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eviltickler20
10-03-2005, 01:13 PM
Hey all! This weekend, I wrote four stories and I think they turned out really well. Just let me know what you think.
theatergoer
10-03-2005, 02:28 PM
Why is it that at the end of every story, you say that the victim was sexually assaulted, as a sort of toss off? It's kinda nasty and casual, and an unnecessary way to end otherwise passable stories?
eviltickler20
10-03-2005, 06:27 PM
Why is it that at the end of every story, you say that the victim was sexually assaulted, as a sort of toss off? It's kinda nasty and casual, and an unnecessary way to end otherwise passable stories?

Because I didn't know how else to end the story. Honestly! I suppose I could delete that part out of the stories.

EDIT: The whole 'sexually assaulted' thing has been deleted from the stories. If there are anymore problems, I'd be more than happy to modify them.