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glamrockjimmy
03-24-2006, 01:39 PM
(cute celebrity) wakes up in a strange room, stripped nude and tied to a bed.
"I see you're awake" says (strange man).
"What are you going to do?" asks (cute celebrity).
"You have such cute (body part[s]), I'm going to tickle your (body part[s])."
"No! my (body part[s]) is my most ticklish spot[s]."
He tickles her.
She laughs.
She passes out/has an orgasm then passes out.
She wakes up in her bed
"Was that a dream?"

The End.

Celebfan
03-24-2006, 05:18 PM
you are a really funny guy. Why do you post something like that please give us a reply.

LD_Tickler
03-25-2006, 06:20 AM
Hah, I think he's got a point. There is a lot of unoriginal, uncreative, and painfully formulaic stories just like this floating around.

Wrathchild
03-25-2006, 06:35 AM
Hah, I think he's got a point. There is a lot of unoriginal, uncreative, and painfully formulaic stories just like this floating around.

You can say that again. :cry1:

glamrockjimmy
03-25-2006, 08:55 AM
I am terribly sorry if this offended any authors who put time and effort into their works. I am an author (who admitedly has not created any tickling fiction so maybe I should not bitch at all) and I believe that a good story is not just tickling, its plot. The authors that pull you into a scene so you can visualize everything that is going on are the true greats. The short formulaic stories are best left to fantasied beat off sessions when you don't have time for detail. And now you have a template.

LD_Tickler
03-25-2006, 09:34 AM
And for those of you wondering if I myself could do any better, you can now judge for yourself. I just finished a story that I think is pretty creative... hopefully you agree, otherwise I'll look like a big hypocrite. :-p