Start of an untitled tickle-machine story (*/f)

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Wildtime

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Great start! I can hardly wait to see the machine in action.

 

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Excellent - that's the kind of writing I like to see - well thought out, well written, wonderful promise of things to come - great!

 

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So Far , So Good ...

I like it so far , Sablesword.

 

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I think what attracted me to read this first part was the whole 'tickle-MACHINE' aspect & the fact that it was '*/f'. Being that there are really no such things as 'tickle-machines' , this story's "title" promises something fantastic ... fantastic meaning out-of-the-ordinary. There are tons of stories that are m/f or f/f ( & those are all great , I LOVE them ) , but I think that when a story is */f , it gives the reader a chance to use their imagination a little more & ( pardon the pun ) tickle their fantasy ..... being that most people can relate to or at least put themselves in a m/f or f/f situation. I guess I'm attracted to the possibilities of machine-tickling or */f tickling more so than the "standard" m/f , f/f stuff.

 

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i like the idea of a tickling machine sometimes. would be fun to be able to be tickled like that when no one is available to do it for you. however i would prefer human fingers hehe

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I'm always a sucker for new and unusual forms of tickling. The tickle-machine aspect is what really drew me in...speaking of which, maybe you should just call your story The Tickle Machine--it's short, sweet and to the point.

As for "Gambling Stocks", I just finished reading it and loved the alien concept.

 

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its a GREAT start

i just MELT for tickle machines *giggles* theres something just so frightening about a machine that would be able to tickle all your worst spots and NEVER stop...but also just SO naughty and exciteing at the same time because youre so helpless tothe machine *blushing* PLEASE keep going... *giggles*