New Celebrity story

glamrockjimmy · Mar 24, 2006

(cute celebrity) wakes up in a strange room, stripped nude and tied to a bed.
"I see you're awake" says (strange man).
"What are you going to do?" asks (cute celebrity).
"You have such cute (body part), I'm going to tickle your (body part)."
"No! my (body part) is my most ticklish spot."
He tickles her.
She laughs.
She passes out/has an orgasm then passes out.
She wakes up in her bed
"Was that a dream?"

The End.

Celebfan · Mar 24, 2006

yeah great....

you are a really funny guy. Why do you post something like that please give us a reply.

LD_Tickler · Mar 25, 2006

Hah, I think he's got a point. There is a lot of unoriginal, uncreative, and painfully formulaic stories just like this floating around.

Wrathchild · Mar 25, 2006

LD_Tickler said:
Hah, I think he's got a point. There is a lot of unoriginal, uncreative, and painfully formulaic stories just like this floating around.

You can say that again. :cry1:

glamrockjimmy · Mar 25, 2006

I am terribly sorry if this offended any authors who put time and effort into their works. I am an author (who admitedly has not created any tickling fiction so maybe I should not bitch at all) and I believe that a good story is not just tickling, its plot. The authors that pull you into a scene so you can visualize everything that is going on are the true greats. The short formulaic stories are best left to fantasied beat off sessions when you don't have time for detail. And now you have a template.

LD_Tickler · Mar 25, 2006

And for those of you wondering if I myself could do any better, you can now judge for yourself. I just finished a story that I think is pretty creative... hopefully you agree, otherwise I'll look like a big hypocrite.

New Celebrity story

glamrockjimmy

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Celebfan

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LD_Tickler

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Wrathchild

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glamrockjimmy

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LD_Tickler

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