My new stories!

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Lilmissticklishfeet

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• Oct 3, 2005

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Hey all! This weekend, I wrote four stories and I think they turned out really well. Just let me know what you think.

 

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Just a thought ......

Why is it that at the end of every story, you say that the victim was sexually assaulted, as a sort of toss off? It's kinda nasty and casual, and an unnecessary way to end otherwise passable stories?

 

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theatergoer said:

Why is it that at the end of every story, you say that the victim was sexually assaulted, as a sort of toss off? It's kinda nasty and casual, and an unnecessary way to end otherwise passable stories?

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Because I didn't know how else to end the story. Honestly! I suppose I could delete that part out of the stories.

EDIT: The whole 'sexually assaulted' thing has been deleted from the stories. If there are anymore problems, I'd be more than happy to modify them.