darkish blue spiders not of this earth tickled their way down towards her inner thighs. They slowly opened their fifteen pointed legs and began to explore the quivering Human’s body.
One of them got very curious about her vagina….

Karen’s mouth was re-opened, but her eyes were sealed shut in trade.


“ooooOOOoOOOHH!!! oOhhh god!!! What the Fuck are they!!?!! Please!! Please god, help me!!!”


The itsy, bitsy spiders climbed up her quivering thigh..
While the other big spider nested in her pussy pie…
Soon, sixteen others joined in on the fun..
And now poor little Karen’s nightmare had just begun…


She trembled and struggled at first. She then wiggled her butt back and forth and swayed left to right. Those spiders weren’t going anywhere. She wasn’t laughing at all, but Karen didn’t look as though she could hold herself back much longer. Her eyes watered as drool rolled down her chin. She looked horrified, and the spiders seemed to enjoy her misfortune.

“ AAHEA EAHAEA AHAHE AEHAAAAAAH AAHAH WWAAAAAAAHHH! AHEHAE AHAHE EHEHEA EAHHEA AEHAHEA EHAEA NOO!!! HAEHA AEHAHEAHH NO!!!”


Victoria was beside herself with side splitting laughter as nearly three thousand souls glided across her body as they searched for a way out. The portal shrunk down once again. The two figures standing at its entrance beckoned their third partner and insisted he return with the women. His fetish, his obsession with making an unwilling captive spill the laughs had consumed all of him now. Nothing could have changed his course of action. This was Karen’s time to be that heroine they so badly deserved.

As the sixteen spiders played on her body, she cried mournful tears, but never laughed once. A few spiders found comfort between the bouncing cheeks of her spread open buttocks while others crawled over her bouncing breasts and perked nipples. The beast saw that she was much tougher then her cackling partner. This seemed to excite him even more…

With the snap of his fingers, it retracted the smoke screen covering Vicky and once again inserted his hand into her exposed rectum. Just like before, he would be the puppeteer, and her tongue would play the marionette.

‘OOOoooouuu uuugghhhhhhhhh!!!!”

Victoria’s tongue grew to the length of eight feet and split down the center. She groaned and grunted, but was at the Beast’s full mercy. Like eels, the tongues slithered across Karen’s body and wrapped around her legs, and headed up for the pretty white soles of her feet.

Block it out sensitive girl.
Be strong.
Not much longer now.
Yesssssss. You are doing well.


Doing well??! EASY for those whispering bastards to say! She was covered with tickly spiders, and now had two slippery tongues licking the balls of her wriggling feet. She was supposed to be doing well??!?

Time was running out for the torturer as the portal shrunk once again. Karen’s own tongue was hanging from the side of her mouth as Victoria’s longer tongues wrapped around the arches of both her feet at once. The woman in red knew that Karen was on the ropes now. Things got worse when one of the tongue halves was now delving into her most private of parts! She was working her trembling clit from left to right without a second of hesitation!

The portal home was closing further still and she had to make it through no matter what. Time was running out for the lovely lady in red, and there would be no second chance. As Karen’s head rolled back as her body endured six straight orgasms in a row, The lady in red gracefully carved through the wall of flames she’d been enjoying the show from and made a mad woman dash towards the diminishing circle. The beast watched her approach, but kept his focus on bringing his little human to her ultimate levels of sanity. He had to satisfy his Fetish…

Like a blur of red, the devilish woman flew past the cross captives and the tickling monster with speeds beyond the boundaries of our reality. A few more steps and she’d be home free. She hadn’t expected his fast moving left hand to grab her by the tail and yank it back towards him with a fierce rage and incredible strength.

“NOO!!!!” She wailed as she was dragged through the dirt. She screamed loud enough for all of earth’s people to hear as she tumbled into the rocky surroundings of this cavern beneath the surface.

It was too late now. The Portal had finally closed. The Beast’s fetish had cost him his existence simply because he couldn’t survive in this realm without refreshing himself through the portal every thirty six hours, like the little imps and lumbering invisible giants had done. As if to accept his fate, the beast lowered to its knees as his body turned to black sand. He was done for, and the co-ed’s punishment had finally come to an end. The lady in red wasn’t as accepting of her fate. She pathetically crawled towards a non-existent exit as her body slowly crumbled into mounds of burning ashes. The reddish glow they gave off was kind of romantic, and would be perfect to make out near by. As her ashes burned out, those weird whispers slowly died with her. The cavern was once again silent.

Victoria turned to Karen and for the first time in a long time, she smiled for reasons of happiness as opposed to having the snot tickled out of her. Karen met her with the same look on her face of pure relief. They survived one of Hell’s top dogs, and were going to live to tell about it. No one would ever believe the foolish story anyway, but why ruin that moment for them.

Unfortunately, the reality of that happy moment was that they were both STILL bound securely to those wooden crosses located miles and MILES below the surface. How long till help found them down here anyway? Would anyone even THINK to look down there in the first place??

Their smiles had faded away already as their overly exposed rear ends wriggled back and forth as they desperately struggled for their rightfully earned freedom. All that personal struggle, torment, and overcoming of all odds was one hell of a challenge! Now this??!! What sort of sick bastard writes this kind of thing!?

In the darkness behind the naked co-eds and all around them, several pairs of glowing yellow eyes peered at the girls from behind rocks scattered all around.
They weren’t alone in that cavern after all. It appears a few “ little things” were accidentally left behind with thirty six hours of free time on those tickling claws of theirs…..


The end.
 
that was totally awesome. you are so very creative invisible ink. although i hate crawly things and the thought of spiders crawling on bodies, it was very well written and humorous as well in parts. wherever did you come up with this idea? quite imaginative.

isabeau :upsidedow
 
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isabeau{E} said:
that was totally awesome. you are so very creative invisible ink. although i hate crawly things and the thought of spiders crawling on bodies, it was very well written and humorous as well in parts. wherever did you come up with this idea? quite imaginative.

isabeau :upsidedow

Thanks for taking the time to respond to this story by the way! I'm glad it sort of creeped you out as well as kept you interested. I was going for that effect! As for the ideas, I get inspiration from the smallest of things that are all around me everyday. To be honest with you, I was inspired to finish The Royal Tickler and her Ticklish Prisoners because of your comments.

Thanks for the help!
 
wow thanks invisible ink now i;ll read all your stories. i read all of devils fetish because Shadowtklr told me he wrote part four. keep writing and i';ll keep reading.

isabeau :bouncybou
 
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