sleepy tickling

spongeb · Dec 20, 2005

a few years ago i was staying at my friend jens house, we were playing when we heard her mom go to bed, jens mom had the cutest feet ever, so i said to jen you want to tickle your moms feet when she is sleeping, jen agreed we pulled backthe cover revealling her soles. i took my finger and started tickling her she gave a few twitches then jenand me lockedher ankles in our arms and tickled hersoles for a good fifteen minutes before she got loose.

does any oneelse have any stories like this if so could you reply in detail

kahoshiden · Dec 20, 2005

Take your own advice man, that story was weak.

some1somewhere · Dec 21, 2005

kahoshiden said:
Take your own advice man, that story was weak.

I wouldn't say that, it was just quick and to the point. What he should have done was gone into more detail as to the reason he was there, what was the conversation like, how he creeped into the room with her mom, what was her expression when she woke up, what did she say, how did she struggle, etc. In otherwords, constructive suggestions. This is only his second post, he'll get better as he posts more.

Josephite · Dec 22, 2005

kahoshiden said:
Take your own advice man, that story was weak.

Sorry, but I agree with him. That wasn't a story. It was more of a request. Oh well, happy Christmas anyway. :santasmil

spongeb · Dec 22, 2005

appologie

im sorry a bout the weak post but ive only just joined in and am an amature to telling good tickling tales,please forgive me i shall do better in the future

luvgirlsfeet · Dec 22, 2005

I think it was more of a "What Happened" rather than a story but it was good anyway :cool2:

isabeau · Dec 22, 2005

spongeb said:
im sorry a bout the weak post but ive only just joined in and am an amature to telling good tickling tales,please forgive me i shall do better in the future

it was a nice try for your first or second post. and if someone wants to make a criticism, they should at least try to tell you how to improve it. like somewhere said it could have been a bit longer with more details. but not a bad start...

isabeau

some1somewhere · Dec 22, 2005

spongeb said:
im sorry a bout the weak post but ive only just joined in and am an amature to telling good tickling tales,please forgive me i shall do better in the future

There is no reason to apologize, you did your best to tell of an event that you experienced, and invited other to join you in telling others of their stories. That is good way to start. With practice you'll do better, don't let the nay-sayers get you down.

sleepy tickling

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