Well then. I'll be dammed. Look at that. LOL.
I actually thought my story about someone in a Coma was somewhat a bit more original. Is something still original if the person who follows the first person has never read, nor heard of what came first? Anyway. Sound Siren pointed me toward this and I have to agree man, this is pretty fucking awesome. It's full of wonderful humor that's a dash absent in mine. I loved it.
I LOVE the imagined fantasy girl. Love her wit, her snappyness. She reminds me a little of Harley Quinn. Playful, cute, sharp and sexy.
Looking forward to reading the other parts.
Awesome work, and, great minds? Perhaps.