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The Product, part 1

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The Product
Part 1
clean_kitchen

"...and in our next segment: Some people take skin care very seriously
while others think it's a laughing matter. We're going to look at an
amazing new breakthrough that proves them both right."

The national morning show went to commercial as its viewers continued
their morning routines. The show returned to the show's host,
Melanie, and another woman seated facing each other on a set designed
to resemble a living room.

"Welcome back. We're joined by Stephanie Cole, the inventor of an
amazing new skin care technique. Why don't you tell us about it?"

"My team and I have created a technique that is 100% effective at
rejuvenating skin. It uses a machine with specialized sensors that
turns the oldest, roughest skin soft and smooth in a single treatment."

"Our audience will be thinking that this is too good to be true, but
let's look at some before and after photos."

A series of before and after photos cycle on the screen showing
various female body parts. In every case, the "before" pictures show
skin that is rough and wrinkly, and the "after" pictures show the same
body part so soft and smooth that they appear to have been airbrushed
to make them look better.

The host continued, "I assure our audience that these photos have not
been altered in any way. We know these are actual results because the
pictures are of my own mother ... come on out, Mom."

A woman enters and sits on the couch next to Stephanie. The woman
appears far too young to be Melanie's mother.

"You look stunning, Mom."

"Thank you, and I feel great, too."

Melanie turned back to Stephanie, "Now, our audience is looking at
these results and thinking that this treatment must be very painful,
extremely expensive, or both."

"Well, neither is true. Unlike wax, acid or laser treatments, our
process is completely pain-free, and it's no less affordable than the
average trip to the beauty salon."

"So there really is no downside to all of this?"

"Well, there is one ... it tickles like crazy."

"She's not kidding," Melanie's mom chimed in, blushing slightly.

"We have a clip of part of Mom's session. Let's take a look."

The screen changed to Melanie's mom at some sort of spa, strapped to a
modified examination chair. A machine was running a collection of
small probes all over the soles, sides and tops of her feet. Toes in
homes across the country reflexively curled as they watched the
treatment. It looked like it tickled even without the woman's
laughter accentuating the point.

"Wow," Melanie continued, somewhat shaken, "that looks like quite an
ordeal. How long did that last?"

"A complete treatment on any body part takes about five minutes,
depending on the condition of the skin. I'm not going to kid your
audience: it really does tickle as bad as it looks. But five minutes
of foot tickling eliminates all signs of rough, calloused skin."

"Does it just work on feet?"

"No, our device can be safely used on any part of the body. Your mom,
for example, did a full body treatment."

"So it tickled her all over?"

"No. We recommend treating one area of the body at a time, and not
all at once. You can imagine how exhausting that could be. You mom
had two half-hour sessions."

Melanie turned to her mother. "So how was it?"

"Well, first of all, it was every bit as bad as it looked. Those
probes have a light touch, and it tickles like you wouldn't believe.
I didn't think I was going to make it."

"So was it worth it?"

"Absolutely. It was terrible when it was happening, but I couldn't be
happier with the results. I'll have the treatment again, even though
I know I'm basically signing up for tickle torture."

"Again? You mean the treatment doesn't last?"

Stephanie fielded the question. "Your skin will become old and rough
again for the same reasons it got that way in the first place. Our
process restores skin to a youthful state, but it doesn't halt the
aging process or eliminate the effects of everyday wear and tear. We
recommend monthly sessions. If you do it more often, the sessions can
be shorter."

"So you're saying that people should sign up to get tickled once a
month? That may be a hard sell."

"Women should look at as a monthly beauty treatment and not focus on
the tickling. And nobody HAS to do it. Like any treatment, you
should know what you're getting into and weigh the risks and benefits.
And because of the stress from the tickling, people with weak hearts
should consult their doctors."

"Well, thanks for visiting us this morning. I can honestly say this
is the first segment we've ever had that will leave women thinking
about signing up to get tickled. We'll be back after this."

The channel switched to commercials. Across the country, women were
trying to decide what to do with this new information. Few had ever
spent much time thinking about being tickled, aside from the occasional
attack from a husband, boyfriend or sibling. But those were attacks
they couldn't control. This would involve intentionally asking
someone to tickle them. It was a bit much to contemplate before
breakfast.

Stephanie, Melanie and her mom continued to chat off the air.

"So do you do this?" Melanie asked Stephanie.

"Yep. I have a standing appointment the first Friday of every month
-- whole body."

