Sultrybrunette
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Jumping into this with both feet. Woke up with this in my head so decided to write this story down. My first attempt and a little scary. It ended up being longer than I thought so I am breaking it down into two parts. Comments are definitely welcome.
Erin's Van Ride
The coffee shop was nestled in between a music store and a book store on the main street of Campus Town, which catered to students going to the nearby college and businesses alike. Aroma of freshly brewed coffee and just baked pastries was inviting each time the door opened and did a brisk business. As the owner, Erin was glad she found this spot. She enjoyed the success and it showed with the ready smile she had for new and regular customers alike. She especially enjoyed chatting with the regulars throughout the day.
Robert was one of those regulars. Each morning he would come in for a cup of coffee and to flirt with Erin. She recognized this but tried to keep it on a professional level while still being friendly. Whenever Erin served Robert he would playfully poke her sides and make her jump, or run his fingers down her leg and tickle behind her knee. Sometimes he would come up behind her and tickle her neck. All these things made Erin giggle but she would playfully slap his hand away while letting him know that she wasnt pleased with the familiarity he showed. She didn't understand the responses her body gave towards these brief touches but figured she was just responding to his flirting. Secretly, Robert was getting more frustrated day by day with Erin's lack of interest and decided that he needed to figure out a way to get her alone and see how she would respond to some serious tickling.
This saturday morning was starting out like all the others. Even though there was enough staff to cover, Erin still went in early to catch up on paperwork. Since she lived close to work she would walk most of the time. This morning was still cool with a hint of the heat that would come later in the day. Erin was glad she had dressed for it. She stood 5' 6" and was nicely built. She always dressed to show off her figure. This morning was no exception with a sky blue tank top and a pair of khaki shorts that hugged her curves. She rounded it off with a pair of strappy sandals. The off-red polish and ankle bracelets really showed off her size 7 feet.
As Erin walked her mind was on work and paid no attention to what was going on around her. Since it was early there was not alot of traffic. What Erin didn't notice was the van slowly following her. As she stopped to adjust one of her sandals she was grabbed from behind by someone who muffled her screams and hauled her into the back of the van. She struggled as much as she could but was no match for the guy that got ahold of her. Once in the van, she noticed a total of four guys with a combined weight of probably 850 pounds. All muscle. She knew she didnt have a chance of escaping but thought she could talk her way out. She asked questions which went unanswered. She started begging and pleading to be let go. Finally she tried threatening at which point one of the guys stuffed a rag in her mouth telling her to shut up. As the van started moving she panicked and tried to lunge for the door but didn't get very far as one guy stopped her. He told her that she would not get hurt if she sat quietly. She continued struggling so they pinned her down..one at each ankle and one at each arm. The guys decided to have a little fun so lightly started tickling under her arms and down her legs. She jumped with surprise and tried not to laugh but they could see that she was holding it in. Just then the van stopped at a secluded park. Erin had no idea what was going to happen next and was stunned when the door opened and in stepped Robert........
Erin's Van Ride
The coffee shop was nestled in between a music store and a book store on the main street of Campus Town, which catered to students going to the nearby college and businesses alike. Aroma of freshly brewed coffee and just baked pastries was inviting each time the door opened and did a brisk business. As the owner, Erin was glad she found this spot. She enjoyed the success and it showed with the ready smile she had for new and regular customers alike. She especially enjoyed chatting with the regulars throughout the day.
Robert was one of those regulars. Each morning he would come in for a cup of coffee and to flirt with Erin. She recognized this but tried to keep it on a professional level while still being friendly. Whenever Erin served Robert he would playfully poke her sides and make her jump, or run his fingers down her leg and tickle behind her knee. Sometimes he would come up behind her and tickle her neck. All these things made Erin giggle but she would playfully slap his hand away while letting him know that she wasnt pleased with the familiarity he showed. She didn't understand the responses her body gave towards these brief touches but figured she was just responding to his flirting. Secretly, Robert was getting more frustrated day by day with Erin's lack of interest and decided that he needed to figure out a way to get her alone and see how she would respond to some serious tickling.
This saturday morning was starting out like all the others. Even though there was enough staff to cover, Erin still went in early to catch up on paperwork. Since she lived close to work she would walk most of the time. This morning was still cool with a hint of the heat that would come later in the day. Erin was glad she had dressed for it. She stood 5' 6" and was nicely built. She always dressed to show off her figure. This morning was no exception with a sky blue tank top and a pair of khaki shorts that hugged her curves. She rounded it off with a pair of strappy sandals. The off-red polish and ankle bracelets really showed off her size 7 feet.
As Erin walked her mind was on work and paid no attention to what was going on around her. Since it was early there was not alot of traffic. What Erin didn't notice was the van slowly following her. As she stopped to adjust one of her sandals she was grabbed from behind by someone who muffled her screams and hauled her into the back of the van. She struggled as much as she could but was no match for the guy that got ahold of her. Once in the van, she noticed a total of four guys with a combined weight of probably 850 pounds. All muscle. She knew she didnt have a chance of escaping but thought she could talk her way out. She asked questions which went unanswered. She started begging and pleading to be let go. Finally she tried threatening at which point one of the guys stuffed a rag in her mouth telling her to shut up. As the van started moving she panicked and tried to lunge for the door but didn't get very far as one guy stopped her. He told her that she would not get hurt if she sat quietly. She continued struggling so they pinned her down..one at each ankle and one at each arm. The guys decided to have a little fun so lightly started tickling under her arms and down her legs. She jumped with surprise and tried not to laugh but they could see that she was holding it in. Just then the van stopped at a secluded park. Erin had no idea what was going to happen next and was stunned when the door opened and in stepped Robert........
Wow damn good start. Cant wait to read how the rest goes. when you said you were doing a story I didnt expect the first few paragraphs would be soo good. Keep it up...........oh and one more thing.......you think I used enuff smileys?