"I thought you said it shouldn't be done all at once."

"That's if you haven't done it for a while. Since I do it every
month, each part only takes about two minutes. That makes it doable
in one session."

"When are you going to do it?"

"Oh, I don't know. I'm too ticklish."

"Don't knock it 'till you try it. I even have a handheld unit here in
my bag. You should try it."

"Now? I have a show to do..."

A harried director rushed onto the stage and interrupted the conversation.

"Melanie, our next guest is stuck at the airport. We're on in thirty
seconds and we have no content for our segment."

Melanie thought for a second. "Yes we do; we'll continue with
Stephanie on Set 2." She turned to Stephanie, "Get your bag."

The show returned from commercial. "Welcome back. Our next guest had
to reschedule, so we're going to get a little demonstration on
Stephanie's skin treatment."

"OK," she said, now speaking to Stephanie, "I'm a customer requesting
this treatment, what happens next?"

"Well, first we would collect some basic information and do a
preliminary analysis. From this, we would recommend a treatment
plan."

"So what would you recommend for me?"

"We don't have time for an analysis here, so we'll do a demonstration
treatment based on practical considerations."

"Practical considerations?"

"Well, skin has to be bare for the treatment to work. Easiest access
would probably be to your feet."

Melanie's pulse quickened, but she maintained a cool professional
expression. "I was afraid you were going to say that." The audience
laughed. "So what do I do."

"Take off your shoes and nylons."

Melanie slid off her pumps, but had to run backstage to remove her
nylons from under her slacks. She returned and Stephanie instructed
her to lay down on the couch, face up with her feet resting on the arm
facing the audience.

"I'm going to sit on your legs since we don't have the normal restraints."

Stephanie took her position produced a device that looked like a large
spider. She set the device on an end table by Melanie's feet and
carefully aligned a series of probes around the contours of Melanie's
feet.

"Are you ready?" Stephanie asked from her position straddling
Melanie’s legs.

"First, describe what's going to happen for our audience."

"These special probes use sensors to trace all along the feet, lightly
scraping away old, dead skin. After about five minutes, her feet will
be as soft and smooth as the day she was born. Now, are your ready?"

"I can't believe I'm doing this." Melanie winced in anticipation, "Go ahead."

Stephanie flipped a switch and the probes began their work, gliding up
and down and across Melanie's feet.

Melanie's eyes popped wide open in surprise and fell immediately into
a steady stream of laughter. She struggled and flailed her arms, but
Stephanie maintained control of her legs, keeping the feet firmly
within the reach of the device.

The audience in the studio and across the country watched nervously as
the host laughed and screamed. Most of them knew what it looked like
when someone was getting tickled, and this woman was getting it good.
Each wondered what it would be like to be on that couch in Melanie's
place, most shuddering at the thought.

Melanie had managed to twist her upper body around, though her feet
had not moved. She buried her face in the pillow, clawing and
pounding on the cushion. The pillow muffled her laughter, but the
sporadic heaving of her chest and stomach left no doubt of the sounds
she was making.

The probes traced incessantly up and down her arches, perfectly and
lightly tracing the curve. Others glided along the sides and tops of
her feet like so many feathers. Even more danced on and around her
twitching toes.

Melanie couldn’t stop to decide what she thought of her situation. All
her brain could manage was to feel the tickling and wish for it to
stop.

Adding to the comedy of the scene, Stephanie provided a sort of
play-by-play of the treatment, seemingly oblivious to the effect it
was having on her volunteer.

At exactly five minutes, the machine stopped. The cameras revealed
that Stephanie's promise of incredible soft, smooth skin had been
fulfilled, but it was a few minutes before Melanie would be able to
appreciate it. She gasped and panted and giggled and regained her
composure as Stephanie removed the device.

The camera focused on Melanie, clothes in disarray and hair a mess
from the ordeal.

"We'll ... be back ... after this ...," she managed, and the station
cut to commercial.

[to be continued]
 
Very good story, I really like it.
But I hope stephanie also gets tickled
all over her body besides her feet.
Keep up the good writing. :firedevil
 
looking forward to part two.. i always get a thrill when i read a character named melanie, which happens to be my own name. and fantastic and original concept, at least for me. the fact you invent a machine that makes the skin youthful, but tickles while doing that, is a great idea.

isabeau
 
An excellent tale, very well told!

Too bad the treatment wouldn't work through the hose! (*snicker*)
 
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